Date: 10/02/08 10:58 pm Title: Forgetting
This is a really good story!! I like how Toms the victim cause Bill usualy is =P I hope Bill goes down there soon!
Date: 10/02/08 10:32 pm Title: Forgetting
aww...poor Tom.. i feel bad for him. :[ i wonder when Bill's curiosity will finally make him look inside the Cellar~~ :DDD then he can meet Tom~~ :DDD hehheheh well i can't wait for more~` :DDD *gives cookies*
Date: 10/02/08 10:06 pm Title: Forgetting
aww! you cant just leave us all hanging! lol
Date: 09/30/08 03:58 pm Title: Betrayed
I cannot wait to read more of this, so far so very good ;)
Author's Response: :) thank you! We're glad you liked it so far!
Date: 09/30/08 03:00 am Title: Betrayed
oooh! keep going!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: ^^ we definatly will!
Date: 09/29/08 09:52 pm Title: Betrayed
You must update! It's a VERY AWESOME story!!!!
Author's Response: :D danke! We will very very soon!
Date: 09/29/08 09:51 pm Title: Betrayed
*-* may I be a beta? ._. maybe lol... and tell Russia I said hi too =P fishie lubzes her ^^ *waits patiently for more*
Author's Response: maaybe ^^ :D mkay!
Date: 09/29/08 09:12 pm Title: Betrayed
continue!
Author's Response: :D will do!
Date: 09/29/08 08:34 pm Title: Betrayed
I love this and I wanna read more and more and more and more
Author's Response: :D thanks very much! Next one will be out soon!
Date: 09/29/08 08:23 pm Title: Betrayed
^^ yaaayyyy!!!! lol Fishie likie =P but I'm gonna be the critic like I always am with new stories O_O
lol I got lost at this part for a second "Outside (,) the trees where (were) moving in tine (time?) with the winds(wind's) breeze"
"didn't make scene (sense)"
"Jörg made his presents (presence)known"
And you meant "reprimanded" instead of "reprehended" right? And "outa" is actually "outta" ._. it's spelled with two t's and wherever is one word.
*cries* DDD"X I"M SORRY!!! ;__; I just tend to get annoyed with mistakes. Please don't hate me... I REALLY do love where the story is going so far and I REALLY can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: xD I dont hate you! Thanks for pointing it out! I don't have a beta...so yeah. :D danke schön. Ach ja, Russia says hi^^
Date: 09/29/08 07:53 pm Title: Betrayed
Very nice. Well written. Keep going; I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much!
Date: 09/29/08 07:32 pm Title: Betrayed
Sounds really interesting, I can't wait to read more and figure out what exactly is going on!
Author's Response: :D danke! We're really glad that you like it!