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Reviewer: highperson2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 08:49 pm Title: You Better Be Worth It.

oh dears..XDD i can feel it..too~~ XDD i still want the answer to my question~~ but i wait to see how it goes~ XDD ....on a side note..did they just ditch paying for their dinner..? D: oh!! bad!! XDD i can't wait for more~~ :33 the sexy part is coming up~~ ;DD unless he gets a random call.. bwhaha...poor Tom if that happens..

Author's Response: Awh thanks for reading and reviewing, you're always doing that for my stories so thanks so much! Well, yes, they didn't pay for dinner...Would YOU pay for dinner when Bill is begging you to sleep with him lol!? I'll try update soon darlin! xx

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 08:01 pm Title: You Better Be Worth It.

Hahahah XD Omg.

I love how nervous Bill gets ;) It's so cute! And Tom is...just...adorable, lol. It's funny how this has played out so far. Tom orginally called Bill looking for 'sexah' time, and now Bill is the main one looking for the smex XD So cute.

*THIEVES!* Hahaha. Loved it! Update soon!

Author's Response: LOL! Yep, you're totally right there! I hope you stick with this, thanks for reviewing, xx

Reviewer: pandasarelovex Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 05:37 pm Title: You Better Be Worth It.

Sneaky xD

Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the rest of this! x

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 03:45 pm Title: You Better Be Worth It.

lovely story ^^
I just can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'll try update soon! x

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 03:31 pm Title: You Better Be Worth It.

Weh-heh-heh-hell then... That was hawt! They didnt even do anything yet. :P Bill's eagerness to get Tomi to fuck him is driving me crazy - Cuz of want to do the same thing. I'm excited for when they actually do. The way you describe how Bill just does the simplest things makes me shudder, so on a whole 'notha issue (SEX!!) I'm very eager to find out how smoothly he goes through that.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you find out what you desire soon darling! I'll try update soon! Thanks for reviewing xxx

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 03:25 pm Title: You Better Be Worth It.

Great chapter =D I absolutely adore it =D *I've got a think for the word adore lately* I hope you continue soon ^^

xx Chi



Author's Response: Awh thanks, I'll try update soon! x

Reviewer: laughingatyourface Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 03:06 pm Title: Call Me.

Did I just hear something go *pop*? O_O xD

Author's Response: Haha! x

Reviewer: laughingatyourface Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 03:01 pm Title: Call Me.

Haha, anytime :P
I do love your stories, so why shouldn't I? ='D

Which reminds me, omg, how could I forget? I've forgotten to add you to my favs D:

*doing it now*

Author's Response: Awh that's so sweet, thanks so much *squeezes until she pops* LOL! Thanks again! xxx

Reviewer: laughingatyourface Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 02:58 pm Title: You Better Be Worth It.

Ahahaha, awesome :P

"So you can take a hint?"
Lol :P

Author's Response: Awh you rock, your're always reading and reviewing, so thanks darlin! x

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 02:50 pm Title: You Better Be Worth It.

YAY! DEDICATION! I miss you way more! Believe me. And your stories. :( It's so sad!

Anyway, i loved this. Bill is so sly, and then Tom is just... everything but; the complete opposite of Bill. Heh. Like with the window thing, "but without all the grace and neatness that Bill had managed" that line says it all. :')

I can't wait to get my fucking internet back so you'll update more often and so i can read these works of wonder! Seriously. Don't question me :DD

i love youuu
xxxx

Author's Response: Awh dude, your reviews put THEE phattest smile on my face, I love you loads lol! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and yes, I hope you get back soon too, I miss ya! Thanks for reviewing! xxx

Reviewer: marhea Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 02:50 pm Title: You Better Be Worth It.

I totally forgot I'd started reading this fic, but now that you've updated, I remember why I was so intrigued by it! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks darlin! I hope you stick with it! x

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 04:48 am Title: This Has Never Happened Before.

ooh, please continue!

Author's Response: I will be doing shortly! x

Reviewer: laughingatyourface Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 03:30 pm Title: This Has Never Happened Before.

ME LIKE ME LIKE ME LIKE =D
I think they moved a bit fast though, like starting to date right away. (And I kinda wanted them to have sex x''D)
But it's a good plot and I really like it :]

Author's Response: Awh well, no sex just yet! x

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/08 05:31 pm Title: This Has Never Happened Before.

I think I spotted some typos in the last part of the chapter, starting from 'you said you was different' ;) okay, this felt a bit too straight forward (I'd have made them have sex and then talk or something), but kinda good nonetheless. Let's say it cuts on anticipation ;) btw I think Bill's a bit too spoiled and bitchy for Tom though, will they click together? :O MORE!

Author's Response: They might click together, who knows!? x

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/08 05:21 pm Title: Call Me.

:O GEEZ. Have are you, magic? All of your stories are SO original and interesting! This is so exciting X3 both you and this are going to my faves, definitely ;) I like this, it's worth a lot :D btw I like Tom as a dentist o.o I'd not fear him at least XD

Author's Response: LOL! Awh, thanks for the really sweet review, I hope you enjoy the rest of this! x

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 11:04 am Title: This Has Never Happened Before.

I am indeed :]]]]]
i didn't know you'd take it this way, buuuuut me likes it :)

xxx

Author's Response: Awh, yay! Well, I'm glad its a surprise, I hope you still like it all! Thanks for reviewing! xxx

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/08 07:26 am Title: This Has Never Happened Before.

I'm in love with it ^^ Great story!! Continue soon :D

xx Chi



Author's Response: Really? Yay! I'll try update as soon as possible! x

Reviewer: abcd1234 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/08 01:29 am Title: This Has Never Happened Before.

I'm lovin it! no doubt

Author's Response: Awh good, I'll try give you a speedy update! x

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/08 01:00 am Title: This Has Never Happened Before.

wow. the whole bill&tom scene wasn't what I expected...
not in a bad way, though.
it was more akward than I thought I would be. but it worked.
I'm really looking forward to more of this!

Author's Response: Ah, remember it was Tom's first time at doing such a thing! I'll try update soon, x

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/08 12:53 am Title: Call Me.

I hate those messages from vodaphone.
the beep gets my hopes up for nothing! Dx
I'm off to read the second chapter.
I really liked this one!

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Tom lol! I'm glad you're reading and reviewing, so thanks darlin! x

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