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Reviewer: isisivery Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 11:34 am Title: Telling

post more soon

Author's Response: I promise I will!

Reviewer: Connie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 06:08 am Title: Telling

i liked it :D

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: starburst Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 05:28 am Title: Telling

It's not uncommon to know what you want to happen. I know what I want to happen with my story, but it's going to take about a year and a half in story time for it all to happen. At my current rate, I'm writing one day every few days. So mine could take a while :P

Author's Response: That's exactly what's happening to me! I've got writer's block for the next few chapters, but I have a million ideas for the story after them. Aargh! Thanks for the review!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: Irene Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/08 04:37 am Title: Telling

First of all, thank you for updating, you've been attentive with our requests (more like demands, in fact!). Secondly, your update is important, it shows some feelings growing inside her and I think I got it right that she was not going to have an abortion (?). So after you get some rest and gather your ideas, you can arrange another meeting with Bill and Tom. That will be certainly as exciting as her first meeting! "Billa"'s reaction was an important part of the story and you made it perfectly. I'll be waiting patiently,so that the update is as good.

Author's Response: No, she's not going to have an abortion. I really like the idea of Tom and Steph meeting...it adds something to it. Thank you so much for understanding and for the review. I'll update as soon as I can!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: monochromatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/08 02:39 am Title: The Meeting Part Two

NAHAHAA!!! YES! that was the perfect reaction to the pregnancy news! *snorts hysterically* omg wow hat was just too amazing XD
"Did you just...call me Billa?!" BAHAHA! LMAO wow thats totally the reaction he would have in real life too. ur storys getting so good and this chap was fantastic! cant wait for the next update :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I tried to add some humour to the chapter, and by your reaction, it might've worked! I'll update as soon as possible!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: starburst Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/08 05:37 pm Title: The Meeting Part Two

yay yay yay! That was a good reaction for Bill. I mean, what would YOU do?

Author's Response: I hnoestly don't know what I'd do. After all, I have never been in such a position. And I hope I never WILL be in a position like that. Thanks for the review, I'll update as soon as possible!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: Irene Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/08 12:58 pm Title: The Meeting Part Two

This is getting better and better. I guess I'll just have to wait patiently for the next dose.

Author's Response: Yes, I'm afraid you will have to be just a little extra patient with me. I don't know when I'll be able to post next...school and work are suckers...byt anyway, thanks for the review!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: RedBlaze19p Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/08 12:53 pm Title: The Meeting Part Two

Just gets better and better :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Loran Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/08 12:46 pm Title: The Meeting Part Two

Great, by making Bill's reaction like that. I just loved it, more?

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Honestly, I was a little sceptical about how you guys would react to my characterization of Bill. I'll update as soon as I can!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: starburst Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 02:56 pm Title: The Meeting Part One

ARGH I LOVE THE FAST UPDATE. This is a great story. Keep it coming darlin!

Author's Response: Like I said in the chapter, don't get too used to the fast updates. Otherwise you might be a little disappointed...sorry! I'll post another chapter ASAP!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: Anonimo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 01:03 pm Title: The Meeting Part One

OMG! please update...hurry i'm soo excited!

Author's Response: I will, I will! Soon! Hopefully! Just don't hurt me! Thanks for the review, by the way...XD!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: elizabe_th Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 12:38 pm Title: The Meeting Part One

How dare you to stop right there!! DX
Hhe..i love it though! So good. Keeps getting better and better. Please update ASAP xD Thanks for this great chapter btw :D xx

Author's Response: Thank you for the great review! I'm mean, I know. But I'll update soon...hopefully...XD!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: Irene Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 12:33 pm Title: The Meeting Part One

the story comes along quite well, I love it, please make an effort, you know that when you're inspired fingers just move faster!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'll update as soon as possible!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: Zombiemovie8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 11:22 am Title: The Meeting Part One

love love love :D

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: ketukas555 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 10:39 am Title: Prologue

Ehhe...love it:)

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words!

Reviewer: misfit Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 10:37 am Title: The Meeting Part One

oh no, can't leave it there. thats mean

update soon. bitte



Author's Response: Aw, since you said please...XD! I know, I know, I'm evil. I'll update soon, thanks for the review!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: misfit Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 10:32 am Title: No. Way.

Oh god, lets hope things go well when Bill gets there otherwise she is screwed

Author's Response: Ha, ha! You're back at chapter three...keep reading, you'll see what happens!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: tsumi_batsu Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 10:21 am Title: The Meeting Part One

OMG

Author's Response: My story is too good for words! ...I hope...otherwise it's too stupid to warrant anything... Thanks for the review!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

Reviewer: misfit Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 10:11 am Title: Prologue

this is going to be an interesting story, it's strange that no one has attemped a TH fiction about this before but so far so good

 



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Reviewer: monochromatic Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 08:23 am Title: The Meeting Part One

banner=awesome
story=awesomer!
plz update soon, i just cant wait to see bill's reaction to the pregnancy! xD

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Your kind words are keeping me going over here! I'll update ASAP!rnrnRegretting Crimson.

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