Date: 06/01/09 07:17 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
so i basically read this whoel thign in a day. and i love it. :] i juss wished you'd update!
Date: 04/04/09 02:44 am Title: Chapter Eleven
i just started and finished today
i love this story, it's so well written!
i dont remember if it said that this was completed or not, but i hope it doesnt end like this, i love it
Date: 04/02/09 03:28 pm Title: Chapter One
Your form buzznet right??
Date: 11/01/08 06:19 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
please update. like maybe now.
need ideas?
Umm... maybe... she could get released. But she feels paraniod about going on tour with TH again. So Tom has to choose. TH or Chessy.
Umm... maybe... she would come out almost perfectly fine. But she feels like there are more people out there. Like Lauren. But not after her. But after Tom. (DRAMATIC MUSIC HERE)
Umm... maybe... when she's released, she recieves death threats from others so she tries to kill her self to save those she loves. you can decide her fate.
will be back tomorrow with more ideas? loll
byeeeee :D -'x
Date: 11/01/08 06:19 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
please update. like maybe now.
need ideas?
Umm... maybe... she could get released. But she feels paraniod about going on tour with TH again. So Tom has to choose. TH or Chessy.
Umm... maybe... she would come out almost perfectly fine. But she feels like there are more people out there. Like Lauren. But not after her. But after Tom. (DRAMATIC MUSIC HERE)
Umm... maybe... when she's released, she recieves death threats from others so she tries to kill her self to save those she loves. you can decide her fate.
will be back tomorrow with more ideas? loll
byeeeee :D -'x
Date: 11/01/08 06:19 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
please update. like maybe now.
need ideas?
Umm... maybe... she could get released. But she feels paraniod about going on tour with TH again. So Tom has to choose. TH or Chessy.
Umm... maybe... she would come out almost perfectly fine. But she feels like there are more people out there. Like Lauren. But not after her. But after Tom. (DRAMATIC MUSIC HERE)
Umm... maybe... when she's released, she recieves death threats from others so she tries to kill her self to save those she loves. you can decide her fate.
will be back tomorrow with more ideas? loll
byeeeee :D -'x
Date: 11/01/08 06:19 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
please update. like maybe now.
need ideas?
Umm... maybe... she could get released. But she feels paraniod about going on tour with TH again. So Tom has to choose. TH or Chessy.
Umm... maybe... she would come out almost perfectly fine. But she feels like there are more people out there. Like Lauren. But not after her. But after Tom. (DRAMATIC MUSIC HERE)
Umm... maybe... when she's released, she recieves death threats from others so she tries to kill her self to save those she loves. you can decide her fate.
will be back tomorrow with more ideas? loll
byeeeee :D -'x
Date: 10/28/08 09:15 am Title: Chapter Eleven
awwwww!
and she should really be in jail...isnt it self defence?
oh well!!
very nice!
i would be the same too...
Date: 10/28/08 08:10 am Title: Chapter Eleven
omg that is really good u are a great writer
Date: 10/28/08 06:53 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Loved it I hope you update it soon.
Date: 10/28/08 01:57 am Title: Chapter Eleven
......I feel sorry for Tom.....it's like she's ruining her own life and he has to watch her do it....like she was anorexic now she just killed someone.....even though technically I would have kill that girl too.....hehe
^0^ update soon!!
Make it happy soonnnnnn!!
Date: 10/27/08 08:56 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
awww ewww i hate the way she feels
ahh she's ripping tom apart :C
Author's Response: i hope you'll keep reading, things change i promise maybe not soon but they do:]
Date: 10/27/08 08:00 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I'm not sure about this. I mean, it's original, shocking and certainly different... But it doesn't fit her personality - she cared too much up until now and this just doesn't add up. Not even when she stabbed Lauren.
Maybe it's just my dyspraxic brain, but sadly I don't know if I can carry on reading.
Even so, I think you should definately keep writing.
Author's Response: aww, im sorry. ididnt mean to confuse you. the thing is this story is very different, and i didn't want to spoil by... idk it's confused you so i'll tell you. I made her change so i could make a sequel. trust me, old Chessy... well im not going to spoil that much but i do hope you'll stick with it && i admit i've been going through rough spots (i know you can all tell) and i like to get to the point with things no fluff fillers.
Date: 10/27/08 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response: :DDD
Date: 10/27/08 07:16 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
that was weird. lol very sad but i don't understand why she doesn't love anymore.
i guess i'll just have to wait!!! hurry!
Author's Response: thankyou for wanting to still read even if you don't understand, if you have any detailed questions email me (crashcrashinlove@yahoo.com) && i can answer
Date: 10/27/08 06:45 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
omg she killed her! good 4 her!
i love ur story!!
Author's Response: thankyou:DDD
Date: 10/27/08 02:10 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
wow that was intense, she is one heavy chick, cant wait for more, i hope poor tom gets a break from all that sadness.
Author's Response: lol, onit♥rn
Date: 10/27/08 01:54 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
if you dont review i'll get you sent to prison. just stopping there is illegal ! really ! Maybe, next you could have her come out. then a few weeks later she might be pregnant :O loll, x
:) i love it x
-'x
Date: 10/27/08 01:54 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
if you dont review i'll get you sent to prison. just stopping there is illegal ! really ! Maybe, next you could have her come out. then a few weeks later she might be pregnant :O loll, x
:) i love it x
-'x
Author's Response: *hides* posting soon _Schrei! like now!
Date: 10/27/08 12:36 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
now im crying too!! thanks alot ._. don't let it be ages before you write more !!
Author's Response: aww, *huggs!* im fixing to upload again! yay, lol i don't have to work at my rents shop anymore gots free time^^