Date: 07/18/09 08:36 pm Title: suspicions.
Yes, why didn't he call? I hope there is some explaination for this.
Okay first off, this is an excellent storyline. Seriously, it's original and neatly though out.
But the way you pulled it off needs work. You need desciption. I had absolutely no idea what she looked like until you mentioned the racism, and now I only know she's black. The same goes for all the other new characters. You MUST describe things - especially people and emotions.
They way you portray characters is good, and the development is lovely. You must becareful you don't put in too many twists, because then you over compensate, but I hope you continue soon!
Date: 04/23/09 11:21 am Title: suspicions.
Keep it up :D please! x
Date: 04/22/09 12:37 am Title: suspicions.
Finally!!!! been waiting for like 6 months!
please don't forget this story! at least finish it =] for us?
Date: 04/21/09 11:22 pm Title: suspicions.
Darling! You make my day with every dedication, and I'm so greatful for having closure on this, really. Although, I wouldn't mind if you kept it going on for a while longer.
Cookies, hun, you know how much I love this and you ;-)
Date: 04/21/09 04:47 pm Title: such a pretty thing, drinking jim beam.
Hey hey:)...good to see you back here. Please keep on writting the fic.
Date: 12/20/08 06:26 pm Title: asking too much
:D Please update soon that was grrreat..
PS Glad youre ok from the op x
Date: 12/19/08 03:47 pm Title: asking too much
Sweetie!
So glad to see you're back and to hear that your surgery went well *rushes over with some aromatherapy to sooth the pain*.
As always, I'm delighted to read a new chapter and terribly excited about the new stories, which of course I will absolutely read at once.
Thank you for giving me more Tom-time, That is always needed.
Love ya and hope you feel better.
Cookies! :-)
Date: 12/19/08 03:41 pm Title: asking too much
keep it comin!
Date: 12/05/08 08:47 am Title: hutch.
amazing. as usual! :D
( what do the flash backs mean?
Author's Response: the whole going back in time (when alex and amanda were teaching in germany) thing.
Date: 12/04/08 08:39 pm Title: such a pretty thing, drinking jim beam.
COOL
Date: 12/04/08 12:11 am Title: hutch.
Aww, I'm sorry you don't think this story is up to par. It's a good read, though. Congrats in getting into Harvard btw. Woot woot!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 12/03/08 08:37 pm Title: hutch.
First of all, CONGRATULATIONS ON HARVARD!!! WAHOOO!!! *claps and runs over to hug you like a polar bear* This is greater news than the new chapter. It only confirms what I've suspected all along: you are one smart, determined, task-focused, wonderful person. I really couldn't be happier for you, yay!
Second, what is this about dropping the ball on us? We are counting on you to finish this absolutely amazing story. Please give it a second thought before you decide not to end it. And if you do, I'll know that you had strong resons and not just an author's mood swing. AND, I'll know you will send me the last chapters *grins* (no preassure intended, of course.
Love ya! :-)
Author's Response: thank you, thank you! *squeezes back and tips pint of guinness in your direction* it means so much, hearing that from you. i will be finishing the story and i do want to write a sequel, but i will work on making it better written than party of one...which should be over in maybe three chapters...
Date: 12/01/08 04:22 pm Title: such a pretty thing, drinking jim beam.
Good luck on your exams!!! :-D
Date: 11/28/08 04:15 pm Title: spotlight
I swear to you, this is the best present I got! It means so much to me that you actually took the time for this lovely gesture.
Love ya! Mwah!:-)
Author's Response: Awww. Anything for you! I'm in the middle of finals so nothing will be posted until Wednesday. But Wednesday for sure!
Date: 11/28/08 09:48 am Title: spotlight
*sigh* They're so adorable. Though I wonder why she agreed to go on a date with Frank. I can't believe Tom said I love you...*sniff* Update soon plz!
Date: 11/27/08 06:31 pm Title: it's all good
Oooo a cliffhanger :O
Looking back theres a lot of dialogue, but its great!
High-fives for veggies lol =]
Date: 11/27/08 02:45 pm Title: it's all good
Aaaww!!! Thankyou so much! This is the best birthday present ever! I loved it! And of course, I won't move from here 'till I read the next one!
Thanx again, love ya! :-)
Date: 11/27/08 02:35 pm Title: it's all good
aaaah! run away!!!
Date: 11/25/08 07:53 pm Title: blank slate
what will happen when tom goes back to hamburg? that is the question :)
great job! :)