Date: 11/09/08 06:18 pm Title: what?!
i'm glad that her and him both are clean! more soon!!
Date: 11/08/08 09:45 pm Title: something new.
hah you haven't failed me as an author believe me i was a great chapter!! lol just a tad confusing.
I think Alex should start a mag in berlin and stay with Tom. lol but that's just wishful thinking.
Can't wait for the next chapter!! don't wait to long!
Date: 11/08/08 07:42 pm Title: something new.
I love this! I havent read many of the fan fictions on this site, but this is by far the best!
Get Alex to work for the band or something, dont let her go to London and leave Tom!
Am not still sure what i think of Amanda, is anything going to happen with her and Bill...?
Please update soon :)
XD
Author's Response: thank you so much! your review really made my day! keep reading!
Date: 11/08/08 02:41 pm Title: what?!
im guessing she will get pregnant? no?
:)
very well written!
and i really like the plot.
Author's Response: wow, pregnant? interesting...rnrnwe'll have to see about that one...rnrnthanks for the review, love!
Date: 11/07/08 08:22 pm Title: what?!
so i almost pissed my pants from laughing too hard because i was just picturing what he looked like. omg and the description you used "a drug addled bag lady" was possibly the funniest thing i've ever read in my life!
But I don't understand the part that said "We'd rehashed everything, from our very first meeting up until the events of the previous night. Nothing was off limits, nothing was held back. I cried a lot, which had made Tom extremely uncomfortable" did I miss something, when did that happen?
can't wait for the next chapter!
o and a little confused on why Tom asked why she was hurting him...was it because she slept with frank or because she didn't say anything to him when he told her he'd never been with a girl like that the night before?
Author's Response: oh gosh! I feel like I failed you as an author!rnrnconcerning the first question, while they were waiting for their results, alex and tom talked about their feelings for each other. i didn't want to get into all the gritty details in this chapter. i kind of want to save that conversation for later, i think. rnrnas for tom asking alex why she was hurting him, you;re right; he was upset that she slept with frank, continues to talk to frank, e.t.c.rnrni just want to say that i enjoy your reviews soo soo much! i'm sorry this chapter was a bit lackluster; i'll try to pick it up!
Date: 11/07/08 03:00 pm Title: what?!
LOL! A pompom on top, hahaha!
Pow! “One", came Tom’s voice from the corner... (Ouch)
Man! This girl really gets out of control whenever the heat is turned up! I so wish she could learn how to control these fits.
Looooved the ending, just loooooved it!
Can't wait to read the next one!
Cookies & hugs! :-)
PS. I missed you too!
Author's Response: she is pretty volatile. thanks for the kind words!
Date: 11/07/08 06:48 am Title: what?!
I can't wait until you update. Keep going
Author's Response: thanks for your review. i'm working on it!
Date: 11/07/08 06:12 am Title: what?!
aw :]
more meaningful conversations in the chapterr i likee :]]
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 11/07/08 12:00 am Title: what?!
yay! that was so cute! i'm sad you skimmed over their conversation when they talked things over, but i can't wait to see what they get themselves into next. tom is such a wonderful sweet guy here! i love it.
Author's Response: thanks! don't worry, there will be a some references to their conversation in later chapters. there is still an uphill battle ahead...
Date: 11/04/08 11:36 pm Title: so much for the happy ending...
dang I hope its curable!!!! or I hope it wasn't him, maybe a UTI?!?!? o WELL I CAN'T WAIT!!!
and about the sexytime, can I just say, Omg. wowowow. it was so intimate and totally realistic. it was also really sweet and undeniably hot at the same time! I love that he's never been with someone like that before, its all so adorable. CANNOT wait for the next chapter!
please don't make us wait long!
Date: 11/04/08 06:36 pm Title: so much for the happy ending...
Sexytime was perfect! I want more! So sorry I hadn't read this before, but I have had such a great time catching up!
Cookies & hugs! :-)
Author's Response: Yay, you're back! I've missed you!!!
Date: 11/04/08 11:38 am Title: so much for the happy ending...
WHAT?!! poor alex!! I hope it's not an STD!!
continue please!!
Date: 11/03/08 09:04 pm Title: where do we go from here?
haha!! they were caught!! XD
Date: 11/03/08 05:16 pm Title: where do we go from here?
Oelala!!!! ^^ more please
Date: 11/02/08 11:11 pm Title: where do we go from here?
omg. WOW. I don't think that could've gotten any better.
that was amazing!!! and he made her promise!!!!
i REALLY love your writing! the way you portray Tom is just.....incredible.
CANNOT wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks! i always look forward to your reviews! the next chapter is ready to go; check back soon!
Date: 11/02/08 08:30 pm Title: where do we go from here?
hmmmm?
i dont know i think if its someone taking pics of them is too...early?
but your the writer.
Author's Response: the answer concerning the peeping tom (ha, i made a funny!) will come soon.
Date: 11/02/08 07:56 pm Title: where do we go from here?
what happens next?
Date: 10/31/08 08:34 am Title: sealing the deal
MOREEEEEEEEEE PLEASEE
Date: 10/30/08 08:09 pm Title: sealing the deal
Alex needs to just tell Tom that she LOVES him and then they they can live happy ever after!!! Great as always. :)