Date: 08/18/09 11:23 pm Title: "And tonight I want you to know that."
wow it was so romantic in a sad way but they were their for each other
Date: 07/19/09 03:51 pm Title: "And tonight I want you to know that."
oh god, that was amazing.. i absolutely loved it!! (i was secretly hoping for a wedding, but well..) oh and i almost cried when i read this: "Ashes can be spread all over the ocean. That way a person gets to be remembered by the entire world." that was one of the most beautiful and most meaningful sentences i've ever heard.. kisses x
Date: 07/14/09 11:18 pm Title: “You’ll be okay. I promise.”
I broke down crying after reading about Toms mom Dx
Date: 07/01/09 12:08 am Title: "And tonight I want you to know that."
This is soooo cute!You should write a sequal-like maybe a one- or twoshot with their wedding(Bill should wear a dress!) in it,I can help if you want!
Date: 06/21/09 12:37 am Title: "And tonight I want you to know that."
oh Hell...
That was cute... sad... angsty all at once. I came across this randomly and read it all through one sitting. And I'm glad I did; this was really really good =]
much love ^^!
Date: 06/12/09 05:24 am Title: "And tonight I want you to know that."
Wow... I love this story! The drama is not depressing... if that even makes sense.
Date: 06/12/09 05:22 am Title: "If anything, you should get married here."
“Thank you, Daddy…”
Man... I would have broke down if my daddy died...
Date: 06/12/09 05:18 am Title: “You’ll be okay. I promise.”
Awwww... this chapter is so sad...
Date: 06/12/09 04:37 am Title: "You, me and the beach. Interested?"
Wow... I wish Guys were that romantic.... DAAAMN REALITY! I love cheese.
Date: 06/12/09 04:28 am Title: “My little Tom is growing up. Huh… Go figure.”
Lol. I love the french kissing part. its so sweet... I have a feeling theres going to be drama....
Date: 03/24/09 11:06 pm Title: "And tonight I want you to know that."
aww i loved it
you should make a seuqual to it ;D
Date: 03/19/09 03:35 pm Title: "And tonight I want you to know that."
i love you
Date: 02/24/09 02:40 am Title: "You, me and the beach. Interested?"
Aww so cute.
Date: 02/14/09 02:11 am Title: "And tonight I want you to know that."
GAVE I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Thank you for writing it I so faved it
It kept me interested and it was just so wonderful
GREAT JOB ^^
Date: 02/13/09 09:11 pm Title: "You, me and the beach. Interested?"
Gah I love this story so much!
It's not cheezy and it's cute ^^
You're awesome lol can't wait to read more!
Date: 02/09/09 01:23 pm Title: "Half of this town thinks I’ve slept with the other half.”
They’re gone.
Simple as that, Bill knew Tom would know what it meant. He put the TV on and settled down on the couch to wait. He didn’t really pay attention to the screen though, as he kept trying to catch the sound of Tom’s car. He knew it would take the dread head at least 10 minutes to get to his house and yet he couldn’t just relax. - nice way to set the tone!
After fifteen minutes of trying to focus on the TV, the doorbell finally rang. Bill all but flew off the couch and went to the door, checking once more that his makeup and hair were perfect. The he took a deep breath and opened the door to see…
Georg. - aaahhh what a let down!!!
You two have fun, okay? Don’t make yourself regret you didn’t come.”
“I won’t. Bye.” - funny!!!
Desperate Housewives had ended almost an hour ago which meant that it had been two hours since he had sent Tom his message. Had Tom even got it…?
Suddenly his phone started to ring. Too bored and disappointed to see who it was, he put it on his ear. “Yeah?”
“Bill, I’m so sorry, I didn’t get your message until now!” Tom’s frantic voice floated to Bill’s ear. “I can explain… I can still come if you want me to…”
Bill sighed. - LAME!!!
“That’s what I thought two hours ago…” Bill mumbled to himself as he closed his phone. - oi! Very snide
But this time Tom actually came. Bill had been planning on pouting, maybe even being a little angry but one look at Tom’s miserable face and he knew he couldn’t. - awh! All contrite and sad! *pouts* that’s so cute!
“Just relax, Billa,” Tom breathed to Bill’s ear as Bill was still unable to lose his tenseness. “Tell me to stop and I will.” - awh! Sweet boy!
Soon his jeans were on the floor along with Tom’s shirt as the one on top removed both of their pieces of clothing one by one. - I like this description.
“You called me Billa,” Bill said after a long ten minutes, deciding that talking wouldn’t ruin the mood anymore.
“I did,” Tom agreed. “It’s almost as cute as you so it suits you.” - see that’s cute!
“Yeah, of course… I mean, why would that matter to me? It’s just... God, it must have hurt!”
Bill felt as if something warm exploded in his stomach when he realized the only thing Tom was worried about was that he had hurt him. Lifting his hand to put a lose dread behind Tom’s ear, Bill smiled. “Don’t worry about it. I don’t regret it.” - sweet!
“No. Half of this town thinks I’ve slept with the other half.” - funny!!!
Tom chuckled and kissed the top of Bill’s head. “You’re full of surprises, you know that?”
“Oh, Tomi,” Bill said. “You’ve got absolutely no idea.” - can’t wait to see what they are!
Oh shit, I’m so screwed!” he said and took his phone from the nightstand. “Hi, Dad,” he said unenthusiastically, rubbing his eyes. “I’m sorry, okay, I just fell asleep… - Well, would you stop yelling? I know I’m supposed to call but… - No, I’m with Bill. - Oh, for Heaven’s sake, I’m 18! - Yes, his parents are home. - this is awesome!
“It’s okay, really. You’re worth it,” Tom said. - awh!!!!
He hadn’t even spared a second thought to the fact that Simone could be downstairs having breakfast and Tom would have to walk right pass her all alone. A shiver went down on Bill’s spine and he hoped more than anything that his parents were still asleep. - dude yeah!!! I hope so too!
Date: 02/09/09 01:05 pm Title: "You are even more addicting than any drug."
Tom was going to see his mother. It was her birthday and as much as Jorg would have liked him to forget about it, he couldn’t. So he put on his sweatpants and a red hoodie and left the room, trying to be as quiet as he could.
“Going to see Marie?” Gustav, the early bird of the house, asked as the boys met in the living room.
“Yeah. Cover up for me, okay? Please?”
“Of course. Are you planning to see Bill after that?”
“Probably.”
“Does he know?”
“About Mom? No. But if this lasts any longer then I guess I’ll have to tell him,” Tom said. -this is what I’m talking about when it comes to storyline and narration! This is good! I’m intrigued!
Bill was surprisingly stubborn - nice!
“I’m guessing they are thinking exactly like you do right now,” Tom pointed out.
“Oh, whose side are you on?”
“Whatever. Coffee?” - funny!
“Well, I guess we could go to my place. I won’t charge you anything. Huh… That just made me sound like a whore…” - *snorts*
“Well… You know… I guess it’s time to give a face to the person I’ve been hanging out with all week. Gustav said her mom thinks I’m doing drugs.” - see? You are very funny! I just wish your lovey-dovey stuff was as good and wasn’t as soppy!
Tom realized he didn’t really care if people turned to look. They were probably just jealous. Bill was, in fact, a boyfriend to be proud of. - awh!
“Nothing much, really. I just talk about what we do together and where you’ve taken me. He thinks you treat me nicely,” he answered. - awh!
“I guess you haven’t told your parents what we did on the first night we met?” Tom said, grinning.
“I like that they like you so I’m just gonna shut up about that,” Bill replied, smiling a little himself. - LOLz
“My mom knows. Kinda. It’s pretty easy to talk to her but… well. And my dad, uh… I don’t think he’s gonna get mad at me or anything… He’s just going to be so surprised. You’re the first person I’ve ever brought home,” Tom answered. - *wrinkles nose* cute.
Bill frowned. “Your mom kinda knows?”
Tom winced. Of all the things he had said, Bill had to pick up the word Tom hadn’t meant to say. Kinda. What a stupid, idiotic word to say when you had just decided not to share everything yet. - um yeah!
The thing was that Tom wasn’t that worried about how his father would cope. He wasn’t worried about his stepmother either, and Gustav already knew. He was worried about how he himself was going to act if his family thought he had an actual, official, boyfriend. - interesting! That’s not what I thought he would worry about!
“Well, hello. Well, I guess I can forget the drug theory. You have no idea how relieved I am, hi!” she said when she reached her hand for Bill to take. “I’m Linda Kaulitz-Schafer. And you are…?” - *Cracks up!!*
“No, it’s okay. I mean, my parents know about you so I guess it’s just fair. And she seems nice. Not the typical evil stepmother type,” Bill commented. - thanks for that!
“I guess so…” Jorg mumbled. - well I guess Jorg takes it better then I though!
Date: 02/09/09 12:42 pm Title: "You, me and the beach. Interested?"
“Mom, I’m eighteen!”
“As long as you live here, you live by my rules, you know that,” Simone said - OMG she’s one of those? *eye roll*
*wrinkles nose* what happened with Gordon?
“I can take care of myself, Dad,” Bill said.
“Sure you can. You’re just grounded for no reason.” - nice counter argument!
“Dude! Where the hell have you been? You disappeared from the party, you didn’t answer your phone yesterday and then you didn’t even come home straight from school! Not that I’m bored or worried but you have to admit that you’re one of those people whose actions can never be predicted.”
Bill tried not to laugh. Worried Georg was something he didn’t get to witness that often. “Yeah, sorry… I left with Tom,” Bill said. “You were taking so damn long…” - funny!
“Did you kiss him?”
“Yeah, but…”
“Then it was a date. - I love that that is the definition of a date. Lolz
“Well, I wouldn’t wanna stand in the way of blossoming romance. Call me if you happen to get have time for me,” Georg said. - funny I can taste the sarcasm!
Meet me in front of that Lidl around three. We need to pick up some food first.
Was Tom planning on taking him to a freaking picnic?
Kinda romantic, Bill had to admit. If he was right, of course. - no very romantic if that is in deed what he has planned!
Tom filled their basket with different kind of chocolates. “I’m gonna get fat with you…” he murmured when Tom put yet another bar of chocolate to the basket.
“Oh, so you are planning to spend so much time with me that the food I feed you will make you fat? That’s nice to know,” Tom said. He sounded as if he was genuinely thrilled by the fact that Bill hoped to hang out with him. - awh! That’s cute and sweet!
Bill felt like a freaking princess as Tom lead him to wherever they were going. He realized that he sort of liked that feeling and tightened his hold of Tom’s hand. - OMG this is so fuffy!
Tom took a deep breath. “I’m not usually like this, especially after just a few days. I don’t really trust people so that’s why it’s so… weird, I guess… that I trust you already. I don’t know why. And it scares the shit out of me but I can’t help it. I want to get to know you better.” - Oi! I like this story. I like the idea of it but the dialogue! Eeehh!! I’m not pleased. It’s so soppy! Which is really frustrating because your narration is so good!
Tom hadn’t mentioned his real mother before… Maybe her and Jorg’s divorce had been messy or something. Well, Bill wouldn’t ask questions if Tom didn’t want to share more information.
“You’re it!” he suddenly said and hit Tom’s arm. Tom raised his eyebrows but grinned as Bill took a couple of quick steps away from him. - Nice!
Date: 02/09/09 11:49 am Title: “My little Tom is growing up. Huh… Go figure.”
“I’ll find out eventually. If he kept you interested for that long I’m sure he… or she… is very special.”
“He was.”
“Ha!”
“I hate you.” - *giggles!*
That caught Gustav’s attention. He put the paper away, totally forgotten, and turned to look at Tom with his eyes wide. “You game him your number? Since when have you ever given anyone the chance to call you back?” - this catches my attention! Hum!
“And you want to be the one who he kneels in front of, right?” Gustav guessed. - *snorts* yes!
And for a reason that Tom didn’t quite understand, he didn’t want this conversation to be for nothing. He had a reputation of not sticking to one girl or boy for more than a day or two. He didn’t like having a crush on someone, he felt like he didn’t have a mind of his own when that happened. He didn’t want to hold hands with someone on the street, it made him feel trapped... Like every time he made plans he would have to think about his girlfriend’s, or boyfriends, opinion.
But there was something about Bill that just screamed that Tom would have to give this one a chance. - hum?!
“You sure Andreas won’t be jealous?”
“That’s hilarious.” - funny!
“My little Tom is growing up. Huh… Go figure.”
“Shut up,” Tom mumbled. - funny!
The other thing that caught him off guard was the fact that the black haired beauty could actually look smoking hot in the pouring rain. Tom didn’t know was it the hair that framed his pale face or the wet clothes or the fact that he had a slight pout on his face that made him look so damn... good. - yes Bill does still look hot all wet and soggy! *grins*
“How do I look?” he asked, partly as a joke and made a little pose. Tom pretended to look at him from head to toes.
“You look hot,” he said without much of a thought and earned a giggle that he had already started to love. - cute!
Tom himself thought that if there was something perfect in this world, it would have to be Bill’s face…
The poor dread head almost choke on his coke when that thought hit his head. Sure, he had thought that many girls and boys were hot but never in his whole entire life had he thought anything that… sweet, sugary, pink, and even romantic in some sense of the word… - *grins*
“No kidding? You only have a 50 000 euro car,” Bill said. - actually it’s like $50,000 US dollars and more like €40.000 Euros
Tom grinned. “Well, now it’s official that it’s big enough for that. I had my doubts about it.”
Bill’s eyes widened. “What? You’ve never tested it before? That kind of car and you don’t get company?” - *giggles*
“Getting company is not the problem…” Tom said and he could swear the smile on Bill’s face went down a notch. “…but I love that car too much to share it with someone that… isn’t special.”
I’ve known him for a day! Tom’s brain screamed at him. He ignored it surprisingly easy. - *LOL!!!!*
Date: 02/09/09 11:19 am Title: “Are you… able… to drive?”
Bill didn’t how much he had already drunk when he poured himself another glass of beer. He didn’t care. It was Saturday, the only thing he needed to worry about was his mother’s reaction when he came home so drunk he wouldn’t even be able to stand. - *sarcastic* nice! *and shakes head and rolls eyes* ….awesome start! Sucked in within the first paragraph!
Bill had a large group of friends and it was commonly known that he really didn’t find girls interesting. A lot of girls thought that was a shame because, as strange looking as he was, he was undeniably hot. - thanks for not making him the freak and social out cast! Argh hate that after the 20th time!
The only reason he didn’t have any guy holding his hand was because he had pretty high standards. At least when he was sober. - ha ha!
But right now he didn’t really pay attention to the boys’ behavior; he just wanted to check out their asses. He sipped his beer every now and then, letting his brain cells go numb and building himself an excuse to kiss someone randomly. He had done that ever since he had discovered the not so healthy power of alcohol and those who didn’t want to be attacked by him knew to stay away. - *cracks up* ha haaahahahaha
Bill huffed. Cars. Did boys talk about anything else? - lol
“What are you, 11?” Bill mumbled but followed Georg to the living room nonetheless. He would never admit it but this was what he always waited for even more than getting ridiculously drunk. - awesome concept!!!
“Only for you, love. Come on now. The sooner you’re done with it, the sooner you’ll forget,” Bill reasoned. - nice logic!
Bill clicked his tongue and found himself resisting the urge to pull Tom forward even faster. But when their mouths finally collided, he found out it was worth the wait.
Unlike most of the guys, Tom didn’t just put his lips on Bill’s and pull back. He actually opened his mouth, letting Bill’s tongue have an access in his mouth. - *flutter claps* awesome!!!
“Wait. How drunk are you? I just got this car, I don’t need any puke on the seats,” Tom suddenly said, turning around to face Bill. He looked at him skeptically, as if to decide whether it was safer to just walk this boy home.
“Don’t worry,” Bill said. “I have a strong stomach.”
“Okay,” Tom said, still eyeing Bill. “Just say if you need to hurl so I’ll have time to stop.” - lol have you had someone drunk puke in your car too? Lol
“You are a really good kisser, you know,” Tom suddenly said, pulling Bill back from his thoughts with a bam. - I’m there with you BAM!
“Alright. What if I needed attention right now?” - *slaps hand over mouth to cover smile* OMG the whole bit before this and then this bit *giggles and flutter claps* awesome!
“I don’t want to think I’m taking advantage or anything…”
Bill rolled his eyes. “If you were…” he said and moved to kiss Tom again. “...then I’d suggest that you’d enjoyed it since…” Another kiss. “…I’m giving you all the advantage in the world.” - *giggles, grins and bounces* nuff said!
“My jeans are too tight…” he complained.
“Really?”
“Uh-huh.”
“Well, we wouldn’t want that now would we,” Tom said. “Let’s just take them off…”
Eventually Bill got what he wanted and saw what was hiding underneath Tom's extra big clothes. - awesome! You got enough in there that I’m ok with it but I hope there’s more detail eventually *pouts*
Without really even realizing it, he dialed Tom’s number. - *gasps* can’t wait to read more!