Date: 10/21/08 07:07 pm Title: "Half of this town thinks I’ve slept with the other half.”
Gorgeous... I love the way they are with each other and how their relationship is moving forward ;) All the secrets make all of this so much intriguin... I missed your fic :(
Date: 10/21/08 06:47 pm Title: "Half of this town thinks I’ve slept with the other half.”
yea, wat up with tomi's mommie? d:)LOVE!!!
Date: 10/21/08 03:03 pm Title: "Half of this town thinks I’ve slept with the other half.”
hmm, this parent thing is getting more and more interesting...
lovely update^^
Date: 10/21/08 12:11 pm Title: "Half of this town thinks I’ve slept with the other half.”
ok when will he introduce tom to his mom
!?!?!?!? it's about tyime!
Date: 10/21/08 11:56 am Title: "Half of this town thinks I’ve slept with the other half.”
fuck i was waiting so long & it's definitely worth it. i wanna know all of their secrets & happy that Tomi knows that Billa was virgin... so cute & adorable
Date: 10/21/08 10:44 am Title: "Half of this town thinks I’ve slept with the other half.”
*sigh*
I finished reading this and now i wish i discovered this later XD.
Okay, marie's not dead, she's ill? Again, in the hospital?Psychiatric clinic or worse, in jail,or she's into drugs? XD my ideas become more and more improbable lol. Well, i don't know, Jorg is all touchy about the subject so...
I just remembered one thing i read in the second chapter i think. Tom found Bill's eyes familiar, like he had seen it somewhere but he doesn't know where the feeling come from...What does that mean? Maybe he dreamt of him? Or something...
Loved this one -->"his scary looking and even more scarily nice father" bwahahahaha!!! i laughed so much!
I loved the sex scene. I'm usually more into graphic ones ;) but the way you write this makes the feelings more heavier. It is hot! and more meaningful,closer to you know, "making love" really. Not just fucking.
“Don’t you go find anyone else while I’m in my room hoping to be with you,” AWWWWW!!! so cute^_^
well, i'll wait your update, and see what happens next.
Date: 10/21/08 10:14 am Title: "You are even more addicting than any drug."
"Marie babbled about a boy that Tom had come home with and Jorg had been more than curious to see who Tom’s new friend was." huh? O_ô?
Another sweet chappy!! I love it^^
Tom is sneaking out early in the morning to go see his mother...Okay, so in my previous review i said she was dead, and now i don't know. You give no hints lol! you succeded in holding the suspens on that subject. I still think maybe he wanted to go to her grave?Or i need to read more carefully. Maybe she's at the hospital or psychiatric clinic? Okay, i have some crazy ideas, but i share lol,even if i look stupid when i do that.
Why would Jorg not want Tom to see her?I mean Gustav has to cover for him and all...That bad?
The story about Bill's neighbor is hilarious! lol i like it that there's always humourous in your chapters. The reader experience many feelings before the chapter is over. They are not the best neighbors eh? Doing little things just to infuriate the other on everyday's life haha! like pouring water on their pet and scaring it! XD
Tom's insecurity about how he himself would act, defending bill or not? Is very understandable. I've already felt like that once so i find it very realistic. Hell, all of this is very realistic ^_^.
Loved this --> " It was old enough for Tom’s car to look stupid next to it "
XD
Tom was so worried of how to tell jorg. Haha! he don't need to do that anymore.
Date: 10/21/08 09:44 am Title: "You, me and the beach. Interested?"
This stuff more interesting in each chapter. They grow lovelier!
I'm glad there's no sex. That would have been too early taking the fact how you wanted their relationship to blossom out. Sex is certainly not the ingredient for that. After this chapter i won't mind...Depends on how you lead the story.
I'm really caught up in this story and it's hard to emerge lol and i don't want to anyway so it's fine with me.
funny parts : "then I hope I get to be the guy.”
“You have my guarantee,” haha!!!
and about the desperate housewives XD...Their dialogue is sooo gay!
Date: 10/21/08 09:00 am Title: “My little Tom is growing up. Huh… Go figure.”
*melting away*
OMG! I love it ^_^
Gustav is in character.Tom talking to himself was funny! I like it that you put this chapter more towards tom's POV, that way he's more "accessible" and easy to understand.
Hehe! Tom is now trapped! when you are interested in Bill you drown, he's addictive lol but Bill too is. I like all the casual conversation and then the way it turns all cute and sweet.Even if the action was one "not so extraordinay" , the wrote it was ...Wow, i melted it was so cute ^_^ "french kiss at its best eh?
I wonder what will be Jorg's reaction when he find out? Hope he won't be too severe.He has the right to be disapointed,and mad and have his own opinion though...
Date: 10/21/08 08:30 am Title: “Are you… able… to drive?”
I saw the title...Then the banner, the summary was appealing and then the author. Seems like she's known around here ^_^ i wanted to give this a try.
Reading the first chapter. Hmm. Good writing style and it makes me want to read more.And it doesn't happen very often so as a reader i am happy. Your characters or believable as the story itself. And, while at first one might think "oh another teenager story blahblahblah...", this one is quite original. The idea may , nearly be the same as others but the fic's content is different.
I like the fact that Bill is not the "everybody-hates-me" type. He has friends, he's your average teenager like tom, georg ... People just has their opinion about him, ne?
second thing i realy liked is that, Tom is not filthy rich. Georg thought so, because of the car but he isn't. And it really adds a great amount of realism in the fic, and i even felt affection towards tom's dad.
That's pretty much it about this chapter i think. I love telling my impressions and everything about a fic in general eventhough my english is lacking vocabulary and such...XD
Date: 10/19/08 10:04 am Title: "You are even more addicting than any drug."
Yikes! Caught by dad before even knowing the truth. AHHH. GOOD LUCK BOYS!!! *fingers crossed, blows kisses*
Date: 10/08/08 09:48 pm Title: "You are even more addicting than any drug."
I'm guessing Jorg is not liking Bill... Stupid Jorg. XD
Date: 10/07/08 09:29 pm Title: "You are even more addicting than any drug."
cute lil chapter
Date: 10/07/08 07:32 pm Title: "You are even more addicting than any drug."
Ooh. I'm super curious about Tom's mom. *hehe* It's good that Tom's stepmom likes Bill, and Jorg's reaction was pretty cool xD Cool chappie! =]
Date: 10/07/08 07:21 pm Title: "You are even more addicting than any drug."
d:)(gangsta smiley)
Date: 10/07/08 07:16 pm Title: "You are even more addicting than any drug."
I really like the air of mystery you have going about Tom and his mother. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 10/07/08 05:32 pm Title: "You are even more addicting than any drug."
Gustav said **her** mom thinks I’m doing drugs.
hehe I think you wanted to write his?
i wonder what's going on with tom's mom and Bill's dad...
Date: 10/07/08 05:20 pm Title: "You, me and the beach. Interested?"
i like how Bill is popular in this fic and not someone who's being ignored or beaten up^^
Like it very much!
Date: 10/07/08 05:06 pm Title: “My little Tom is growing up. Huh… Go figure.”
aww so cute^^ That's really sweet getting Bill and then going back to bring him back home later^^
Date: 10/07/08 04:59 pm Title: “Are you… able… to drive?”
xD omg he doesn't remember shit 0_o!!!
fucked up!