Date: 10/17/08 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooou , I like this! Update soon because I think I'm falling in love with this story ^_^.
[Not that it has anything to do with the story, but I noticed on your Bio page that you had a picture of "La Vie En Rose", we just finished watching that movie in my french class, it was great! And you're from Canada! Woohoo! So am I, but I'm from Nova Scotia, not Ontario >.<)
Again, I loved this story ^_^ Can't wait to read more of it! ^_^
Author's Response: Haha Thankyou very much <3rn Yeah I love that picture, took me a while to realize that the petals were in the shape of a couple :prnLmao and woohoo Canadians, too bad the country is huge and Nova Scotia is a couple hundred miles away xDrnand thank you again, I will try to update soon :)
Date: 10/16/08 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great, but confusing. You're a god writer I must say*Bad Imitation of Yoda* But you also forgets to tell who's wiew it is. And that makes it hard to read in the begining, and then most in the chapter 2. But ceep up the good work.
-Aquamarine/Loran Signing off.
Date: 10/16/08 09:36 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh this is intriguing, I look forward to more! :D
Date: 10/16/08 01:38 am Title: Chapter 2
Ahh! You updated! You have no idea how long I've been waiting for this...well, actually you do, but still! lol.
aw..Georg♥ ahaha.
so Tom left the FWPD? Why? Wow, this is getting really good!
more! I need more! Please, update soon!
Date: 10/16/08 12:53 am Title: Chapter 2
what happened?!?!?!?!?!
Date: 10/16/08 12:48 am Title: Prologue
OMG!!!! Wat is it?!?!?!?!?!?!
Date: 09/24/08 04:50 pm Title: Prologue
I'm looking forward to it :)
Date: 09/24/08 02:42 pm Title: Prologue
Yeah me too!
ur very welcome. Hehe. I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: :D I'm almost done so it'll probably be up today or tommorow!
Date: 09/24/08 01:00 am Title: Prologue
Whoa...I like this a lot so far!
I would have read and reviewed when I told u I would but I accidently dropped my phone out the car window (oops!) and I didn't start working again untill now.
Author's Response: Oh shit lmao, Well i'm glad it's working again, and thank yoouuu <3
Date: 09/23/08 10:21 pm Title: Prologue
o.o I like this... but you might wanna put a space in between each paragraph... X__x finda fuzzles me... well >.> it doesn't, but it just makes it much easier to read =P
Author's Response: Haha thankyou very much :)rnand yeah, I realized I forgot to put the breaks in between the paragraphs xDrnThanks for reminding me.