Date: 12/03/08 01:49 am Title: Chaptuhr 10
That was soooo intense and then amazing again and now I'm nervous about Anna and Ryan.
Author's Response: @_@ *lol* rnrnrnMy 100th review! *yay!* Haha. Thank you sooo much for reading/reviewing, sweetheart. It means alot.
Date: 12/03/08 01:22 am Title: Chaptuhr 9
Tehehe the text messages. And uh oh Jorg finding Tom's text *gulps and reads on*
Author's Response: *whistles* Mmmhmmm =] Thanks alot! <33
Date: 12/03/08 01:07 am Title: Chaptuhr 8
*giggles* Tom and fart conversations haha. And the whole ice cream thing *drools* And then Tom saying "Dream of me." Yet again amazing!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! <333 I'm glad you liked that bit :D
Date: 12/03/08 12:50 am Title: Chaptuhr 7
Wow, Tom's a beast *giggle snort* and then Bill and his thoughts. "...himself, Tom, and the backseat of Tom's Escalade." That was amazing!
Author's Response: He's a beast, alright. xDDD *hahahaha* Yah, Bill has some perty dirty thoughts there, aye? *haha* Thanks so much! :D
Date: 12/03/08 12:37 am Title: Chaptuhr 6
Jebus poor Bill. I would've cried if someone had done that to me. But Tom's gonna take care of him. yay.
Author's Response: *nods* Yess'm. Tom's gonna take care of him, alright. :D Thank you!!
Date: 12/03/08 12:18 am Title: Chaptuhr 5
*smile* yay for Tom.
Author's Response: Haha, of course ;)
Date: 12/02/08 11:21 pm Title: Chaptuhr 2
*grin* That was so amazing and Tom had to think Bill was a girl hehehe. And wow Tom's bisexual, hey Bill might have a chance after all! *goes to read more*
Author's Response: Yeppers :D It's an honest mistake....*ahahaha* Yeah, I think I like to think of Tom as bisexual alot better than him being 'straight, but making Bill an exception.' Of course! Bill ALWAYS has a chance, doesn't he? *teehee* Thanks alot for the read/review! Much appreciated! <3333
Date: 12/02/08 10:48 pm Title: Chaptuhr 1
This makes me think of the Cinderella Story, but it's different, and I love it. I just have this feeling that Bill and Tom are gonna meet at the grocery store *grins and goes to read the next one*
Author's Response: Haha, thank you, sweetie! =]
Date: 11/26/08 10:59 pm Title: Chaptuhr 12
Overall, I think this was the worst chapter you've written.
TOTALLY KIDDING.
I loved every bit of it. I think there was a couple tiny spots I would've written differently, but hey, author's discretion.
Ha. I hope Anna falls into a volcanoe.
Seriously, love, I love this story. Sorry I'm so behind!!!
Author's Response: *teehee* Mhmmm. I think I re-wrote it like, 50 million times xDD I had to get back into the swing of it, I suppose ;) Anna falling into a volcano would be nice...haha. I'm glad you liked it, though. :D Danke for reading, liebling!rnrn*pets Tow*
Date: 11/09/08 08:58 pm Title: Chaptuhr 12
*beats that bitch up and kills her* now i feel better :)
Author's Response: Awwwww! *stops you* We can't keel her yet! That would totes throw the plot off balance, ahahaha. But don't worry. You're not the only person who feels that way ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, love! <3333
Date: 11/09/08 09:47 am Title: Chaptuhr 12
I love it. :D
Author's Response: Thank you!! =] I'm glad, haha. Thanks so much for the review, sweetie! <333
Date: 11/08/08 04:53 pm Title: Chaptuhr 12
I really REALLY hope Anna doesn't ruin it for Bill and Tom .. they are SO damn cute together =)
Author's Response: Don't worry about them, love. They'll be fine! Anna won't ruin anything, trust me. I can't break my bbys apart! xD And yes, they're absolutely adorable together =] Thanks so much for the review! <33
Date: 11/08/08 04:43 pm Title: Chaptuhr 12
that bitch.......d:)
Author's Response: Lol! "That bitch..." is right. But that bitch isn't gonna get the effect she's hoping for, either! xD Thanks so much for reading/reviewing, sweetie! =] I hope you liked it!
Date: 11/08/08 03:02 pm Title: Chaptuhr 12
Great chappie Ö Lovelovelovelovelove is in the air ^^ *frolic* I hope you continue soon ^^ *and I hope they kiss xP* *and that Jorg believes Bill* ;-)
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: *frolics with you* Hahaha xD Yes, love is in the air! -excited- They'll kiss. Very soon, sweetie, mhhmmm. Thanks alot, hun! <333
Date: 11/08/08 02:34 pm Title: Chaptuhr 12
If she open her mouth she's dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like it. more soon please.
Author's Response: LMAO xD rnrnI'm glad you liked it!! *haha* Thank you so much!! <33
Date: 11/08/08 01:24 pm Title: Chaptuhr 12
awww thats cute! ^.^
Jorg better not freak.. what if the bitch told him something different. OH no!!! They better not be sperated!
Author's Response: Don't worry, bby. Nobody can separate Billa and Tomi! =] And don't worry about Jorg's reaction. I think you just may....like it....*teehee* Thanks alot for the review, love. I'm glad you liked it! <33
Date: 11/08/08 12:46 pm Title: Chaptuhr 12
oh. my. fuckle. i really hate anna...but omgggggggg billa and tomi are so friggen kayute...*plans anna's demise* xDD
Author's Response: Hahaha xD You're not the only one, sweetie. Hell, even I hate her! *lmao* Yes, they are, aren't they? So adorable....*swoon*rnrnWe can't get rid of Anna just yet. It'd totally ruin the rest of the story! XD Thank you sooo much for the read/review! I really appreciate it.
Date: 11/08/08 12:22 pm Title: Chaptuhr 12
oh I loved this !!!
first of all, you wrote Tom perfectly, I just loved his smart ass coments. Many people write dialogs like that in a way that isn't really persuasive, like the characters say stuff that either sounds way to stupid or way too clever, but you managed to balance it perfectly and it turned out just right! good job!
and that Jorg was being open was really good, although I do hope the fact that Bill might be gaying off with Tom won't change his view on things. I mean, Jorg is a crappy father so far, are you gonna add homophobia to the case as well ?
and girl, how long will you keep us suffering xD they still haven't admitted to their feelings, although the goodnight kiss clearly spoke of feelings more than friendship.
oh and the Anna thing, I can't wait until Jorg figures it out, I hope Bill TEAR HIM APPART (yes I'm mean, but I hate instant forgiveness, let him suffer, please)
and oh my God, one must not forget, the Anna/Ryan incestual relationship, girl, your mind is a scary place oO
okay, so basically you're writing an amazing build up here. You've got two brilliant main plots, Bill/Tom development, and the 'Jorg must go down' thing
LOVE it
also, I am so looking forward to the climax chapter, seriously, when you reveal things for Jorg, it's gonna make him crawl so bad
- Anna's a bitch
- Ryan's sexual harrasment agains Bill
- Anna and Ryan abusing Bill
- Bill being their 'servant'
- the incest thing
I mean, can it get any better than that xD
okay, so seriously! This is amazing, keep up the good work!
oh and you want a tip for writers block, first read through the nicest reviews you've gotten for the story, think about all the people loving you for it. Then, close your eyes and replay the entire story in your head, and when it comes to where you've stopped writing, just let your imagination run free, when you get that next idea, you're not going to be able to keep your fingers from reaching for the computer ,)
thank you so much for writing this, girl!
much love
lucy
Author's Response: O_O rnrnYour reviews are enough to ward off ANY sort of writer's block, haha. Thank you...SO much!rnrnNow...*cough*...on with the response.rnrnI can tell you this...right now. Bill isn't gonna let Jorg off the hook fast/easily. TRUST me. These things have been going on for far too long to just...up and forgive him. BUT, we have to remember. Bill felt as though he had to suck up a bit in order to get what he wanted, eh? I do believe we're all guilty of doing that at some point or another xDD (I KNOW I am, haha) He didn't want to give Jorg a reason to forbid him from seeing Tom. But he knows that he can't just out and out say what's been going on. He's gonna need a bit of help from Tomi. **HINT!** (lol) As for their relationship...*squee!* They will come to terms with their feelings really soon. REALLY...soon, haha. Both of them like each other, they just have to admit it to the other. But they also don't want to ruin their friendship, y'know? Ummm...I don't think Jorg will care TOO much. Maybe...a bit disappointed that Bill didn't tell him, but Bill will have a bit to say about that. He isn't a necessarily bad father, I don't think. He's just overwhelmed. He wants Bill to have a mother so bad that he seems to overlook some of the signs that Bill has tried to point out. Bill and his mother were VERY close, and he thinks that Bill may be resisting to the idea of Anna being his 'new mom.' He just doesn't know what to do. But he'll get better....TRUST me. Tom's gonna help get all that out in the open...soon enough =] Thank you...SO much. I think I'm gonna get started on the next one, now xD <3333
Date: 11/08/08 12:20 pm Title: Chaptuhr 12
GAHH!!! *points at the B**** * omg! i dont think jorg will care though right?...i mean...he seemed really nice so far and he likes tom!!!
argh! this fic's had me mood swinging >.< first i was all "HA IM YOUR FACE!" when jorg liked tom and then i was all "Aww!!! CUTENESS!" and now im all " OMG!! NOOOO!!" *falls over*
loved it
Author's Response: Lol xD Ehh, I don't know! ;) Maybe he will....maybe he won't. Yes, Jorg isn't exactly an asshole or anything. He's just a bit...overwhelmed? He misses his wife (Bill's mom) and he knows Bill misses her, too. He just wants him to find some sort of mother figure in Anna, I suppose. Lol, sorry about your mood swings! **Imagine how I felt while writing them! xD** But I'm really glad you liked it. I was nervous....gosh, haha. =]
Date: 11/08/08 11:28 am Title: Chaptuhr 12
I just started reading this but its so cuteeeeeeee!! I hope you don't get writers block again and update soon :DDD!
Author's Response: Awww! Well, thank you so much! *haha* I'm really glad you like it. And I hope I don't get it again, either! xD It sucked....SO bad, lol. I will try my best, love. Thank you again! =]rnt