Date: 11/15/11 03:13 pm Title: Chaptuhr 15
are you.... abandoning this? pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaase no please don't abandon it please... I thought it was completed already, I love this story way too much :(
Date: 09/19/10 07:12 am Title: Chaptuhr 15
PLEASE. Im like begging you.
CONTINUEEEEEEEE.
Date: 01/09/10 10:22 pm Title: Chaptuhr 15
*glomps*
more!
Date: 06/11/09 12:04 pm Title: Chaptuhr 15
Your taking too long!! >w
Author's Response: Sorry :/ I'm trying, I really am -_- My inspiration (for this) is lacking, though. We'll see ;)
Date: 06/10/09 07:00 pm Title: Chaptuhr 15
Wow!
I really like this story.
I'm hooked!
Great work :]
I can't wait to read more!!!!! ^-^
Author's Response: Thank you so much! =] Unfortunately, I've hit a bit of a rough patch =/ There's a billion other things I want to get out, and I'm having a hard time. But, I'll do my best! <3
Date: 05/19/09 12:17 am Title: Chaptuhr 15
eppp i cant wait for more i love it and idk y but toms character in this story is so different compared to what people usually write i think its because he actually jokes around alot and he has fun were as usually he can take a joke but hes usually serios and all ways over protectivewich is sex but its good to change it up and i just love everyones character here really good in my eyes lol :) as i said i lve it cant wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3
Date: 04/24/09 09:40 pm Title: Chaptuhr 15
When will you update the next chapter?! >w
Author's Response: Very soon! I re-did some things last night, and it should be up within....a week, I suppose. :D
Date: 04/18/09 05:29 pm Title: Chaptuhr 1
Please update!
Author's Response: Haha, I'll definitely be updating soon :D
Date: 02/21/09 08:42 am Title: Chaptuhr 15
LOVED IT :D Hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Thank you! ;) I'll update as soon as I can <333
Date: 02/13/09 05:42 pm Title: Chaptuhr 15
Aaaw , sweet !
Go on with this, its really great ;p
Tom is such a romantic boy in this story xd
-Wondering is he could be romantic in real life as well xd -
Aaaw, they're going to kiss in one of the following chapters, arent they ? xd
Let them kiss xd
update soon pls ! ^^
x
Author's Response: Haha, thank you sweetheart! :) You know, I think Tom just maaaay be a bit romantic in real life. (But only with Bill) xD They might! *_* I'll try to update soon <333
Date: 02/11/09 09:18 pm Title: Chaptuhr 15
okay first off i feel so bad i was bugging you to update this and i have not put in a review sorry =[
okay time for a review now =]
omg tom is not a very romantic person wow!!dinner and a blow job don't do to much tom lol and i would so love to have some of tom's special sauce ;] lol but i do love his mom for being so cool about everything and getting him the bottle of wine and the condoms (wow idk any moms that would that) but i do hope him and bill well put the condoms to good use and soon lol oh and tom is very smart in getting jorg number and jacob is a fat ass i could so see him looking all sad that there was no more pizza but what is he going to do to bill? damn him and ryan are mean!! i hope tom kicks there ass!! for all the shit they have done to bill!! i'm sorry but anna is just effin suck for having sex with ryan she needs to get that head for hers effin checked!!! and omg bill now knows whats going on with the two of them!! i hope he and tom can get some proof to get that evil bitch out of the house and stop hurting bill =] but on the other hand i'm kind of happy for ryan i hope he goes with nathalie and gets away from that mother of his oh and UPDATE!!! I LOVE THIS =]
Author's Response: Haha, wow! :) Thank you so much for the review, sweetheart. You made me smile. <333 I'll try and update soon!
Date: 02/09/09 11:48 am Title: Chaptuhr 15
*big smile* yay. Update soon, ja?
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do :) <333 Thank you, sweetheart!
Date: 02/08/09 01:41 pm Title: Chaptuhr 15
AHHHHH im so excited for Toms plan XD oh my goddd, Bill found out about then haha thats great!... I really hate Ryan -_-
Author's Response: Yay! :) *haha* Yeah, he's gonna try his best to woo Bill xD I hate Ryan, too. When I'm done with him, you can do what you please ;) Thanks alot, hun! <333
Date: 02/08/09 01:29 pm Title: Chaptuhr 15
Lol, you’re welcome for the prodding, girl, gotta keep you writing you know ,p
Okay, so Jorg is starting to make up for all his stupidity, he was really sweet to Tom in the beginning there…but I still think he’s a fool!
When anyone says “Tom’s special sauce” I get the worst giggling fits…all very pervy
Awwww ^^ Tom loves his Gibson
The notebook…oh my god, I’m almost crying just hearing the name. lol, Simone’s planning on having Bill notebook Tom xD
And the condoms, that woman is…priceless!
I like your new way of dividing the different scenes of the story, makes it more tidy. And big YAY to the smaller text xD
So THAT’S why Jacob was being so keen on making sexual threats to Bill that last time they met, he’s actually gay, or at least bi. Well, that explains thing, and here I was thinking him and Ryan were homophobes ,p
Oooh, trouble in paradise *evil snigger* bitchy little Anna not getting any action…why poor her.
OO oh shit…Bill heard…oh god I hope he doesn’t try to tell his dad, cause then Jorg’ll just call him a liar and be stupid again…
I liked the chapter a lot, I think it was a nice ’moving forward’ piece and with Bill finding out Anna’s and Ryan’s secret it was surprising and fresh as well.
Oh, but you might wanna fix this thing at the end, a lot of your chapters have a huge open gap from the last line and down to the end of the page, and you should probably delete that, looks sorta odd ,)
Waiting patiently (yeah right) for the next one, I have a feeling it’s gonna be good ^^
Author's Response: *lol* I wouldn't mind some of Tom's sauce xD And thanks soo much! :) Don't worry...when Bill decides to let Jorg know, he'll make sure that he has some proof. *hint-hint* Yeah, I'm trying to move it along. I'm gonna wrap it up pretty soon, but all the loose ends will be tied. rnrn*facepalm* I don't know WHY that happens xD I like, tried to fix it...and it didn't work. -_- I'll try again, though. It's frustrating :P Thanks again, hun! <333 I really appreciate it. ((And I can't wait for something else from yoooou!))
Date: 02/08/09 12:06 pm Title: Chaptuhr 15
Mwahaaaaaaaa!
I'm going crazy by this!.... or... I'm always crazy... but... ^^".... well, *coughs*
I love this, as you probably already know, and I can't wait too long for more! *jumps up and kisses your cheek*
;D
Author's Response: Awww *hugs* Thank you so much, sweetie :) I appreciate it...so much. I promise, I won't make you wait long! <333
Date: 02/04/09 03:05 pm Title: Chaptuhr 14
Heey!
Where did you go ? O_o
I miss this, damnit. Update soon, plz? (a)
Author's Response:
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Date: 01/21/09 03:42 am Title: Chaptuhr 1
OMG THAT BITCH!!! she is soooo trifiling!!! how can she do that to jorg!! you should so kill her ass off or better yet have ryan give her an STD!!! *EVIL LAUGH*
Author's Response: Oh, wow! You're...evil.rnrnrnI like you.rnrnrn*mwahahaha* Don't worry, darling. She'll get her just rewards. =] Thanks for reading/reviewing, hun!
Date: 01/04/09 05:46 pm Title: Chaptuhr 14
*smile* Great chapter. The whole Ryan and Anna thing makes me go ick lol. But Jorg is awesome in this chapter and so is Simone. And Tom and Bill made me smile. I love this!
Author's Response: *nods* I think the Ryan/Anna thing makes EVERYONE go 'ick.' Even me, ahaha. Yes...Jorg is a sweetie pie. And you gotta love T&B ;) Thank you, sweetheart!! <3
Date: 01/04/09 11:54 am Title: Chaptuhr 14
LOVED it :D It's going so good with Tom and Bill's relation ^^ *me be very positive* And Jorg is about to find out that Bill is oh so right xP I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Thhhhaaaannnnkkkkk yyoooooooooouuu! <333 You're sweet =] And we'll see! *haha*
Date: 01/04/09 09:04 am Title: Chaptuhr 14
Mahaha.
I love it. You write wonderful, as usually. And Bill and Tom is soo fucking cute together. And I fucking know I swear much. but... I FUCKING LOVE THIS!!! 8D you should update soon. :*
Author's Response: Fuck, yeah! You fucking swear WAAAY too fucking much. *Bahahahahahahaha!!!* I'm joking, love. I adore it. And THANK YOU!! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll update as soon as I can, I promise. <333