Date: 10/02/17 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
That is the exact opposite of what I was expecting, but I loved it!!
And now I'm sad because there is no more and this story is old as heck :(
I hope you come back and finish it one day < 3
Date: 11/20/09 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
Omg it is great! I love it I hope you update very soon!! :)
-AK
Date: 06/26/09 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
ROFL!!! Tom was about to say, "Sorry to interupt"!!!! LOL i find that hilarious, for some reason! And then Bill's just randomly, "You smell good!" Which also makes me giggle! BUT, anyway, for the review part, i LOVE it, and I WANT MOAR!! I shall give you like 4 batches of TH cookies if you post another chapter soon!!!! **VERY interesting!!!! xDDDDD
Date: 11/18/08 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
i liked it :-D
more please ? x3
Date: 09/28/08 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
loved it O.O
is bill a seriall killer?! o.O how does bill manage to desappear like that?! O_O
hope yu'll update soon! :D
Author's Response: Well... yes and no, Bill is KIND of a serial killer, but there's a very good reason why he does what he does. Everything will be revealed shortly :) I'm very happy you like it, and I'm writing the next chapter <3.
Date: 09/26/08 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
More?
Please?
I'd really like to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Yes, I'll update as soon as I can. It's just hard for me to find a beta reader :)
Date: 09/23/08 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
omg its amazing!
love it!
cant wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank youh ^__^ I'm writing the next chap, just have to get it beta-ed...
Date: 09/20/08 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
I think its great and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll be writing the next chapter tonight.
Date: 09/20/08 03:37 am Title: Chapter 1 - School night
wajajaja xD what a bad boy is Bill jijiji I like ;D
Author's Response: There's a reason for everything :)
Date: 09/20/08 01:28 am Title: Chapter 1 - School night
00oooh!! it seems very interesting!!! :o
Author's Response: I'm happy you think so :)
Date: 09/19/08 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
Ooh, I likey! =] Evil Bill ROCKS! XD And that was reeeeally hot
Author's Response: Thank youh ^__^
Date: 09/19/08 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
I did like it....
can't wait for more (:
Author's Response: :)
Date: 09/19/08 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
Then I'm glad that you finally wrote it down^^. It was very fun too read .I'm going to wait for the next chap:D
Author's Response: :) It's nice you like it. I'll try updating soon x x x
Date: 09/19/08 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
well damn. that was seriously intensely hot. god you have no idea, it was like perfectly dark and sexual. and everything was just amazing and almost mind blowing. if i had been tom i would have had a huge hard on right then. but then again im not tom and i dont have a penis. but i assure you that if i did it would be fighting to break through my leggings. hahah i sound like im really sexually frustrated, which i may just be. but anyways i cant wait for the next chapter, this story has really got my interest and im i dont know, i just cant wait. so update soon!
Author's Response: o_o Your review just made my day! I didn't know someone would like my story this much. It's very sweet of you and I will dedicate my next chapter to you! ^___^ I will try updating as soon as I can, I just need to find someone who can beta the next chapter <3 .
Date: 09/19/08 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
Fuuuuuuck! This is SO GOOD. You write REALLY, REALLY well. Please continue it! ^.^
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the compliment! I don't think I write very well, but it's nice to hear you like it :) I definitely will continue it, as soon as I find a beta reader.
Date: 09/19/08 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
Very good. I like it. There were only a few mistakes.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it :) And I'm happy there are not many mistakes, though I think there are plenty! xxx
Date: 09/19/08 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 - School night
A vicious Bill, me likey. :D Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I will post more as soon as I find a beta reader, because unfortunately I don't write very well <3 .