Date: 10/06/08 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
holy crap! totally unexpected...amazing job:p
Author's Response: ♥ =]] danke
Date: 10/06/08 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
aha. college does suck, but you make it better for me! Oh, and a big yayyyy for kisses in this chap :)
Author's Response: ♥ YAY! I can make college better for someone! =]]
Date: 10/06/08 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 10
queen of cliffhangers is goddamn on point! that ending...woo I needa get back on my chair. loved it :D
Author's Response: ♥ =]] so happy you like it!
Date: 10/06/08 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love it!! I love it!!!
Author's Response: ♥ =]] ♥
Date: 10/06/08 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
I can be a beta!!
This story is excellent - your writing is very fluid and very in character when necessary. You're one of like...three authors on this site (that I found) that can make me believe that Bill is talking. Or that Tom is really thinking those thoughts.
The bloody kisses were amazing. I really want to see if Alexia is the link between them being related. LOL, I'm sorry if that's not the way you're going but I keep expecting Alexia to be like "SURPRISE! You're brothers!"
But, alas, if that does not happen, as long as the story continues, I shalt be happy!
If you need me to beta, my e-mail is: mad_violinsane@yahoo.com :)
Author's Response: ♥ I'll get back to you on the beta thing, I didn't expect so many people to offer! Actually, Tom and Bill aren't brothers in this story, unlike every other tom!bill fic I've written where they are. I'm so glad you like it, thanks for the complements!
Date: 10/06/08 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG that ch. was so good!!!! i was totally not expecting that at all!!!
Author's Response: ♥ =]] Danke
Date: 10/06/08 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
d:)
Author's Response: ♥ =]
Date: 10/06/08 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG!!!! I'm so fucking speachless right now, but im not typeless, and let me tell you, I was amazed. Tom was like all over him, and I loved it more than Brownies(high compliment my friend). I think if you and your sugarfingered self don't update soon, i'll croak!!! you=
Author's Response: ♥ Sugarfingered. -giggles- I'll get working on that now. =]
Date: 10/06/08 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh dear! adore the ending!! I think the Tom in this story is the best/most entertaining Tom I've ever read!
next chap,ja? =)
Author's Response: ♥ Next one asap. I'm so glad you like it =]
Date: 10/06/08 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
*.* God that was so fucking HOT!!!
Like serious!
Girl I love your writing!!
Sorry i don't beta:/ I'm like a blind person when it comes to grammar and stuff, I just read over all my mistakes xD. Hope you find someone^^
Author's Response: ♥ I'm sure I will, danke so much. =]
Date: 10/06/08 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 10
Loved this chapie
Author's Response: ♥ Danke
Date: 10/06/08 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 10
*-* I love the end toooooo!!!!!!!!!!! XDDD I honestly thought that Tom was gonna punch him right then and there O: and I was shocked when he actually relaxed into it and I was like O_O was die fick??? and then I realized that he had said something in a previous chapter that he had grown to like Bill a little bit... but not XD lol And sorry about the whole college thing X__x can be a drag at some points huh? lol *giggles and waits for more*
Author's Response: ♥ Eh, college sucks, but reviews from all of you make it all better. ^_^ I'm so glad you like it!
Date: 10/06/08 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
Woha! That was fucking scary OO I reallu thought Tom was gonna kill Bill, even though I knooooow he won't! But hey, they kissed! YeY ^^D I can't wait for next chapter Oo I haaaatee waiting for things I have to get or have to read -.- But as long as you keep writing, I'm happy to wait ^^
And yeah, I allmoast forgot! Oo
*Hugs Queenie(sorry the nickname)*
Thaank youuu for writing this excellent storie ^^
Author's Response: ♥ Tom couldn't ever really kill him. =] I'll keep writing, I promise. So glad you like it. =]]
Date: 10/06/08 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
asbasjbcsd.
more!
tom needs to not hate alexia..as much.
but that was intense!
also, i thoroughly enjoyed his 'fuck you'. yes, that made my day.
Author's Response: ♥ =] I love that you liked it.
Date: 10/06/08 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMGOMGOMGOMG! That was... evil to end like that. Such a good chapter. Loved it! =D
Author's Response: ♥ So glad you like it =]
Date: 10/06/08 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
loveeeee it!
omg they kissed! did NOT see that one coming at all!
O.O
Author's Response: ♥ Not many people did! I'm so glad you like it!
Date: 10/06/08 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
omg, I can't belive I have ignored this story until now.
Frikkin' amazing ! :D
Author's Response: ♥ Omg, thank you!
Date: 10/06/08 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 10
That was sooo hot. I was like, holding my breath throughout the end. =] *giggles* I'm uber excited for the rest, now!
Author's Response: ♥ So glad you liked it!
Date: 10/06/08 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
this chapter was so amazing!! I really loved the end, so hot *_*
Author's Response: ♥ So glad you liked it!
Date: 10/06/08 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
So. I'm madly in love with this fanfiction. I've seen it around numerous times but I never got around to reading it until today....and I'm hooked, /especially/ after the way this one ended. Dear lord, woman, I thought I was going to have a heart attack. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
And, I've only beta'd a couple of times before but I wouldn't mind beta-ing for you, if you still need one.
Author's Response: ♥ I'll get back to you on the beta thing, I didn't think so many people would offer! I'm so glad you liked the story too, danke.