Date: 10/21/08 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
You. So. Fucking. Rock.
Contrary to popular belief - cliffhangers are the BEST. I am so in love with this story. So, so, so in love with it.
...SO in love with it! It's adorable and hilarious how you can keep the two of them so in character in an AU universe.
And you're better than most writers with spelling. I only caught one accidental spelling error (typing too fast probably) where you said "tough" instead of "though." No big. Most people miss at least seven or eight words per chapter :D
(Grammar/spelling freak here)
And I really want to know who it was...Georg? Lexie? Some administrator? Dun dun duuun...the game truly beGINS! W00t!
:D
Author's Response: ♥ =]] Oooh! Thank youu! You made me v. happy. =] You're right though, most of my spelling error are because I type to fast or i'm thinking to fast for my fingers to keep up and such.
Date: 10/21/08 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
Boys are douchebags!!! Lol, I just had an "awesome" experience with a guy. Not.
And I have to say I LOVE this story, I hypervenilated the last chapter where they first kissed, I was like OMG.
And this chapter I was like, O.O NOOOO lol, I wanted it to continue! Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: ♥ Eh. boys suck. but i'm glad you like the sotry, at least these boys can make me happy =]]
Date: 10/21/08 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
gahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U do suck!!!
Author's Response: ♥ eep! sorry!
Date: 10/21/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
AW! Whos at the door!?????
dont leave me hanging bitte!
Author's Response: ♥ -giggles- sorry! But it's updated =]]
Date: 10/21/08 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
okay one....i hate you for stopping it there.
2. your awesome! this was one of the best endings so far because it left so much tension that now i CANT wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: ♥ =]] sorry for making you hate me.
Date: 10/21/08 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 12
*blows raspberry* Boys are stoopid.
But, OHMEINGOTT! You totally cut off the...super...awesome...hawt part! *whines* Oooh, I wonder who it is!
Maybe Lexie....or Georg....*teehee* I WANNA KNOWWWW! UPDATE SOON! =]
Author's Response: ♥ updated =]]]
Date: 10/21/08 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 12
HAHA! you used it! xDD
and dude!! are you trying to kill me???
"Mmm, it hurts but it’s so good!" ? you ARE trying to kill me!!
Author's Response: ♥ -giggles madly- Maaaaaybe I am! OH!
Date: 10/21/08 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 12
wtf
it was getting so banging lol
noooooooooo i dont shun u for not continueing i shun whoever ruined that moment of pure and uter beauty *falls on the floor and starts to cry pounding my fist on the floor*
Author's Response: ♥ awwwe. don't be sad, love!
Date: 10/21/08 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
uh oh....d;)......d:)LOVE!!!
Author's Response: ♥ =]] ^_^
Date: 10/21/08 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm sorry about your boyfriend and you being sick...and I hope you feel better soon. (:
Loved this chapter and finally some good Gustav interaction. I do so love that boy!
EEEEE.
Have I ever mentioned how much I love sweet kisses too?
Author's Response: ♥ =]] i'm glad you like this.
Date: 10/21/08 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
That's a very interesting story.
There's one thing that confuses me though. In the first chapters you wrote about Bill having sex with Andreas - but never again did you mention his sexual life. How's he doing for 2 months without sex if he had problems before without it for two days even?
Same goes for Georg. He's acting as a totally normal person, doesn't injure himself, doesn't ache for drugs - and nor does Gustav, although he's a heroin addict, which is a very serious thing. In fact, everybody seem quite normal, except Tom. That is a little strange.
Other than that you're building the tension quite beautifully, and I hope to see the updates soon ;)
Author's Response: ♥ Bill's still sleeping around, he just doesn't advertise it like he was before because he doesn't want Tom to know. Georg and Gustav seem like normal people because they're pretty much ready to get out of the place.
Date: 10/21/08 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
*squeek* you're back in business. Loved the chapter, I'm taking by your story.
Author's Response: ♥ taking my story? o_O
Date: 10/21/08 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 12
Kinda stopped at a bad part? No Fucking way, HELL YEAH YOU DID!!!!
Author's Response: ♥ heh. Sorry! But it's updated =]
Date: 10/21/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
AHHH o NO!!!!!
Author's Response: ♥ eep!
Date: 10/21/08 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
0_o omggggggggggggg neinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!
damnnnnn I sooooo want to know who caught them!
that part with the G's was so funny I was also thinking something dirty was going on xD
Sorry to hear you broke up:/
*hugs^^*
continue when you feel like it:)
Author's Response: ♥ -hugs back- Oh yes. I like the part with the G's as well!
Date: 10/21/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 12
D: *cuddles* I hope you feel better ;__; guys are assholes...
But I squealed when I saw this was updated ^^ I love how you write XDD and I've probably told you this a gajillion billion million timessss already, ja? lol Anyway ^^ I'm actually happy nau that Tom gave into Bill ;) reading your story is making up for the lack of love in my own life XD lol And so! I shall wait patiently for more =P I always do!
Author's Response: ♥ guys are assholes, you're so right. but I'm glad you like this =]]
Date: 10/21/08 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
yay an update!
this story is one of my favorites! and i love that they kissed for a reason other than anger this time!
for some reason im imgaining that bill is wearing black boots, like he does at award shows, which makes the kissing scene even better for some reason :-)
i'm excited to see what happens when tom finds out that bill is addicted to sex, how his reaction will be and stuff :-)
hoping for an update soon! great job so far!
Author's Response: ♥ that is a really hot mental image. =]] glad you're enjoying this!
Date: 10/21/08 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh no you didn't!! What a cliffhanger!
Great chapter, though you a few typos, but I loved it... I'm sorry to hear about your boyfriend and I hope you will soon get over him completely - he doesn't know what he's missing!
Take care!
Author's Response: ♥ Eh, he should know. We were friends for years before he asked me out. but, what effs. Glad you like the story though!
Date: 10/21/08 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh hunnie I'm so sorry for you but I send you love from Italy ^^ take your time ok?!
But on the other hand, You came up with a fucking wonderfully amazing chapter!! I think it's my favourite ever!
And I heard what I was longing to hear from the beginning of the story ^^ Bill fell in Love with Tom!!!!!!!! Yeahhhhhhh
and the kiss was such a sweet thing!!
I can't describe it!!It was soooooo beautiful!!
you're the best!!
I can't wait for the next chappie!!
hugs
Author's Response: ♥ -hugs back- thank you so much =]] you made me all happy =]
Date: 10/21/08 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh crap, it's Lacy catching them, isn't it? Neeiiiin.. -.-'
Author's Response: ♥ =]] oooh, just wait. you'll see =]]