Date: 10/22/08 10:14 am Title: Chapter 13
More soon?
I like it like was a bad word I LOVE this story!!!
Poor Bill and Tom :(
Date: 10/22/08 09:35 am Title: Chapter 13
ohhhhh....yes it was so sad..
now I hate lexie even more, stupid loud mouth ..
I feel so bad for bill and even more for tom, I want to hug him :(
Date: 10/22/08 08:39 am Title: Chapter 13
:(
* cries *
But Bill loves Tom. And now Tom won't love him back. And he needs someone to love, and to love him. And I hate Georg and want something really, really bad to happen to him.
And .. Tom ... :((
Date: 10/22/08 08:30 am Title: Chapter 13
thank you so much
i loved it, i knew i would, and you knew it, too, and oh god
i trust you
please more
Date: 10/22/08 08:10 am Title: Chapter 13
OK...I trust you. But ugh, make them better. I don't know how you can. But still. *sniffle*
Date: 10/22/08 07:53 am Title: Chapter 13
amazing chapter. so hard & cruel. i almost crying. you're evil person xDDD but i like it. *gugs & oets Bill & Tom* please make them happy.. Tomi is broken. poor baby
Date: 10/22/08 07:43 am Title: Chapter 13
OMG!!!! I thought Tom had been raped and I was so right!!!! Awwww my little Tomi... I feel so bad for both of them... You are very mean to them girl! *Cries*
Date: 10/22/08 07:10 am Title: Chapter 13
I don't hate it! I actually love it, however it's truly sad and stuff. You're such a good writer! Poor Tomi! I'm gonna go rescue him *dives into the story and wraps her arms around Tom*
Date: 10/22/08 06:56 am Title: Chapter 13
Omg. Fuck fuck fuck. Ahhh...i'm crying. Gosh I never expected any of that. I feel so bad for Bill. Georg is such a prick but Tom needed to know sooner or later. Be nice to Billa soon! And Tom...ugh...no words...just....be nice to him soon too! I feel so sad now. *sniff sniff*. Wow. I think I need a hug. Poor Tom and Bill. I love you wifey even though that chapter was so sad. We need smiles soon, ja?
* Big hugs & kisses*
Fragile.
Date: 10/22/08 05:44 am Title: Chapter 13
It was soo sad T-T
I'm just glad i know what made Tom stop talking, it's sorta like what happened to Bill but they sorta dealt with it different ways.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 10/22/08 04:33 am Title: Chapter 13
0mg i almost cried!! and no i dont hate this chapie..kuz now i knw the reason why tom stoped talking..but i feel sorry 4 billa =(
Date: 10/22/08 03:06 am Title: Chapter 12
i really love this story so far...ive never read one quite like it, i knew i would be draawn into this story halfway through the first chapter. hell, it is 3:05 in the morning and i am just now going to sleep. i couldnt stop reading until i got to this point. please update soon!!
Date: 10/22/08 02:53 am Title: Chapter 13
I liked it, and I want more!
Date: 10/22/08 01:46 am Title: Chapter 13
Although, yes, it was very sad, you did a nice job writing it. Hope you get the next chapter up soon and make Tom and Bill happy again LoL.
Author's Response: ♥ I'll get up up as fast as I can.
Date: 10/22/08 01:44 am Title: Chapter 13
I didn't hate it at all, except I felt like it was too short! (XD, don't I always? I'm a whore for word length). We got a lot of information and development, though. I'm so sad that Lexie would be such a big mouth, and while I see the necessity for Georg to out Bill like that, it was still harsh. I really expected Bill to go cut himself or something and Tom to have to find him and "save" him. And Tom - poor baby! There were annoying typos that took away from the chapter though. Especially when you would type "you're" instead of "your" or vice versa. It happened a few times. But otherwise, it was a good chap.
Author's Response: ♥ yeaaah, hence why I totally need a Beta. Though I've never actually figured out how the beta thing works.
Date: 10/22/08 01:40 am Title: Chapter 13
so sad!! but well written and im so happy to get two updates in one day! :-)
i hope tom and bill have something nice happen to them in the next chapter!
Author's Response: ♥ I have to be at least a little nice to them after what I just put them both through. =]
Date: 10/22/08 01:37 am Title: Chapter 13
No! ;__; Of course I don't hate it! I've loved this story so far, so what would make me hate it?
It was so sad though... I really felt bad for Bill and then with Tom I... I practically cried. He was just seven years old... and that... that part is really touchy for me V_V
but I really do love this story. I hope that Bill and Tom get together without hating each other in the end :( stupid Georg...
Author's Response: ♥ I almost cried while I was writing it. But I needed it to happen for the next part to go smoothly.
Date: 10/22/08 01:36 am Title: Chapter 13
I didnt like , nor did I hate it...All I can say is it was sad, very sad..but it anwesered alot of questions I had had on why tom charactor is the way he is..And Im interested in finding out what happens next ! more bitte!
Author's Response: ♥ more soon! don't hate me too much for it <3
Date: 10/22/08 01:36 am Title: Chapter 13
You should feel bad form hurting the boys =P Yes yes! do something nice for them soon =D they need to seriosuly talk.
Amazing chapter!
Author's Response: ♥ thank you. and i'm going to be nice to them next chapter for sure!