Date: 10/22/08 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 13
Perfect.
Honestly. I love the beginning. Hah. I still want Tom and Bill together, but i love the journey the most, you know? And last chapter it was simply too easy, so i love what you did here. ^^
Date: 10/22/08 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
This was truly an amazing chapter, i like how you've made this story more about the two characters individually evolving on there own before actually bringing them together. This is my favorite story by a long shot! Keep up the good work!
Date: 10/22/08 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG i loved this ch. it was very sad but very good!!
Date: 10/22/08 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
wow, that was SOOOO intense!
I'd never thought that that would be the reason for his silence, but it does make sense though^^
*slaps Geo*
That was SO rude and mean of you! Even though it's all true, he really didn't need to rub it in like that, not knowing the whole story behind it:/
jealousy is a Bitch! I liked this chapter continue soon:).
Date: 10/22/08 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
Is it possible for me to reach through the computer screen and strangle Georg? Although I know Tom deserved to hear it, I really, really want to!
And geez, Tomi...-Whines- God, I just want to hold him.
Date: 10/22/08 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Okay, I hate you for being mean to Bill and Tom, BUT THAT WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER!!!! Aaannnddd, you said it had to go like this for the next chpater to go smoothly, so you are forgiven! =]
Date: 10/22/08 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
Sad.. but ill wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 10/22/08 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 12
Mmm. More kissy-kissy. :) YUMMI!!
Ahhh. Omg. Who was it, who was it!!!
Date: 10/22/08 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awwa! Poor Tom...one of my friends went through that when she was seven too...and I doubt she's ever going to get over it :( Poor Bill too, Georg was WAY too mean to him, but it worked for the chapter. Loved this, and I can't wait for the next one! :)
Date: 10/22/08 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
absolutely awesome. you are a gift to us all. :D
Date: 10/22/08 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 13
so saaad....
I'd probaly hate any other person who would have written something like this in another story, but no way I am hating you.
Becouse I'm just to curious to know what is going to happen.
And you just write amazing :']
Date: 10/22/08 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
oh my god, that was so horrible. oh god it was soooo depressing, yet sooo good. im in such a depressed mood now but damn you are such a good writer. i love this story.i feel so bad for bill, georg is an ass hole. he doesnt know that bill was raped and thats why he began to whore himself. i kept waiting for bill to flip out but he never did. ugh i really want this next chapter to come out. i just feel really bad for bill and tom god. i dont even know. update soon though. im about to die and its only been like 3 minutes.
Date: 10/22/08 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
omg *sniffles*
this was soooo sad!!! *chockes back tears*
awsomely written though and i TOTALLY loved it, that's for sure, but it was still really really sad )= the way u used the words and dicribed everything. the way tom felt all the things that happended and his thoughts around it all.. omg
please update soon? this is totally awsome!
(and i WAS right!! =D georg was the one who was the "oh shit" person xD it was one of my 3 x) and i love how georg couldn't help but be a bitch and blurt everything out at once, but i still hate him for it..)
Date: 10/22/08 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 13
this is such a good story! and I did NOT hate it, I love it
Date: 10/22/08 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 13
i like it- it explains a lot.
Bill&Tom have more in common than they give each other credit for.
:]
beautifully written.
Date: 10/22/08 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awww, goodness.
I think my eyes prickled and stung a bit. No tears, though....no tears.
I had a feeling it was Georg, but I never imagined he's just...fucking....rat Bill out like that. And it makes me dislike Lexie even more. It seems like she can't keep her fucking mouth shut, eh? *lol* Ahh, Tomi. He was finally acting on his feelings toward Bill, and then BAM. Jealous Georg has to drop a bomb. I feel just as bad for Bill, too. Sure, all that fucking he did was uncalled for, but it wasn't just his fault ;) And he loves Tom, he doesn't just want a fuck anymore...and...blah.
Ahh, well. Looking forward to some niceness and happinessity soon. I'm depressed, nao. =(
Date: 10/22/08 11:34 am Title: Chapter 13
awwwww omg this was soooooo sad!
im like on the verge of tears!
:(
:(
Poor Bill and Tom!
i hope things get better for them!
pleaseeeeeee!
:)
Date: 10/22/08 11:12 am Title: Chapter 13
do update, love. ;D.
You have amazing writing.
I can feel the pain, yo.
but, a little tippo;
Spellcheck. xD.
Don't take that too personally. I have mistakes sometimes too,
Date: 10/22/08 10:45 am Title: Chapter 13
wow shit hat was good made me cry
Date: 10/22/08 10:45 am Title: Chapter 13
*sobs*noo i don't hate it
i feel so bad for bill...and so bad for tom too
u seriously are our drama queen
i was so sad to hear that tom was relieved that georg came..i thought that he likes bill..and the kisses...u got me confused
and yeah u really need to be nice to them
and u NEED to UPDATE FAST cuz i'm dieing here to know what's next