Date: 11/06/08 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 14
It wasn't a bad chapter at all. Tom talked, forgave him, and kissed him!!!! Life is better. Not good, but better.
Date: 11/06/08 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 12
Well at least they made up. Plus this is progress for Tom right? Now if the person who interupted them could just forget everything that would be great.
Date: 11/06/08 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 14
Omg! Beautiful chappie! Tomi is opening up to Bill. They both are a bit more alike than they actually think. They neeeed each other. I hope you feel better wifey. I was definately waiting for one of my favorite stories to be updated and then BAM! I received an email saying this was updated. Hehe ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter! Such a lovely story....
Date: 11/06/08 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
I happen to like haiku's.
I really felt bad for Tom. Bill really beat him up. But he did the same to Bill so they're even.
Date: 11/06/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Amazingly enough bloody kissing is fine w/ me. I guess there's something there. Not totally sure what...
Date: 11/06/08 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I love the story
It's really sad but so beautiful
You describe the situation very good
Update soon
Date: 11/01/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 13
write more that sad but good
Date: 10/28/08 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 13
Please please please update soon? I need to know what happens...
Date: 10/27/08 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
yayaya i get it
there drinks SHUSH!
more, i want it you crack dealer!
i want more now!! -whines and bounces-
Date: 10/24/08 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 13
wow been so long since you updated...please don't leave us hanging...i am so hanging on edge right now T.T
Date: 10/23/08 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 13
man, this chapter was intense. i cant wait to read the next, please update soon!!
Date: 10/23/08 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 13
I dont hate it! Things like that happen for a reason! And if you would like me to be your beta, I'd be happy to. One because I'm really anal
about grammatical errors and two because I can give you different ways to form your sentences and convey things to your readers. Like me! Lol.
Date: 10/23/08 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 13
I trust you... but oh god! Please KILL Georg in the next chapter, I would really appriciate that. Just sayin... *sniffles*
Date: 10/23/08 07:40 am Title: Chapter 13
oh gosh...just omg....i need more!!!! lol. i dont want bill to hurt nemore! i want tomi to know the real reason why billa does those things....awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Date: 10/23/08 02:06 am Title: Chapter 13
AWWWW COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT'S NOT FAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u noe what ficGorge...
FUCK U WITH SOMETHING HARD AND SAND-PAPERY!!!!!!!!!!!
poor tomi, poor bill...
FUCKIN ALEXIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she shud curl up n die.
*sniffs* this made me cry...
almost.
Date: 10/22/08 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
dude!! like...wow
oh and don't forget! Gustav has Georg's soul! xD
Date: 10/22/08 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 13
I ACTUALLY CRIED AT THIS CHAPTER.
one for bill :|
two for that flashback. i cant believe people actually go through that. NO ONE should feel that kind of hurt in their lives :(
makes me sad (
good job though :D
Date: 10/22/08 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow..I figured it had to be something like that. I feel so badly for Tom because I know what it's like...I didn't have the same reaction but I stayed away from all men for a good four years.
God, that was so hard to read. I hope Bill can make it all better for Tomi :(
Date: 10/22/08 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
No I don't hate it! But...but...but...it's not Bill's fault he's addicted to sex and he wanted in Tom's pants but now he loves Tom!!! And Tomi needs to realize this! So they can be happy! And Kiss more! YAY!!! XD
Date: 10/22/08 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 13
poor tomi!!!!!!!! Jorgie is soooo stupid to do that to him!!!!!! Geo is stupid too!!!!!!