Holy shit fairies of fanfic goddess,Carmenta (or PunkyEmoFreak.)

I am completely and utterly blown (literally BLOWN) away by how fucking stupendous/amazing/awesome/wonderful/ and any other word that means good, by your story.

I am soooooo stoked that I stumbled upon this story.

Oh an interesting note, Carmenta is a Roman Goddess of writing and the alphabet.



Keep on writing. (and again, you blew my mind)

Please update, I'm so in love with this story!

Ahh. I love this story soo much. One of my favorites. Im super curious about whats going to happen though. Keep up the good work!

D: how could you stop there? Ohh gosh. Now I'm gonna be in suspense till the next chapter is up.
So post it soooooooon!

Hoshit, i just read the whole of this, and the amount of times i've gasped, and "aww"-ed, and double glanced are more than too many to count. This whole story is just amazing; it's every thing a story should be - interesting, captivating, deep and real. It's like watching the whole thing play before me in my mind - the description and the detail is simply perfection.

The plot of this is extremely original, and i love that about it. I've said many times before in various other reviews to other stories that it's so hard to think up original plots now, so it should be well credited for when someone actually managed to think up a half decent one that hasn't already been written half a dozen times. Congratulations.

I'm not eagerly awaiting the next chapter, which i'm sure will be just as captivating :)

So much happening...first congrats for making it featured story, it's well-deserved! The decision to skip a month and write from hindsight works for me. I guess when things are going well it always needs some shaking up. Just hope poor Tom is not going to run into too much trouble. I would be a shame if he lost he speech again. Thx for the long emotional scene with building trust and Tom telling his story. I am definitely most into everything you make them do alone ;)
Guess now it really comes down to if Bill holds his promise, never to leave him...

great fic...i love it...keep updating...can't wait for more

ugh!!! I can't believe this happened.. -I think it's true though sometimes the people that you trust the most;turn out to be the ones who hurt you the most-
but beyond that 'odd' thought of mine this chappy is amazingly written :}

I WANT MORE =O MORE NOW PLEASE
Good story MORE NOW NOW MORE please

I've just read it all, and I love it!
I feel sorry for both Bill and Tom ;_;
I really hope that Bill will try to see Tom. And that Tom will forgive him!
Please update soon! :*