Date: 02/28/09 10:44 am Title: Chapter 18
I absolutely loved this story! You write wonderfully. I thought the ending was lovely but a little bit too short... there are still plenty of things i'm wondering about...
It still is a wonderful story!!!
Date: 02/22/09 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
Such a cute chapter, I'm so glad Bill told him of his similar situation.
Date: 02/22/09 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
That was so sad. Poor Tom =[
Date: 02/22/09 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love this chappie, so good.
Date: 02/22/09 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 9
"I glared at her; I wasn’t just going to sit here for the next month staring at her. I wasn’t going to spend another minute in here with her. She wanted two words? Fine. I’ll give her two goddamn words. I stood up from the chair and my glare on her was icy cold. “Fuck you.” I said to her before I turned my back and walked out of the room."
Ahh I love it I love it.
Date: 02/20/09 11:06 am Title: Chapter 7
omg! i couldn't get myself to stop reading! :))
Date: 02/19/09 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
Poor tom :( I knew something bad like that happened to him. It had to have been hard to write because it was hard to read. Great story though
Date: 02/19/09 04:37 am Title: Chapter 18
Loved it 200% :) Amazing!! *applause"
Date: 02/18/09 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 18
I reached over the table and took his hand in my own once more - awh it’s just the right amount of soppy!
“I didn’t think you were going to come back,” he admitted. It took all I could not to just swoon from his voice again. I loved the sound of Tom’s voice. “No one ever comes back when they say they do.”- I didn’t think he was going to talk again.
“Because I tricked two of the craziest girls in the entire world into helping me find you. Because I spent three hours in a car with those same two girls and a TomTom that wouldn’t shut the hell up just because there was a chance that I could see you again. Because I would have spent forever looking for you if I had too. Because I’m in love with you, Tom.”- awh! It just got uber sappy.
Mmmmhh *whines* what the heck was that kind of ending??? What in the world happended to them next? Very unsatisfying! It was cute, a little too fluffy for my regular tastes. It seems like you lost your inspiration and then just tried to finish it off so I would be done. *grumbles* it wasn’t bad just wasn’t a good ending!
Date: 02/18/09 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 17
Willow Springs didn’t have my old address, all they had was Alice’s old address. - well they won’t be able to find him…
I was so young when I left here; I hadn’t been out of Willow Springs in five or so years. But I still remembered this place. I still knew where I was going. It was like I had never left. - I don’t think he ever did, not really.
I’m pretty sure I had loved her too. But I don’t really know what love is really like, so I can’t be sure. - he has been broken for a while!
I pulled my guitar off my back and set it down on the porch before sitting down myself, putting my elbows on my knees and my head in my hands. Now that I was here… I didn’t know what to do. - nothing? No ideas? Hum?!
he knew who I was - is that good or bad??
And ah haha haha - Tom and Jerry??? Did you do that on purpose! *smacks hand*
looking don at my feet again - oops down???
they were driving me nuts already. I wanted to punch the both of them just for being around me. I did not come back here to see them. At least, I’m pretty sure I didn’t. - still not sure about Tom’s motivation.
“No. He doesn’t talk. Now get away from him.” - *laughs and claps* horary!!!
“I’m Bill,” He said, “Tom’s boyfriend. And these are my best mates, Sonnie Rae, and Abigail Marie,” He said, pointing to each one respectively. “And if you don’t get away from Tom right now, I’ll sick them on you.” - *laughs and claps more*
“Oh! This just turned into a kidnap mission!” Sonnie squealed, clapping her hands together. - I’m learning to love Sonnie and Abbie.
I absolutely hated that it felt good to have Bill holding my hand. - awh!
Date: 02/18/09 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 18
Beautiful! Masterful! How's that for love? Really fantastic, it griped me and held on for dear life, never letting go, and I devoured it! Great!
Date: 02/18/09 11:19 am Title: Chapter 18
Lovely ending! I thought Bill's speech thing at the end was perfect. Great job.
Date: 02/18/09 05:36 am Title: Chapter 18
Dude...This is the ending?
AFTER THE LONG WAIT... THIS IS THE ENDING...AAAAHHHH!!
Date: 02/18/09 05:33 am Title: Chapter 17
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW LONG I WAS WAITING FOR THIS STORY? OR HOW MANY TIMES I TOLD YOU TO UPDATE SOON AT THIS ONE WEBSITE?!
BUT......WOOOOHHH!!! YOU UPDATE THANK YOU AND I LOVE YOU!!
Date: 02/17/09 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 18
awww i absolutely loved this ending, this would be THE perfect story to do a sequel to *coughhintcough* i loved this story!!!
Date: 02/17/09 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
no no no. that was awesome. i need more.
Date: 02/17/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
Aww, to bad it's the end! Loved this story though^^
Date: 02/17/09 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 18
Yeeey, loved the end ^__^ You're hell of a writer, in a gigaübermega positive way :D Aaaand guess who's gonna read aaaall of your other stories? No? ME :D So aabsolutely ^__^
Date: 02/17/09 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh god how sweeet! This was an amazing Fantamazing story! The best ever!
Date: 02/17/09 11:07 am Title: Chapter 18
GREAT! - no more words are needed ;)