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Reviewer: LuannLiebenTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/07 05:45 am Title: First date

You he to have to have to keep going!! Tascha you're always such a good writer!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!

Author's Response: We are continuing, next chapter up soon rnGee don't I get a compliment? lol jj =PrnGlad you like it!rn

Reviewer: poison_girl616 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 01:05 am Title: First date

It's great! you guys should do a sequel!!!

Author's Response: We are, chapter two is on it's way =P

Reviewer: lixi05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/07 07:21 am Title: First date

wow, so good........... i feel so sorry for poor bill though........ great story, u 2 should defenitily write more twincest fics together =] lol

Author's Response: We are. It's all we do in class!

Reviewer: zere Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/07 09:01 pm Title: First date

-jaw drop- oooh, you could SOOO make more out of this.
seriously- you shouldn't end it here.

Author's Response: I don't know what more to write though?? Tom said it was practice but now there an awkwardness between them.. you want more twincest out of this?? I'll talk to Katie.

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/07 01:37 pm Title: First date

amazing ^^

Author's Response: Danke

Reviewer: und_wenn_ein_lied Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/20/07 02:09 am Title: First date

Tom’s hand shot out in a ‘halt’ gesture. “That’s too much procrastination. You can use the weather or homework but never both!”

Bill nodded. “Sorry.”

LOL. i love how Tom knows all, & Bill just like, accepts it.

"Bill definitely hadn’t got down with a girl in the backseat.
Just a boy.
Just his brother."

ahaha. aw, poor Bill.

Author's Response: Lolololol!!

Reviewer: MissTokioHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/07 12:04 pm Title: First date

Well i just LOVE it :D
Feel sorry for Bill though!

Author's Response: I just love that you loved it.

Reviewer: BethanyR44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/07 05:31 pm Title: First date

Nice story. kinda sad that it is only one shot. anyway u r an awesome writer.

Author's Response: Lol danke (;

Reviewer: Tokio4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/07 02:50 pm Title: First date

hmmm... was it really just teaching from Tom's part..?

good story ;D

Author's Response: Well so he says... (;

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/07 02:30 am Title: First date

uuuuuuuuu COOL
more

Author's Response: Only a one-shot mate.

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 01:18 pm Title: First date

hawt! =]

Author's Response: xD

Reviewer: lipa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 10:59 am Title: First date

I don't think that Tom wanted only to practice although it seems he did.I like it - it backseat scene was really hot

Author's Response: Lol, Tom has mixed emotions

Reviewer: Nellisen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 07:37 am Title: First date

I really liked it, but i don´t like the end. I guess i´m one of those girls who wanna see them live together happily ever after, but anyway you´re really good!

Author's Response: haha it's not that sad is it?

Reviewer: annie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 06:14 am Title: First date

that so hot :D , jesus .

Author's Response: danke. it was our first twincest together so we're glad you liked it

Reviewer: Frozen Reapper Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 04:54 am Title: First date

So damm hot :)

Author's Response: Lol danke (:

Reviewer: Razzle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 02:34 am Title: First date

I HAVE to review? Alright then. Mostly I liked it,the premise is nice. I had to re-read the middle part three times because you went from a lot of detail to hardly any and I couldn't work out whether Bill had actually come or not. The ending was awwww-worthy and I would have liked to see more, preferably with jealous!tom. ;)

Author's Response: Hahah, we wrote it over about two weeks and it was quite shrt considering how much time we put into it but lol. Nah we won't write more for this fic, but we'll write another fic soon ^^

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 02:08 am Title: First date

aaw! I liked it very much !! So good! I love the idea with practice and stuff ^^ I hope you two write more twincests ! : D

Author's Response: Well. Bill needs more practise so we might need to writ a bit more...

Reviewer: deepshadows87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/07 01:29 am Title: First date

i liked it, you should write more about it though... i got sad, i felt sorry for Bill...

Author's Response: Can't write more... we just know that theres now this awkwardness between Tom + Bill but the rest is up to us to imagine...

Reviewer: chaosshallcomeagain Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/07 11:11 pm Title: First date

omg this was amazing! i hope to read more!

Author's Response: I hope to write more.

Reviewer: Shibuyainn Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/07 10:28 pm Title: First date

Aw man, it cant end there! There's too many things left unsaid! XD

Author's Response: Guess we'll have to continue then aye?

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