Date: 09/07/11 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 01/01
i absolutely loved this. i especially enjoyed the comment about the gustav shaped hole in georg's straitness. that made me giggle. and i'm especially glad that this smutty little one-shot had some semblance of a plot to it, unlike so many others that i've read. i can't thank you enough for writing this. it brightened my rainy day. literally, it's been raining non-stop since about four this morning. we got out of school early and everything, because the roads were starting to flood.
Date: 05/14/09 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 01/01
I loved it. Like, I could read it over and over again, but sadly I don't have time right now. The story was beautiful, and the hair-detail was mind-blowing.
Date: 05/08/09 11:27 am Title: Chapter 01/01
Oh wow, this was absolutely lovely. Very hot, very amazing. It had my attention the whole time, which is rare for stuff like this; after a while, descriptions get old and overused, but you somehow made everything new, especially during the sex. Usually, I skip over sex scenes just because they're boring, but this never got boring. Definitely a favorite.
-BRE
Date: 01/07/09 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 01/01
Initially Gustav had really noticed it when he had watched Georg all but writhe in ecstasy the first time they'd been shoved into the path of a stylist. – OMG that’s sooooo good. I love it when someone plays with my hair.
Bill had once complained that Georg sounded as if he was having an orgasm when Gustav employed his fingers to Georg's scalp, which both he and Georg had hotly denied – you know when someone denies something too much *shifty eyes* usually means something!
"Okay," he decided, before he could change his mind and talk himself out of it, "this isn't going to work. Off with these damned clothes and onto the bed; you need a damn good massage."
Georg looked round at him then.
"Want your wicked way with me?" Georg teased and wiggled his eyebrows.
Having had lots of practice at being unimpressed by such statements, Gustav just rolled his eyes and pretended to take very little notice. – I love stories from Gustav’s POV he never talks to it’s fun to hear him and see where he’s going…little scamp!
"I wish I was allowed to look when you're awake," he said and sounded sadder about it than he expected; maybe it was finally beginning to get to him. – oh that’s just heart breaking!
"Are you trying to say you have a Gustav shaped hole in your straightness?" Bill asked and it was clearly a serious question. - *giggles* hole *giggles* just for Gustav? *giggles more
Bill looked at the ceiling and mouthed the words, 'why me'. – cause you’re the one most in touch with both feminine and masculine.
"Too hard?" Georg asked and Gustav's heart almost stopped.
"Huh?" was about all he could manage.
"Mattress, was it too hard?" Georg expanded and Gustav began to breathe again.
"Something like that," he said and hoped to god he wasn't blushing. – OMG Georg is O.O EVIL!
"You know most people would have cracked at about lunch time," Georg said, pushing gently on his shoulders.
It was such an unexpected move that Gustav found himself being pushed back onto the bed and he offered no resistance, all too aware that his new position made it completely obvious that he was hard. Not that he really had time to worry about that as Georg climbed onto the bed as well and straddled him in a move that left him completely dumbfounded, speechless and almost convinced he had fallen asleep and was dreaming. - *squeals* I love the power play!
"Just how long have you been hiding the fact that you want me as more than a friend?" Georg asked, suddenly serious.
"Years," Gustav replied with complete truth totally automatically as he did his best to keep his eyes on Georg's face. – Oh poo bear *pouty face*
For a moment Gustav felt very girly, an entirely alien concept for him as his heart kind of melted and he almost heard bird song and sweet music, - uh-oh Disney moment
"Well," he said, letting his fantasies spill over into reality, "first I thought I'd drag your pants down and suck you until you see stars, and then I thought I'd impale myself on that big, cock of yours and ride you like the stallion you are." – OMG *looks down* then *looks up* I think I’ve just come!
"Toys," he said, knowing that Georg needed the explanation, but desperately wanting to just get on with it, "I have toys that I used to pretend were you. Never done this with another guy." - *giggles* OMG he’s soooo cute!
"I don't think I've ever seen anything that hot," Georg said, finally looking back at his face. "Next time, I want to do that for you." – oh! That’s so sweet and cute.
That caused the heat in Gustav's belly to go up a notch and he was pretty sure there wasn't any blood left in his brain at all with the way his cock was feeling. – followed by OMG that’s so hot!
"Oh god," Georg said, clearly quite desperate, "please move." – OMG I love the word ‘please’ *shudders*
OMG this is now one of my favorite Geo/Gus one shots stories EVER!
Date: 01/02/09 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 01/01
OMG that was amazing and I loved it
Date: 09/20/08 03:55 am Title: Chapter 01/01
Oh dear god... I just about died reading this.... It was... amazing. I really have no ability to think after reading this... so good.
Date: 09/16/08 12:15 am Title: Chapter 01/01
That...was gorgeous. Thank you so very much.
Date: 09/15/08 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 01/01
*sigh* That was so beautiful.
Date: 09/15/08 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 01/01
"Georg actually looked shocked, shocked and very, very interested, but definitely shocked." I loved that sentence, so so so so so so so very much, that I probably read it twenty times, I don't know why, I just LOVE that sentence. It takes SKILL to make me fall in love with a one shot, let alon ONE SENTENCE, so pat your self on the back hun. Job well done. *smiles at you* =-D
Date: 09/15/08 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 01/01
oh. my. god.
a killer get together fic for my OTP
more? (begs)
