Date: 09/16/08 03:26 am Title: Meet the Parents
I could not stop grinning through this story. Awesome.
Author's Response: Happy to put a smile on your face, chica. :)
Date: 09/15/08 06:29 pm Title: Meet the Parents
I lovelovelovelovelovelovelove this !!!!
mein gott xD I smiled through the whole story :'DD
and it was so many funny comments! :p hahaha
and, I LOVEEEEE how you make bushido seem so nice, yet at the same time - he is this gangster rapper with the attiude (L) gaaash
haha, I don't even know what I'm writing right now x'-D just omg
PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE OF THIS(L)
you make the best bill/bushido fics ever!! :3
Date: 09/15/08 04:09 pm Title: Meet the Parents
I laughed so hard when Gordon asked "So you've been to prison?" Way to break the ice.
Everything after that had me giggling like the fool that I am. This was so cute, and such a nice change after all the angsty Billshido's you guys have done :) See, Billshido doesn't have to *always* be angsty! You must make sure that Ella reads this :P She's been telling me to write a happy Billshido, and I just can't =_= Buuut here we go! :D
Author's Response: Nanners is getting to you with her desire for fluffiness. Don't listen to her! Angst all the way. This just proves we can do happy; it was a plot bunny that wouldn't have hopped away on its own.
Date: 09/15/08 04:01 pm Title: Meet the Parents
"Wait until you meet my father.", HORRIBLE HORRIBLE WORDS!!!!!! =-D
Date: 09/15/08 11:06 am Title: Meet the Parents
I loved this so much!
Date: 09/15/08 11:02 am Title: Meet the Parents
XD
This is win.
Date: 09/15/08 09:31 am Title: Meet the Parents
I dont have enough words to describle how much that sounded like the first time my parents met my boyfriend.... the tension!!!! YEAH!! But I really liked this!! And I cant wait to read about Bushidos and Jorgs meeting... *grin* So I hope it would come soon but of course you guys have your own life but really PLEASE write it soon??
I adore you and this story till forever if you write the next part soon..
Date: 09/15/08 08:29 am Title: Meet the Parents
That was brilliant. *giggles*
I loved the way Tom was acting and Simone attitude towards Bushido was hilarious
Date: 09/15/08 08:17 am Title: Meet the Parents
Lovely! ^^
I really liked it.
Date: 09/15/08 05:41 am Title: Meet the Parents
With you guys, I am never satisfied. I love your collaborations so much I just want moremoremore whenever I am finished reading anything you post. There were some amazing one liners and awkward moments in this, I was laughing and shaking my head the entire time.
Date: 09/15/08 05:40 am Title: Meet the Parents
xD whaqhaahaha
oh god you guys made ma laugh so much!
Simones just too much xD heehe
I can't believe she said all that stuff just like that :P
you gonna write one about meeting Bill's dad?
*hopes*
Date: 09/15/08 04:47 am Title: Meet the Parents
i giggled throughout the whole thing!
Date: 09/15/08 03:20 am Title: Meet the Parents
Fudge, almost forgot.
"He would have preferred she slap him in the face."
I ached and wanted to carve out Simone's spleen with a spork.
Vulnerable!Bushido is an odd critter - a turtle, really, you can only see his soft belly (um, metaphorically speaking, cause, you know... his abs... *__*) if he's in the proper position and the lighting's right so you can peek into the shell. Just a glimpse, really, cause if you play that vulnerability up the turtle's going to get gutted. As will his characterization. (stfu about my analogies, I'm trying okay?! D:)
I loved how you handled it in here. Just a peek and he went back to his rough edges lickity split but it was there and it made him whole. -lick- ...I mean, er. -pet-
Date: 09/15/08 03:13 am Title: Meet the Parents
that was hilarious and hot
u're a super team
Date: 09/15/08 03:11 am Title: Meet the Parents
Um, what to say, what to say...
Right now pretty much the only thing running through my head is 'eeeeeeee' decorated with a few 'it's HAPPY TIEM' and 'omgTomi' Can you imagine that review?
"OMGTOMI HAHAHAHAHA eeeeee Bushido awww Bill omgtomi grrr Simone eeeeeee Bushido rawr, Bill eee Bushido... *__* HAPPY SEX TIEM"
...I was seriously tempted to leave it at that just so I could imagine the expressions on your faces. :D But alas, the thought of how many different ways Muse would abuse me after destroyed that urge.
I loved. I think the easiest way to go through it would be to list everything I loved and why, but I didn't really read this in pieces so I don't think I should review that way. I didn't love specific things here, I loved everything. It seems silly to go over and tell you how I loved the dialogue and Tom's smirks and Bushido's inability to finish swallowing before he spoke when I didn't not love anything. I have my favorite lines, of course, and since I'm not as coherent as I normally am (see paragraph three for further explanation) let me jump in:
"Well, that and that this was a necessary step. But Bill didn't need to know that part yet." FORESHADOWING, ANYONE? Though the summary made it kind of obvious I liked that he wanted to keep Bill in the dark. -aggressive petting-
"He parked as close to the Escalade as he could, just to piss Tom off a bit." It's little things like that, little relationship dynamics that aren't shown off because they aren't the focus of the story but still there that makes this such a joy to read. It's Bushido in and around that sentence, that action, but not only that it's Bushido in relation to Tom. I'm using way too many italics and not even making any sense to myself, but reading his characterization like that makes me want to crawl into a hole and never write Bushido again cause I don't think anyone could pull it off as well as you do.
...and I just realized why the "List My Favorite" quotes thing is really not going to work, cause if I keep it up I might end up listing the whole story and I don't think you really want it regurgitated back to you, right?
What do you want me to say? -whine- I loved it. Why? Because it was fucking brilliant. Why? Because you nailed Bushido and Bill and Simone and Gordon and OMGTOMI. Why? Because you like to get into the characters' heads and write from there while you cackle in a decidedly evil manner. Why? ...well, how the hell should I know? Talk about odd fetishes, seriously.
I'm going to stop babbling/making a fool of myself now and go read it again. And again. And again. And... again, while I think of ways to get you to write more Billshido that doesn't have that damnable angst tag. I'm thinking a bribe is in order. -thoughtful chin stroke-
(This is going to fuck up my Favorites number by a lot but I can't resist. See what you do to me?)
Much love,
A *__*'d Ella.
Date: 09/15/08 02:55 am Title: Meet the Parents
Oh, gosh, that was amazing. I'm extremely grateful for my roommate's absence tonight because it meant I got to bark out a few (or quite a few, actually) laughs without being on the receiving end of any strange looks. And while so much of this was just... so incredibly awesome, I think this was my favorite line: "You hit people, Mister Bushido?"
...Mister Bushido. XD
Date: 09/15/08 02:48 am Title: Meet the Parents
That was hilarious and hot. I was cringing and laughing at all the biting comments, and then I may have cackled when poor smirking Tom got a bit of his back. Very sexy sexy.
Date: 09/15/08 02:46 am Title: Meet the Parents
wow i really want something like this to happen to bill. maybe not bushido though... but yeah it would be really great if the boys find someone special really soon.
Date: 09/15/08 02:33 am Title: Meet the Parents
I.WANT.TO.READ. THAT! (when Bu meets Jorg i mean)
I think after this fic i might just kill Gordon and marry Simone myself. Loved Tom's attitude so much i can't even start to describe it.
You ruined my mascara and yet somehow i still love you. That's a first ladies; a priviledge i don't let anyone have. Be proud of it :P
Date: 09/15/08 02:29 am Title: Meet the Parents
*giggles* Oh that was priceless, Tom was perfect in it. Maaaan that was one cringeworthy meeting :o Everything out of Simone's mouth was so biting.