Date: 12/26/07 04:21 am Title: Chapter 12
Beautiful, beautiful story. One of the best fictions I've ever read. Please, never stop writing. =)
Date: 12/26/07 03:59 am Title: Chapter 12
Hey you :O) I've just finished reading your story (yeah I know, I'm slow - sorry for that) and I'm literally crying! I adore your story, its brutality, the love between the twins, their struggle to escape and most of all, I love the surprising ending! I never saw that coming - I mean, that only Bill escaped while Tom didn't... It is definately different than most fanfictions, and I adore your writing style, sense of building up the plot and then just as you thought you have figured it all out, you change the story... Very well done, and please keep writing!! All the love, Camilla
Author's Response: I'll never stop writing, especially not when it comes to the K twins. Thanks for your comment ^^
Date: 12/26/07 02:09 am Title: Chapter 12
*Cries like a baby* i'm so happy! good job!
Date: 12/26/07 01:51 am Title: Chapter 12
First of all Shibuyainn, don't ever ever EVER apologize for doing whatever you want in your stories. The cruelty in this fic is what made it so poignant. The contrast of the love between Tom and Bill, their devotion to each other and the horror they were forced to deal with in the camp made it tug at the heartstrings.
This chapter was so bittersweet, more sweet than bitter. I am so glad it worked out for them, because that last chapter killed me. Besides, remember what I said, that the more people protest the more you realize they were paying attention, they cared for your characters? Don't lose that.
If you can't tell, all in all great job. I truly enjoyed it.
Date: 12/25/07 12:03 am Title: Chapter 11
OH MY GOD!!!!
Wow I think my heart hurt just a little from reading that T_T
Great story and I cant wait for the next chapter! :D
Date: 12/20/07 10:24 am Title: Chapter 11
omg. This is so sad I cnt believe that Tomi was shot! Omg I hope that he is okay and that Bill and him get away!
U certainly know how to write a gripping story. I could feel my pulse rapidly quickening as I was reading this chapter! It is just amazing! Defo the best chapter so far!
Talk about this ending with the mother of all cliff hangers though!!!!
Please I am begging u update really quickly u cnt leave us all not knowing what is gonna happen!
This is amazing! x
Date: 12/20/07 01:27 am Title: Chapter 11
WHAT DID YOU DO??? how could you... how could you... I'm sitting here, crying, in the middle of English-class... How could you kill Tom... how???
Date: 12/19/07 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMG, I don't usually read AUs but since everyone was talking about this one I had to. I hope you update soon, I need to know what happens D:
Date: 12/19/07 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
PLEASE MAKE IT A HAPPY ENDING ):
P.L.E.A.S.E
I AM SERIOUSLY BEGGING!!!
Date: 12/19/07 09:22 am Title: Chapter 11
oh~i was crying for Tom's dead *wiping her tears*
but i am glad Bill is escape from the jail
Date: 12/19/07 07:43 am Title: Chapter 1
PLEASE DO WHAT taschatokio SAID!!
I don't care how you do it, just make Tom jump in the train!!
Normally i can't stand happy fluffy endings but this fic is different because almost anything happy happened yet - so they deserve a HAPPY ENDING!
please
please
please
I'm seriously thinking in simply forget this fic and pretend it never existed - don't let me do it!
Date: 12/19/07 05:31 am Title: Chapter 11
OMG NO!!! SERIOUSLY NO!!!
YOU CAN'T FUCKING DO THIS! THAT DID NOT HAPPEN!!!!
TOM SHOULD HAVE GOT ON THE TRAIN AND THEY WOULD BE SO FRICKING HAPPY!!
I don't always like happy endings but this story seemed to stand out from the rest and it's so real, this one NEEDS A HAPPY ENDING! PLEASE!!!
I AM SERIOUSLY BEGGING YOU.
I WILL SCREAM AND CRY IF THEY ARE SEPERATED AND TOM DIES OR BILL DIES ):
They HAVE to be free, together forever!!
You can make Tom spring free from th edogs and jump onto another carriage and climb his way to Bill- but you cannot let them be seperated like this!! ):
Oh, this makes me so emotional!!!
Date: 12/19/07 05:08 am Title: Chapter 11
ohhhh noooooooo
i'm reading anymre cuz is so tragic and sad
i can't stand the drama anymore
why tom had to be shot?
why?
Date: 12/19/07 03:13 am Title: Chapter 11
NO. please, no!
fix this! please or I'll die!!
:((((( you killed me
Date: 12/19/07 01:37 am Title: Chapter 11
OMFG!!! Please write on!!!
Date: 12/19/07 12:32 am Title: Chapter 11
oh my god!
nooooo!
D:
Date: 12/18/07 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 11
................................................I....
*words fail*
Date: 12/15/07 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 10
that was really good. please update soon.