Date: 09/24/08 07:45 pm Title: Keys and Toilets
I really like this story, and it is progressing nicely. But there's been a couple noticable mistakes. If you don't alreday have a beta, I suggest you find one.
Not too big of mistakes, but they certainly popped out into my line of sight. Besides, in a couple scenes, had you not used so much detail on the surroundings, I'd have been lost while figuring out what you mean exactly.
Date: 09/24/08 07:12 pm Title: Poles and Blades
more story please
Date: 09/24/08 07:09 pm Title: Poles and Blades
I'm freaking out right now! I hope they're okayyy
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/24/08 06:09 pm Title: Poles and Blades
Ahhh I wanna know how it ends!
Author's Response: Soon!
Date: 09/24/08 06:01 pm Title: Poles and Blades
Oh hell nooo! :O
*wiggles her way into the fic and tries to save the boys*
Author's Response: xD! Bad girl,gotta see if they can do it by themselves
Date: 09/24/08 05:23 pm Title: Poles and Blades
OOOOOOoooooooo.......... :):) :O
Author's Response: :D!
Date: 09/24/08 05:18 pm Title: Poles and Blades
Oh God.
BILL! D:
Author's Response: :O
Date: 09/24/08 04:49 pm Title: Poles and Blades
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!
Author's Response: xD! That seems to be a lot of reactions.
Date: 09/23/08 11:34 pm Title: Elevator and Noose
NEIN!!! BAD CLIFFIE!!
Author's Response: Eep Sorry!
Date: 09/23/08 10:48 pm Title: Elevator and Noose
omg you're evil or something xD
I love it!
Author's Response: Just a wee bit. :D! Thank you!
Date: 09/23/08 10:30 pm Title: Elevator and Noose
O...M...G.
thats all i can say.
Author's Response: :D!
Date: 09/23/08 09:22 pm Title: Elevator and Noose
OMG, OMG, OMG!!!
This is like a horror movie.
OMG, Bill, NO!
Tom go save him.
Author's Response: :O I know!
Date: 09/23/08 09:04 pm Title: Elevator and Noose
i rlly love this fic update plz!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/23/08 08:43 pm Title: Fear and Employee
OMG!!!I hope they make it out! D:
Author's Response: :D!
Date: 09/23/08 07:34 am Title: Voltage and Blood
omg that's scary..those men are more than cruel..hope bill and tom will find a way to escape!
Author's Response: :DD
Date: 09/22/08 06:08 pm Title: Voltage and Blood
omg this is amazing!
it reminds me of One Flew Over The Cuckoos nest or A Clockwork Orange,
i like it alot!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love those movies. :Prn
Date: 09/22/08 05:06 pm Title: Voltage and Blood
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
Author's Response: xD! Thank you?
Date: 09/21/08 09:38 pm Title: Voltage and Blood
Oh shit fuck fuck fuck D: I'm so nervous for them.
Author's Response: Eek! :D
Date: 09/21/08 08:18 pm Title: Voltage and Blood
omg D:
who cares about the cameras. gtfo xD
Daaaamn I really can't wait to know what's gonna happen to them!
Author's Response: xDrnThank you!
Date: 09/21/08 05:49 pm Title: Voltage and Blood
oh shit oh shit oh shit i don't want them to get caught omg this is so fucking sick i love it! post more soon DX
Author's Response: Thank you!