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Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 6

^_^ Faved! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: EmmyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/09 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

God, if I were Tom, I would totally freak out O.O
But after a while, I think it would be kind of fun xD

Well, I like your writing :P

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: EmmyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/09 04:12 pm Title: Prologue

OMG! Addicted aldready Ö

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 6

This storie was fantastic, sorry for not writting before! its just wow winry! all the description and some dialogues, the idea was awesome and Bill was Bill in here n TOm was Tom! u get me? like their personalities are just like we think they are, no changes no nothing! I trully loved it! nice work!

-Grimada

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked the story!

Reviewer: kayxotokio Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/09 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 6

I lovedd itt i wish all this was real and not illeagal either! god so damn hottt!

Author's Response: Thabks!

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ohlalaa, sexy.

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 4

Lol, chapter 5" ending was hilarious!!

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 6

Wow, that was some kicking ass
sex scene!! Woohhh!! I love this story
by the way, great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed the story =D

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 4

Lol, chapter 5" ending was hilarious!!

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 3

I swear man chapter 4 is freaking funny!!

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

"What's that noise? Is it Tom? I hope not. I don't want him to see me in that ridiculous position. Or maybe I do. Maybe this way he would check me out like he does with those girls."



Dude, that totally cracked me up!!
LMAO! That was funny.

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ohlalaa, sexy.

Reviewer: poXina_venom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/09 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 2

jojojo inzhe Bill

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/09 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 3

LOL. I loved Gustav's little internal monologue. That's pretty much what I think Gusti's mind would sound like, too. And I can see Tom's face as he looked at him, too!

Author's Response: XD Thanks, I like that part ^^

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/09 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 3

LOL. I loved Gustav's little internal monologue. That's pretty much what I think Gusti's mind would sound like, too. And I can see Tom's face as he looked at him, too!

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/09 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 6

Aww! It was beautiful.
Loved it

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: tomilovesbilla Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 6

I liked it:D alot! and I loved the title, it just fit so well! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 06:38 am Title: Chapter 6

I loved it :D It's cute ^^ And hot >3 And just simply great :D
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 12:03 am Title: Chapter 6

OMG I read that all in one sitting... it was amazing... seriously so cute and you wrapped it up SOO well.. very hott. XD I loved it!!! Amazing job.

Author's Response: Thank you, that's very good to hear!

Reviewer: harajuku bill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/09 12:29 am Title: Prologue

C'est magnifique! I love this story! It is so cute and original! :)

Author's Response: Merci! =D

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