Date: 01/03/08 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1
OHMYGOD. That was.. that was.. i can't say a thing. You're such a good writer.
"I felt grateful that the light was of." // Theres a little mistake. It should be off, not of. But im givin' you a 10/10 rating.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And thanks for correcting me... More people should do that. That's the way I learn guys! ^^
Date: 11/27/07 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha, bill got the blanket :P i really loved the spitefullness in Bill, if you write more, im defanitly reading ;)
Author's Response: Won't be writing more on this one, sorry. But thanks ^^
Date: 11/27/07 04:04 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved the nice and easy intimacy you established between Tom and Bill, and even when it got uneasy, it was never horribly awkward, just weirdly embarassing. The nuance is very hard to pin but you did it. And the whole hogging the covers thing, that's priceless. I've shared a bed with my best friend and no matter how I try to make sure I have some blanket in the morning, I'm never able to. That is so true to life. Great job!
Author's Response: Oooh, what a great review! Thanks a lot! I really, really appreciate it! ^^ And yeah.. the covers thing, I do that myself x)
Date: 11/11/07 03:32 am Title: Chapter 1
oOoOoOo i love it! =] x
Author's Response: Haha xD Thanks!!! :D
Date: 11/08/07 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, it was really good! Yes, ok, it can be a little weird, but Tom really overreacted T_T poor little Billie ç_ç only one thing I didn't understand.. he woke up shivering? That means Bill got all the blanket? xD
Author's Response: Haha, yeah he did xD Yes, Bill got the blanket after all ^^ Thanks for the read!
Date: 11/08/07 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow...... the end bit was really sweet! but i didn't quite get the last sentence..........
Author's Response: Thanks :) Well, the meaning with the ending was that Bill had taken his blanket, lol.
Date: 11/08/07 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, that was sweet. :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! :)
Date: 11/07/07 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it! Cute and hot, you should write more :D
I especially liked your Bill, how he went from vulnerable to wicked and his childish side was cute!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think I will :D And 10 points for you for noticing that! ^^
Date: 11/07/07 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really well written and a lovely plot :]].
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Warms my heart :)
Date: 11/07/07 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this flirty & bossy Bill (I can picture like this in real life);p Well if you decide to let the twins plays another round, I will surely read it ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, we all like that don't we? :P rnAnyway, Thanks alot! I may write more.. you guys inspire me so much.
Date: 11/07/07 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
So good, can´t wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Next..? Oh no, forgot to fix that. This is just a one shot :( Sorry. I might make a sequel though... if people want too. rnAgain, sorry :( But thanks for the review!
Date: 11/07/07 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
shit that great
weelllwritten!
Author's Response: Aaaw, thanks hun!
Date: 11/07/07 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was hot and strangely funny! I love how Bill keep pushing the covers, lol
besides that I like their interaction (translation:kiss)
If this is your first fic you should keep writing !I think you have talent...i guess ;)
Author's Response: Haha, thanks alot! rnNo it's not my first fic.. just first twincest fic :P