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Reviewer: allieandtom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh. That was so sad when he got in the car accident but im happy he is okay (: Bill is an amazing brother to him. Sensing there was something wrong (: That was a great :)

Reviewer: Raychillbizarre Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/08 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

"Well, me and my skills accept your challenge." Gustav said, a mischvious drin on his face.

Change the 'd' in 'drin'
to 'g' for 'grin'
and the story was pretty good. :D

I wish it was longer though, but still well written.

Author's Response: Well thank's for pointing that typo out to me! Hmm, maybe I'll add more.

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