Date: 03/23/09 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
For a first time story pretty good! Props props
However some advice I would put spaces in between your paragraphs and each time someone talks
It will help your story flow better and not discourage people when reading. They don't want to have to look for what they are reading.
Other than that very interesting plot. Let's see where this goes *goes to chapter 2* :)
Date: 12/15/08 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 18
ok im sorry i luv the story and all but i really hated this chapter why would tom want them to stop that just really killed it all
hey is there a sqeual to this? i would really like to read it
Date: 12/10/07 06:54 am Title: Chapter 18
aaw soory
I missed a lot of chapters
Bill drunk was a lot of fun xD
but .. hm I don't know if the ending was that great...but I guess as long as they are still friends its cool :)
Author's Response: haha thanks^^
Date: 11/30/07 10:03 am Title: Chapter 12
loooove it!! very touchy ;)
Author's Response: :D glad you liked it.
Date: 11/30/07 08:51 am Title: Chapter 8
cute chap! funny idea with the clownthingy ;D
Author's Response: haha thanks.
Date: 11/29/07 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 18
No offence but the ending kind of sucked. Tom and Bill just break up. That sucks [to me] The story was fantastic and I loved it until the ending.
Author's Response: haha yeah i know.. but i don't know what else to so:( sorry-
Date: 11/29/07 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 18
Damm amazing fic!!! Really good, but the end... Ok, taking that part, fucking amazing :)
Author's Response: haha thanks.
Date: 11/29/07 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 18
aww this was so sweet ! I'll miss this fic! It has been so exciting reading it! :D ! I love it1
Author's Response: iih^^ thanks
Date: 11/29/07 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 18
aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! what a cute little thing!!!! ^^ love it!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks^^
Date: 11/29/07 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
WTF?
no twincest?nothing? nada?
Author's Response: nope.. sorry, not in the end no^^
Date: 11/27/07 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 17
yeah...where's tom??? :S you have me in suspense state!!! i like this story: keep going!!! you're great!!
Author's Response: haha thanks:D
Date: 11/27/07 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 17
wow ! This was really nice !!! :D I like it very much ! It's such an interesting story ! Aow it's so fun this that Gerog didn't now ! ;D hihi, very funny ^^ Like it very much !
Author's Response: ^^ glad you liked it^^
Date: 11/27/07 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 17
o.O what happened? Toooom? where are ya?? mooooooore ^^
Author's Response: haha^^ tomorrow i think the next chapter will be out^we'll see
Date: 11/27/07 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 17
WHERE IS HE?! OMG !! this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good :D
Author's Response: haha thanks..
Date: 11/26/07 09:49 am Title: Chapter 16
Bill is funny when he is drunk. But yeah it is good that now Georg knows too. PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!
Author's Response: haha glad you liked it. i will.
Date: 11/25/07 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
loool! FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!! FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT! BITCH SLAP!!!! lol
you did a realy good job in this thing! ^^
good thing no one got a black eye or a broken arm. xD
Author's Response: haha glad you liked it^^
Date: 11/25/07 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
wow so good ! I liked the fight scene !! !!! Amazing !! U'r really good ! :D:D
Author's Response: iiih! thanks^^
Date: 11/23/07 07:26 am Title: Chapter 15
that was the best..really, it was very funny, Gerog being drunk and hilarious^^ and well...yeah..haha..it was cute also, but i feel bad for David that he has to quit T.T and yeah, they should tell Georg :)
Author's Response: haha thanks^^
Date: 11/22/07 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
wow this is just as good as always !! It's both funny, sensitive and scary, I like it very much ! And you update fast and stuff, so it's just perfect ! :D hihi GOOD WORK!
Author's Response: :D:D thanks!!=)
Date: 11/21/07 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1
i love your writing!! you are so good.. so talented. i have laughed and cried so much. you are wonderful
Author's Response: aww!! thanks!!:D you just made my day!! :D