Date: 11/21/07 02:43 am Title: Chapter 14
wow..I just found this fanifction, its really good^^ I hope that David is being truthful...
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 11/20/07 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 14
ohhhh no, so Jorg is behind it all! wow! i just read this whole thing & it's REALLY good. your english isn't that bad - it's mostly understandable, and definitely a lot better than i could write in another language. sometimes you use the wrong words and spellings and stuff but it is definitely obvious that you're trying hard. do you have a beta or someone who reads your stories before you post them and makes edits? i really like this story and i would be willing to do that for you if you want me to? e-mail me at ohtweener@aol.com if you're interested =)
Author's Response: oh hehe thanks i will^^
Date: 11/20/07 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 14
What the hell is Jorg doing !? I really wanna know whats going on in his mind.. hmm, I don't like him ! But god ! This is just so good ! I feel sorry for Jost, difficult possition he's in..
“Hey! Where did Dill and Jom go?” Georg asked confused.
haha I laughed so hard about this ! XD so funny ! :D XD
Wow this is just really good ! I hope you write more soon ! ^^
Author's Response: hehe thanks so much^^rnyeah i think the next chapter will be out..uhm tomorrow? maybe^^ we'll see. glad you liked it.
Date: 11/18/07 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
I LOVE IT!! I hope the next chapter will be soon? XX
Author's Response: i hope so too^^ well it will.. thanks^^
Date: 11/18/07 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 13
Sehr sehr gut ich liebe diese Geschichte LOL!!!
Date: 11/18/07 08:42 am Title: Chapter 13
yeah chap. 9 and 10 made me cry !!
Aww 11-13 so good ! : D I read too fast so the chapters end too fast xD haha, really really good ! I like it very much ! And you utdate often so that's great ! : D Keep up the good work! ^^
Author's Response: aww thank you so much^^ yeah i will update soon. i know how irritating it is when people are slow updater's^^
Date: 11/17/07 09:50 am Title: Chapter 13
ugh david sucks ass, ihate him :S
Author's Response: hehe^^
Date: 11/16/07 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think the rating should be higher than G... :S
Date: 11/16/07 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'mgonnareadmore!!!
Date: 11/16/07 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 12
aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww, poor Bill? this is killing me
Author's Response: heheh XD
Date: 11/16/07 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
what's going on, what did they say? david sucks!!:P
Author's Response: haha XD
Date: 11/15/07 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
Geez ! Chap.9 and 10 O.o Made me cry(in a good way) This is such a wonderful story, I relly like it ! ^^ You write very good too and yeah I just like everthing about it ! Well done :D
Author's Response: awww thank you so much! :D did they make you cry? O_o..
Date: 11/15/07 11:48 am Title: Chapter 10
what happens next? :( update soon hun !!
Author's Response: hehe i will^^
Date: 11/11/07 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 8
I've just read all the chapters and I have to say that I totally adore it! You write so good (some spelling mistakes here and there but nothing disturbing) and this story is just so good! I has everything in it !! Just so frekking amazing ! Gaah !! I hope you write more soon ^^
Author's Response: aww! thanks, you just made my day :DrnMy English isn't so good, but i'm learning^^ rnthanks so much
Date: 11/11/07 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
Bill's sweet.. Love this chapter!! Really!
Author's Response: aww thanks :D
Date: 11/11/07 09:55 am Title: Chapter 8
awwww! such a cute moment! more more more more please! XD
Author's Response: haha.. yeah more is on its way.. just not yet^^ glad you liked it^^
Date: 11/11/07 09:54 am Title: Chapter 8
that was so cute!!
when will you be writing more?
please soon:D!!
Author's Response: haha thanks.. i don't know^^ soon i think^^ its so fun to write for you guys^^
Date: 11/11/07 05:57 am Title: Chapter 1
ugh i can't wait!!
but good idea with the clown, i hate clowns. but poor Bill, Tom shouldn't have punched him.... come please hurry and update!! :D
Author's Response: haha... i got the dream idea actually from my own dream^^ it was almost like the one Tom had.. glad you liked it^^ i will update soon, i hope..