Date: 09/16/11 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. Very sweet with a sense of innocence still in the way that they interact. Nice nice. :)
Author's Response: Oh thank you! What a great way to start a day, reading lovely reviews like this :)
Date: 08/27/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww that was a beautiful one-shot! Definitely the perfect way to Christen their new home. Wonderfully written as well :)
Author's Response: Oh thank you! Glad you liked it. I'd love to go home to that too ;)
Date: 07/27/10 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ;>
Author's Response: :) Thank you! I'd move every day if it were like this.
Date: 06/08/10 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Breathtakingly beautiful! I love every second and every little part of it! Amazingly written. Passionate and PWP without being too smutty or raw. Perfect!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so happy about this lovely review, thank you so so much :)
Date: 03/30/10 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
So intimate! Very nicely written. :]
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Date: 02/12/09 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderful story. I really loved how this was written in a kind of abstract manner. It's was such a great read!
Author's Response: Wheee! Thank you so much, I'm so happy you liked it - the style has been bothering me a bit, like whether I made the right choice, so I'm glad you thought it was good. Abstract is how it was meant to be :)
Date: 02/01/09 02:19 am Title: Chapter 1
To be honest it did start out really good, but after they got off the elevator all I could read were the words...Bill, Tom, Bill, Tom, Bill, Tom....etc. There was hardly any nouns used. U could have used him and he every now and then, I think when u switched over the POV you became worried we wouldn't know who was who. I think it would have been better if it was from Tom's or Bill's point of view. Sorry I don't mean to be harsh. It was good otherwise.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad the beginning was good at least :) What I actually tried was to create an urgent feel to it, as was with the original one - like the feel of wanting someone so badly, feel of passion, but unfortunately it apparently failed.
Date: 10/07/08 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
nice.. x
Author's Response: Thanks - sorry it took me ages to respond.
Date: 09/16/08 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Guh. Hot. I am without words. This style was amazing. Ngh.
So hot! -leaves to be incoherent elsewhere-
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you :D
Date: 09/13/08 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww i loved it cute in kinda a dirty way lolz
Author's Response: Thanks :) Mixing up cute and dirty is the best kind.