Date: 08/20/12 07:49 am Title: Movie night
lol omg eeek fangirl moment
Date: 07/12/09 09:17 pm Title: Movie night
keep this story goin baby!!
eeeeep!!! i totally love it!!
Bill is soooo DAMN SEXY!!
=D
Date: 05/03/09 02:56 pm Title: Movie night
AHHH I NEED ANOTHER ONE THIS IS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!
Date: 08/23/08 12:49 am Title: Movie night
this fanfic is amazing
i absolutely love it
continue on please
Date: 07/22/08 03:49 pm Title: Movie night
Please carry on!! A nice, original way of introducing them and JP is great! Just a couple of technical things, a new persons speech should be on a new line. That's just a convention that everyone should follow. Also, emotions and actions should be integrated into the text and shown, not told. No more of these *sigh*. Try and use proper English - sounds dead stuck up, but still. 'Thanx' and 'cya' etc. belong on msn. Information should be integrated into the text instead of having a bracket with (x had always wanted ... so ...), have 'I knew that x wanted ... so ...' or something along those lines.
You have a lot of potential, just a couple of hiccups that need straightening out.
I expect more soon! Can't wait...
Date: 07/12/08 10:27 pm Title: Movie night
Great story! Love the fact that Bill and Lana can't kiss because everyone's interupting them! Hilarious!
P.S. You should go on!!
Date: 07/10/08 04:29 pm Title: Movie night
I like the story so far... but... I think that there needs to be more suspense. It just seems like everything is too perfect.
Date: 07/09/08 09:12 am Title: Movie night
please post more!!!!!! brilliant!!!
Date: 07/08/08 03:54 am Title: Movie night
ooooommmmmmgggggg!!! this roxxxx! you should totally go on. It was so funny!! omg i will totally favorite this story!!!
ur the best!!
MM
Date: 07/02/08 03:52 pm Title: Movie night
you rock write more please pleasy please!!!
Date: 06/29/08 05:56 pm Title: Movie night
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW! i don't want it to end1 That was awesome! Can you write a second story to this PLEASE! It would be REALLY Awesome if you did! PLEASE!
LUVELLES and a BIG HUG!,
BcamelleK =^D
PLEASE!
Date: 05/16/08 01:42 pm Title: Movie night
YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE OR I WILL KILL YOU!! >:D
Date: 05/16/08 01:09 pm Title: Standing on my own feet
lol, a gay guy? xD
i liked this one :)
Date: 05/14/08 01:25 am Title: Movie night
yeeessss you should go on. like right now. gogogogogogogogogogogo.
Date: 05/01/08 09:50 pm Title: Movie night
Please go on! What takes you so long? We need more and we need it now!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/29/08 02:26 pm Title: Movie night
please please please go on please!!
Date: 04/09/08 07:27 pm Title: Movie night
omg i loved it cant wait til the next one!!
Date: 04/02/08 04:00 pm Title: Movie night
wow update soon plz!!!!
Date: 04/02/08 03:56 pm Title: The phone call and a movie night
grr lucky duck...