Date: 10/24/08 09:14 am Title: Chapter 6
This is just... the sweetest thing I ever read. :* Bill was being so Bill in the beginning, I can totally imagining him saying that when they were little (and now too, for that matter XD). And the school scene broke my heart a little, I can't stand seeing Tomi that sad. "Because it starts with B" - Awww!!! Update soon.
Author's Response: thank you!) i am so glad you liked it, thank you so much,)) hugs :*
Date: 10/24/08 07:25 am Title: Chapter 6
It's very good :) Although they are definitely way to little to express any sensuality towards each other, trust me, I have a little brother and I'm a biologist, I know how kids grow :) T&B are special, no doubt in that, but it's a human body thing, hormones and stuff - it just doesn't work that way at the age of six, and, most definitely, four. Try nine or ten, that would be more realistic :)
But you're doing a very nice job, like I said, I love your story :)
Author's Response: oh i am so sorry if i made you feel like i meant any kind of umm any sensuality between them, you know, in that way.. um, i know they're too little, i didn't mean that at all, i am so sorry. thank you, though ))
Date: 10/24/08 05:40 am Title: Chapter 6
Tom is soooooooooo cute
and bill as a present is so adorable
Author's Response: oh thank you so much)))
Date: 10/20/08 06:35 am Title: Chapter 5
wow, i love this story!!! its so different, but wonderful. i hope you update soon. keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much, i really hope to update soon, so sorry for making you wait! thank you ))
Date: 10/18/08 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
I've come across this wonderful fic tonight and I enjoyed it so much!
The plot is intriguing and all the story flows smoothly, leaving the reader unable to stop.
I appreciated a lot how carefully you depicted all the carachters and their feelings and , oh god, I was so moved by this sweet Tom taking so much care of his little weak brother...
Can't wait to read new chapters!
Author's Response: oh thank you so much)) i'm so so glad you liked it! and oh well, i'm really thankful. and i hope to stay good enough, i'll do my best, i promise
Date: 10/13/08 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
AWWWWWWWW this is top on meh faves. lol jorgs an ass... great story!
Author's Response: thank you so so much!)
Date: 10/11/08 11:24 am Title: Chapter 5
Awww! How cute and adorable! :D Tomi being such a good big brother. :]
Update sooon!
Author's Response: thank you so much!) i hope to update soon)) thank you)
Date: 10/10/08 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
I LOOOOOOVE THIS
Author's Response: i am sooooo glad you do!)
Date: 10/10/08 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was a really emotional chapter. The image of Bill and Tom running up to Jorg and Odette was so heart-breaking. (Oh, and I loved the song Bill was singing in the bath...so adorable!)
Author's Response: i'm so so so glad you liked it) and i'm glad you liked the song)))) thank you very much)
Date: 10/10/08 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
I cant find the words to express how wonderful this story is. You made me tear up more than once with it, which is a good thing since not much can make me go all emotional any more...I mean fiction-wise. I like how some parts are exactly as if from a children's book - magical and confusing at the same time. And the way you manage to show us the world through the eyes of two very small children is exceptional. I mean I have read fics where they twins were small children and there you could just always expect the writer to slip and sentences to pop up which were totally unrealistic coming from the mouth of 4 or 5 year old. But here, it's all perfect.
I could go on and on praising this amazing story, but I say only this: in the near future expect and email with very good news in it...:) Criptic, huh? But, you'll see.
Hugs.
Author's Response: oh god, i think i too cannot tell you how happy your words have made me, more than that. i even told Mom, cause she was like, "are you smiling or are you about to cry?", and i was like, "what?" :)) i am more than thakful, i so hope not to disappoint you ever, and well..) i'm waiting for an email..)) whatever it is (and i think i maybe have some ideas (thank you!!!), i don't think it will make me as happy as i am at the moment, smiling and typing this reply for you)
hugs back ))
Date: 10/10/08 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love your fic more than anything else i'm reading now.
Author's Response: oh wow, thank you so much.) this means a lot, thank you)
Date: 10/10/08 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
I adore this. I feel bad for the grown up love triangle (as I've decided to call it XD) as well. I just hope that Tom won't grow resentful towards Bill later on...
Author's Response: oh thank you sooo much!) i hope he won't, too))) thank you, really.) this means a lot
Date: 10/10/08 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awwwwww, that was too cute ^^
Mini Bill and Mini Tom, and Bill want's to be an angel (oh, he IS an angel! They both are) b29;
Author's Response: they are, you're right))) rnthank you so much!)
Date: 10/10/08 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
i hate Jorg...
ahhhahahah
Author's Response: oh why?rnhe's just unhappy)) well, that's how i feel)rnthank you so much for letting me know what you think))
Date: 10/10/08 11:24 am Title: Chapter 4
I really, really like this. It's adorable, the way you write the interaction between Bill and Tom. And you manage to fit some details others would've left out as well, and I love that. I don't even care if you make this Tom/Bill (and that's saying a lot), cause I'd definitely be satisified by the cute brotherly love. As long as nothing gets between them, of course.
To sum it up, I love this, and please update soon?
Author's Response: oh, thank you so much! i hope i won't disappoint you with what will be going on, once i get to some action) rnand i've just updated) hope you'll like it) thank you <3
Date: 10/07/08 08:35 am Title: Chapter 4
aaw it's such a cute story =) pls update soon!!! x3
Author's Response: thank you soo much!) hopefully, i will tomorrow or the day after tomorrow!) thank you so much!)
Date: 10/05/08 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
amazing! i can't wait to see what happens :D
Author's Response: thank you)) hope, you'll like what happens))
Date: 10/04/08 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Fuck. More, please.
Author's Response: thank you,) i do hope to update soon)) thank you so much
Date: 10/04/08 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hey, your story is so interesting, i really like it, its very unique and sometimes i worry you will kill Bill, but please dont :D, but anyways great story keep writing! its really good!
Author's Response: oh heeey, please don't worry about that, i promise i'm not killing him :) thank you so much, i'm really glad you liked it!)
Date: 10/04/08 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love it and you and the banner (xD)! seriously wonderful, and I cannot wait until the next chapter
Author's Response: god thank you so much <3