Date: 11/13/08 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
awww that's all I can say. ^-^.
Author's Response: and that's enough to make me thank you :)
Date: 11/05/08 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
aww tht was cute
Author's Response: thank you)
Date: 10/27/08 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
AWE!! That is absolutely ADORABLE!!
Author's Response: thank you SO much!!! :))
Date: 10/27/08 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
That was the sweetest thing ever, I love this story. Please update soon they are so adorable.
Author's Response: oh thank you so so much! :) i hope to update soon!
Date: 10/25/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awwww. I love how Tom's such a good big brother. I just wanna hug him till he squeaks!
Update sooooon! :D
Author's Response: thank you so much for your review, i feel like i'm falling in love with it!) honestly i am! and i do hope to update soon, thank you *hugs till hears a quiet squeak* xDD
Date: 10/25/08 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
;_____; So cute.
*Reads More*
Author's Response: thank you :) hope you'll enjoy it ))
Date: 10/25/08 09:46 am Title: Chapter 6
awww cause it starts with a B!
:D I really love this
bill and tom are so attached.
it's so sweet!
Author's Response: thank you :D i'm soo glad you liked it! :*
Date: 10/25/08 01:35 am Title: Chapter 6
its so cuuuute
Author's Response: ahh, thank you *^^*
Date: 10/24/08 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
fuck i'm crying & smiling at the same time... it's amazing story. i love the way Tomi treats his baby brother. i like difference in the age of brothers. adding to faves & waiting for more <3
Author's Response: thank you so very much, and i am happy that you're okay with the age difference, because well, you know.) thank you! i'll try to update soon, i promise!)
Date: 10/24/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I need to submit another review just because of your really nice response to my previous review. :D
My next review, I'm gonna post quotes. Right now I'm just a little too lazy to go back. Hahaha.
I just remember reading somewhere that Simone named her boys Tom and Bill, not Thomas and Wilhelm/William. She wanted simple names because she knew they'd be trouble and wanted something easy to yell when they were causing mischief. Looks like she was right. Hahaha :D
Btw, do you have a beta? If you do, or need another one, feel free to email me at mad_violinsane@yahoo.com! :D
Author's Response: oh thank you:)
well, that was definitley clever of Simone to call them just that, but umm i'm writing fiction, so it's like i can do whatever i want, right?;D and i somehow like to know that people's names are shorts for something, you know?)
rnso again, i am sorry for mentioning Wilhelm ,(
rnand yes i've got a beta! amazing Rosy beta reads for me. but i cannot express just how happy i am that you'd like to be my beta! tell me please if there are any mistakes we haven't noticed, okay? and agian, thankyouthankyou*!) *pronaunced like sexysexy* xD
Date: 10/24/08 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I wasn't trying to say it was bad in my review. Just that it has a different feeling to it. It doesn't come off as a crappy story with bad grammar or anything like that at all. Your grammar is actually great.
Author's Response: oh thank you, i meant i was sorry for.. umm.. that is doesn't seem natural to you? you know? like, that kind of bad, you know, and it's my fault, and i'm still sorry for that..)
Date: 10/24/08 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh that was so cute!!! I like it when Gustav got up for Tom. PLease Update soon
Author's Response: thank you! i'll really do my best to update as soon as possible, thank you!:)
Date: 10/24/08 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
I like it, im still excited for more :D im fairly sure i will stick with you until the end, its a great story keep writing i cant wait :D
Author's Response: oh my god, thank you so much!) i can't really believe this is really happening to me and i am actually reading this your review, that makes me so so so happy. thank you and hugs! :*
Date: 10/24/08 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh my dearest!
I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw this wonderful chapter is for me too!
I could never thank you enough for all the times my heart melts reading what you write about this two sweethearts!
The idea of Bill wrapping himself in a blanket with a bow is simply fantastic! And sweet Tom unwrapping him...
Moreover, I have to notice that the knowledge you have on infant psychology is amazing. Any emotion and thought are so well expressed that I had the feeling I was in front of two real kids.
I quote:
"Yeah, Betty is a nice name," Tom agreed. "Because it starts with B."
Nothing more to say!
Ah, just one last thing: I LOVE this teacher! I wish I had one like that when I started attending school (that's about 100 years ago... XD)
Author's Response: oh my, I cannot express how happy your words have made me! of course this chaper's for you, too, and so much more is for you! I wish I could do more for you, to let you know just how thankful I am!
(and I wish I had a teacher like this, too. I'm soso glad you felt this way, too)
you are beyond amazing. love :*
Date: 10/24/08 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
The part where Bill wrapped himself up as a present was so wonderful! And the way Gustav stuck up for Tom...this chapter really gave me the warm fuzzies!
Author's Response: oh thank you so much!) and your review made me smile (and it keeps making) lol. (hugs)
Date: 10/24/08 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ahhh! That was so adorable!!!!
The only OCD part of me just flinches when people say Bill's real name is Wilhelm, lol. And of course the age difference makes me fidgety. But it's not because of you, it's just because I can't imagine them any other way.
I do love this though! It's so pretty and cute :) The boys are so adorable!!!!! But the present thing... now let's see Tom and Bill have the present thing when they are older. lol :)
Still - good writing, very realistic! I could picture the first day of school quite easily!
Author's Response: thank you so very much and sorry for mentioning Wilhelm ^^ i'll try to avoid it later, okay? :) i'm so glad you liked it.))
Date: 10/24/08 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh, how cute is Tom!!
Author's Response: oh^^ thank you)
Date: 10/24/08 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's such a cute story.
Thank you so much for writing & posting it. :D
I looove it
Author's Response: thank you for your kind words ,)
Date: 10/24/08 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
This story is written very strangely. I feel like maybe you're writing creatively in a style and at a level that just goes right over my head. Either that or English isn't your first language.
Author's Response: well, it's definitely not my first language. (( i'm really sorry i'm not good enough, oh.
Date: 10/24/08 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
That was really cute =] I like how concerned Tom was about Bill. And I LOVED the beginning, when he was like, bragging XD That was pretty funny.
The school part was sad, though. Haha, GO Gustav! =] Major props for trying to help Tom get back to Bill, lol. And at the end, when he said 'Betty is a nice name b/c it starts with a *B*'
SO CUTE!
Author's Response: oh thank you so so much, i'm gald you liked it, thank you) 'Well, your penname is nice, too, since it has an *I* second' (c)~my imaginary Tom. (hugs)