Date: 12/28/08 03:38 pm Title: Prolouge
Awesome, please continue :)
.. and yey, your swedish, wich means that I can snacka svenska med dej XD haha ;) men snälla fortsätt! detta var jätte bra :)
Date: 12/07/08 10:23 pm Title: Prolouge
oh and i suggest Beta Reader its hard to understand because alot of the sentences are not right.
Date: 12/07/08 10:20 pm Title: Prolouge
you know LaFee has the same birthday as mee!! im soo happy
Date: 09/09/08 05:17 pm Title: Prolouge
Sorry, I couldn't really understand too much of what was going on because of the language barrier. The way you put your sentences together didn't make much sense.
Date: 09/09/08 04:41 pm Title: Prolouge
I like the idea of the story... And there certainly is potential... But I couldn't understand a lot of what you were saying.
I understand that you're from Sweden and that you're not great with English. That's why I sugest a beta-reader. They catch mistakes that you wouldn't think about or things that you miss.
There is a list for beta-readers under the heading Main Menu. If you really need one, but you don't want to search, I'll help. =3
Date: 09/09/08 03:12 pm Title: Prolouge
I sugest you get a beta-reader, the spelling is really bad, and sometimes its hadr to understand what you mean.
I like the idea of your story though. ;)