Date: 09/17/08 01:22 pm Title: Varg
Why didn't I read this sooner? Seriously, I love this. I'm in love with it. That guy doesn't seem all that bad, I really, really hope that he'll find Tom before it's too late. I think you describe everything wonderfully, especially the changes Tom is going through. Did I ever tell you how much your writing has improved? I mean, you early fics, while wonderful and hot and everything, had quite a bit of grammatical errors and the like, and there's nothing like that in here. Also, you elaborate a bit more now.
Anyway, I also love the titles of the chapters. Wolf is English, Lupus is Latin, right? And Varg is Swedish, isn't it? I mean, I know it means wolf in Swedish but still xD
So, all in all, update ASAP. Love ya.
Author's Response: becca <3 missed ya girlie! you like it ??? oh my God, that means so, so much to me because I love writing this story! The grammatical errors not existing anymore are all due to my beta, Steinsgrrl, she's doing quite the job with me ,) you're right about the names for wolf, each chap is gonna have the word in a new language, I already have like twenty languages to pick from xD thank you so muc for this, it means the world to me that you like this one! much love <3 luce
Date: 09/17/08 02:42 am Title: Lupus
I´m so curious! I don´t want Tom to die or become an animal. :´( Promise that the woolf substances in him will make him only a little bit .. ehm... more passionate? o:-)
Amazing story.
Author's Response: he's not gonna die, I promise ! about the wolf thing though, I haven't really mentioned werewolves yet, now have I ,) but I'm not promising anything. thank you so much, it means the world to me that you reviewed this !
Date: 09/17/08 02:30 am Title: Wolf
oh... I like it :-)
Author's Response: Thank you !
Date: 09/16/08 06:57 pm Title: Lupus
I love this story! It'd be interesting to see what happens. This isn't by any chance a Harry Potter crossover, is it? Because the as of yet unnamed werewolf person was going to England, and that where Remus Lupin lives.. Or maybe that's my brain suffering from Harry Potter withdrawl.
Author's Response: nope xD no HP crossover, the man is not Lupin ,p thank you so much, it means a lot to me that you reviewed !!!
Date: 09/16/08 12:35 pm Title: Lupus
love love love
I love brotherly love
because thats all it is so far
they care so much about eachother its so sweet
I really worry about Tom
and who is this guy from England?
you rally made me curious now =)
I hope Toms temper doesnt get worse, i dont want him to hurt anyone
Luce...your writing is so good I forget about all my problems when I read and I really get sucked into the story, it feels like im really there, like a part f it
Author's Response: me loves brotherly love too <3 and me loves em for reviewing me <3 and me loves this review because it makes me love em even more <3 and me loves you <3
Date: 09/15/08 09:36 am Title: Lupus
You updated n______n your story is the only reason why I won't commit a suicide, school makes me want to die all the time x_x"
Poor Tomi, he was bitten by the werewolf and acts weird.
I hope that man will find Tom before he transforms into some monster. What if he bites Bill? T____T one strange Kaulitz is enough:P
Your favorite sick fuck Dixi wants some twincest!:D
You should update more often, once a week is not enough for me, and I think that for anyone else, too :P
buzi;*
Author's Response: oh my little pole, if you do that I might have to wake you from the dead oO how could I have done this without you? 'one strange Kaulitz' aren't they just generally really weird xD updating today because you asked me to girlie, but if I don't get more time to wright soon I'm back to the once a week thing again. love ya iza of mine <3 kisses
Date: 09/15/08 12:59 am Title: Lupus
Ah, poor Tomi. He doesn't understand why he keeps yelling at his twin. *hugs them both* I'm definately liking this. More soon?
Author's Response: oh thank you !!! God, reviews make me so happy <3 more today actually ,) hope you like !
Date: 09/15/08 12:18 am Title: Lupus
Of course we liked it! :)
Author's Response: hihi, thanks <3
Date: 09/14/08 06:00 pm Title: Lupus
I feel really bad for the nameless attacker. He seems so scared, so sad, I really feel fo him, it's not his fault.
I like the side effects you're giving Tom, the rapid healing, the momentary mood swings, maybe he'll sudenly like meat a whole lot more?
I still can't figure out his and Bill's relationship, I'm feeling something more-than-twin like, but then again, it IS Bill and Tom.
The tapes, can't they look at them and see that a man went into the bathroom but didn't come out? That would help, even if there were no cameras in the bathroom (I'm sure there weren't b/c that would be sketchy).
How's the guy gonna find/get to Tom? It's not exactly easy. Seeing as he is super famous and all.
I'm a little bit worried about what's gonna happen when Tom does change. Right now Bill feels safe w/ him as you so blatently pointed out. But after? Bill's kinda fragile in his own way, this will be a huge thing to get over.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Also, DNA, there must have been plenty at the sight of the attack, and on Tom, though it was in a bathroom, lots of DNA I suppose.
OK, update soon (in a week I guess) and good job so far!
Love ya!
Author's Response: ah, the attacker is a real chalenge to write, I want him to come off just right, happy you're seeing my point about his character ! but then again, you always seem to get my meaning behind things ,) ah, and guessing things that you aren't supposed to be guessing xD but I'm not saying you're right just yet ,) lol, bill and tom can act like real twincesters some times can't they, OMG did you see them holding hands at the VMAs (at least that seemed like what they were doing, because if they weren't then they were just wearing these magnetic rings or something) the thing about the tapes will get clearer as we go along ,) lol, you and your questions which it never seems I'm able to answer, you ask the right things I suppose ,p 'right now Bill feels safe' yeah...but you know...I have a way of twisting things...not saying !!! DNAs will be mentioned I think, God you sound like a proper investigator xD had you been the police in this fic I don't think it would have been very long ,) and that's a compliment by the way, you have a way of seing things about my stories that I don't even notice at times. updating tonight actually, hope it'll please you although it doesn't answer much of your questions, those will come later. Much love <3 luce
Date: 09/14/08 05:46 pm Title: Lupus
I love this line, but I haven't figured out why yet
"But now he’s running. Running from the police that will eventually begin looking for him. Running to find that boy. And running out of time."
Amazing job on the story!
Author's Response: oh my God xD that is one of my favorites too ,) thanksies ! I can't tell you enough how much it means to me that you like this !!!
Date: 09/14/08 05:27 pm Title: Lupus
ahh!! i hope that guy can find Tom so he can help Tom!! :o and ahh.. poor Bill he keeps getting yelled at by his brother *hugs* but its with Tom's changing condition?? yea?? [it better be!! >o] well i can't wait for more~~ :DDD
Author's Response: lol, don't we all ,) the weird behavior is a symptom of sorts yes! thank you so much for this, love ya for reviewing !!!
Date: 09/14/08 04:25 pm Title: Lupus
I love how this is going so far! It's so suspensful and mysterious. And have I mentioned that I love the thought of werewolf Tom? ;)
Author's Response: lol, I'm drawing a picture of him, werewolf Tom that is, couldn't contain myself, he's hot !!! thanksies for this love, you know it means a lot to me !
Date: 09/14/08 03:44 pm Title: Wolf
I will repeat my self here!
You are getting VERY good at writing story's, VERY good!
The suspense is tangible!
Who were the Werewolf? Are we going to meet him later in the story?
Why England?????
Is it someone we have heard of before????
What was he doing in Germany???
Is he Gay??? ;)
(Me and my stupid questions...)
The line's about Lady Fortune were funny... LOL :)
You just HAVE to finish this one, Please!!!!!
I looked up some pictures of Pomeranian on Google, and.... AAAAWWWWWWW how cute!!!!
Once again, You are getting VERY good at this...
Thank You!
Author's Response: anders OO God, I cannot begin to tell you how much this means to me, I doubt that words would cover it anyway! thank you so so much, seriously you have got to know what this does to me ! I've just had a really sad night, but this certainly did good to my selfasteem and my feelings ! thank you, I'm repeating myself aren't I ,) oh well, can't seem to say it enough THANK YOU !!! I am so happy you like this story and I do hope you will like the next chapter, which I'm posting as soon as I've replied to this review by the way! as for the questions, all I can say is that they will be answered when the time is right ,) exept the gay thing, cus he's not xD lol and yeah, the pomerainians are cute, although perhaps they're all little killers just waiting to take over the planet oO love you so much for doing this anders, you mean a lot to me <3 love luce
Date: 09/13/08 11:25 am Title: Wolf
Hey girl ^^
Found this story to ;-)
First I was like drown to this story because of the banner, which is like really beautiful. great job dixxi ;-)
And that I read the story and was immediately hooked.
I think that I know why I like your stories so much ^^ It's because you seem to read my mind :-p Now really, I like stories about wolfs. I even wrote one :-p so I'm really excited about this one, and I'll be waiting for the updated ;-)
speeking of being at the wrong place at the wrong time :-p
I was wondering who the young man was.
"What the hell is Miss Fortune doing tonight, having a tea party?"
probably :-p I loved the suspense here, really. So he can't control himself when he's like this? that must be awful.
"They had sat down facing the toilets and suddenly Tom had just asked Bill. ‘If there’s a Scottish person wearing a kilt, where does he go?’"
Haha, great question actually, didn't thought about that :-p
"And he feels the living heat of the velvet liquid pouring slowly down his wrist and tickling his skin."
I loved the description of the way Bill feels when he sees what happened to Tom like everything just faded and all he could see was Tom. I think I stopped breathing for a second ;-)
And then when all of it comes back to him, the voices, great writing ;-)
"They’re heavy, but he feels all that much better when Bill collapses into them, burying his face in Tom’s neck and crying silently into his dreads."
I loved how Tom only sad Bill's name when he woke up. I shows there strong connection although I have no idea how there relationship is for the rest.
"“You really expect me to answer that truthfully with all the medicine I have floating around my system?” Now that Bill was there, Tom easily falls into his old habits. Cheeky and cocky as ever."
I think that did shows that Tom only can be like him with Bill by his side =D
I keep wondering about there relationship, I don't know what to think :-p I'm curious now ^^
"“Love you, Tomi!” It’s not often that they say it, they know it all the time. But Bill needs to say it, needs to hear it from the only person it matters to hear it from.
“Love you, too Bill!”"
That was like really sweet, how the want to protect each other. Poor things.
I wonder what's going to happen next. Great beginning by the way ^^
Can't wait ^^
Author's Response: lol, dixxi is so getting credit for drawing people to my fic now !!! it really is an amazing banner ! and girl, you say I read your mind, you've just prooven that you read mine just as well. This story means so much to me and this is definitively the best review I've gotten for it! you understand me so well !!! You'll get to know more of the mysterious man as the story goes along, I promise ! lol and the kilt thing is just something I came to think of once xD and oh my god, you totally got my point with Bill only being able to see Tom, that was a really important detail and I'm so happy it worked out! The twins relationship will become clearer as the story moves along! thank you so, so much for this kris, you know how much you mean to me right? love ya girlie <3 luce
Date: 09/10/08 05:28 pm Title: Wolf
Interesting beginning.
So Tom's a werewolf too now?
Author's Response: thanks ,) who knows ?
Date: 09/10/08 02:23 pm Title: Wolf
Woww!
luce,
sweetheart of mine!
what a beautiful baby is this?
something so new and interesting from the specialist of the fics.
i just admired the beginning , so well written hooked the reader and keep it there.
i felt my eyes stuck in the screen and my mind in the areas which describe with your unique writing way.
go on babe.
i am with you always.
much love
chris
p.s. i was in crete for some days and when i came back i just "ate" the site to find your new work. i believed that it would be here.
glad for it:)))
Author's Response: aw, chris, always such a pleasure to read your reviews ! I am so extreemely happy that you enjoy this one because it is a fic that means so much to me ! lol, and as for 'eating' the site for my work ,) THANK YOU I feel so honored ! love ya girl <3 yours luce
Date: 09/09/08 10:33 am Title: Wolf
LUCYFERrrrrrrrrrrr! YOU POSTED A NEW STORY, WHAT A SURPRISE! (ehem ehem XD)
I don't usually read paranormal fics (well, not at all), but heyyy it's Lucy who writes this story and I know it will be BRILIANT. It already is *____* mysterical, dark, but also fluffy.
Your pole loves you and can't wait to see new chappi n_n (hmm i think i should set up some official Firelucy fanclub XD)
buziu-buziu;*
Author's Response: lol, I love the name lucifer, so hot ! aw, I'm so happy you'll read the story for me, and even happier that you might like it xD your chap for the fic you wanted is sent to beta by the way ,) I love my pole and the next chap for this one will be up shortly, hugs iza, love ya <3
Date: 09/09/08 03:32 am Title: Wolf
Hmmm... Intriguing. :)
Author's Response: lol, thanks !
Date: 09/08/08 04:52 pm Title: Wolf
Great! Next chapter, please!!
Author's Response: coming soon my dear !
Date: 09/08/08 05:55 am Title: Wolf
omg omg omg
I did say I would read didnt I? :P
and you know what...I love it O_O
Every word...and the story, its so...unique and yeah a bit scary. Whats gonna happen to Tom now? And gosh...I kind of cried when Bill found him in the bathroom...Im way too emotional today might be because I havent slept because I was up watching the VMAs all night xD
I cant wait for more chapters! I really like the kind of mysterious, spooky feeling I got from this one ^^
Author's Response: it means so much to me that you'd read this for me girl !!! know that! and OMG OO the VMA's THEY HELD HANDS !!! I swear, there was no mistaking when they were riding that whicked monster truck that Tom reached out and held Bill's hand SO CUTE !!! okay, sorry bout that, crazy fan girl moment xD we all have them from time to time. Thank you so much for this em, you know I love you for it <3