Date: 09/21/08 01:47 pm Title: Vlk
Great chapter, but I have nothing constructive to say except good job.
Author's Response: thank you, makes me smile :)
Date: 09/21/08 01:32 pm Title: Vlk
oh:) when I saw that you had write new chapter I was like "Yupie!" :)
Author's Response: lol, happy you were, I went yupie when I saw you had reviewed !
Date: 09/21/08 01:27 pm Title: Vlk
Oh Luce... your update just made my day (evening, whatever). So, Tomi's getting territorial, is he? Oh my. That is a trait of werewolves, isn't it? Though I can't quite think of Bill as Tom's cub... xD Anyway, I really love this, so you'd better update soon!
Author's Response: becca, darling, you make me so happy you know! oh yes, Tomi's deffinitively getting territorial ,) he's hot like that don't you think? lol, I'm updating in about ten minutes becca my love, hope you'll like the next chapter as well !
Date: 09/21/08 09:47 am Title: Lupus
Hey girl
Sorry for the late review but well I have school to worry about now (giving my assignments already) I'm so tired when I get home that I have no energy to give you a full understandable review. But I can promise you that I'll review every chapter for you, it could only take some time ;-)
"The man closes his eyes, welcomes the utter darkness that greets his tired vision. The tears are warm against the back of his eyelids, together with the picture of the screaming face of a young, teenage boy."
Oooh, I feel for this guy. It seems that he doesn't have a home because of who he is. I think you described him very well. All though we have no idea who he is. great job ;)
"It seems Tom realized what he just said because he blinks at the light and then looks at Bill with a confused expression adorning his sleepy face."
Poor Tom got a bit of a temper he can't control. I wonder if there are going to be other symptoms that will let them self know.
"“And you forgave me.” Tom is watching Bill, he can feel it. “But you didn’t dare go down in the basement alone for years, though.”"
I loved the memory it was something I could imagine Tom doing and being the one to comfort Bill all though he was the cause of it :-p
I love how you pictured there relationship. They want to protected each other and feel save when the other is with them =D
"“Your wound, Mr. Kaulitz...Tom, is healing exceptionally well, much better than what we would have thought.”"
This is a positive change if you ask me. Pretty handy if your wounds heal so fast ^^
"“Hey!” Bill mock scowls, the tears drying on his face. “I’m surprised you have yours in the shoulder, I would have guessed it was in your dick.” "
It's great how they managed to cheer each other up.
"The silence is heavy with worry and confusion. Tom’s grip on Bill’s arm is suddenly almost painful. “Someone tried to kill me?”"
Poor thing, nos he is being all afraid thinking there was an attempt to take his life.Al though this person didn't mean any harm will he was himself anyway. I think this is going to complicated it a bit for this person to get to them and explain everything. How is he going to pass there security that will most likely be around them and them get them to listen to.
Okey so this is it ^^ in case you didn't already know, I absolutely love this story ^^ and I'm looking forward to reading more of it.
Well I'm off to the next chapter so see you soon.
much love ^^
Author's Response: not to worry girl, I've been working my ass of for the last month as well, our teachers don't seem to realize that they shouldn't give us so much homeork on the weekends oO The man does have a home, just not in germany, he lives in england, but can't go back because of this little problem called Tom Kaulitz ,) I'm happy you feel sorry for him though, he needs it! (and here I go talking about my charaters as if they were real people) there will be more sympthoms, some nice, some not so nice, hope they'll all tie the pieces together though. The thing about the basement, that actually happened to me, although I didn't need comfort afterwards cus I sort of hit the guy who did it xD I really needed them to be able to cheer each other up although the situation is hard for them both, or else this would have been all angst and I can't have that ,) I'm all for fluff <3 I hope you like the rest of the story as well kris, you know I love you for reviewing me and allowing me to travel through the story with you, it's such an experience for me! thank you girlie <3
Date: 09/20/08 03:18 pm Title: Varg
I don't know why, but when I am reading this fic, I had really strange feeling...It's really amazing...wow
Author's Response: aw you do ? that is so nice, makes me happy !
Date: 09/19/08 07:04 pm Title: Lupus
Oh My Lucy!
This is fantastic!
I REALLY like it!
Yay! More W-drug for me. *happy, happy, happy*
Oh, but I will save the last chapter for tomorrow. I'm REALLY tired right now! But Remember. Somewhere in little Denmark a crazy girl with her pink unicorn sits and think abput you.
That welcome back has to be the best I've ever recieved! thank you!
Love you!
Author's Response: lol, anne, and james *hugs you both* darlings of mine are you high yet ??? Gosh, it's so good to have the two of you back, it hasn't been the same without you...you and your drugs, me and my drug dealing ,) hope you'll like what's to come babes of mine, it's good stuff I think ,)
Date: 09/19/08 06:43 pm Title: Wolf
Oh My Lucy!
Antother drug?
You've really outdone yorself this time!
Yay! How on earth do you come up with these things?
Oh yeah, James and I was wondering if we could get a tour of the lab? You know... The place where you create all these wonderful drugs... (that would be your mind ;))
Oh! And I will call this the W-drug!
"What is that?" *looks at James* He loves it too..
And the thing about where scottish people goes made me laugh. I got that picture of Bill, you know the one where he's really young and wearing a kilt, in my head.
LOL!
How on earth did you tink about that?
Well... Of to read the next chappie.
Author's Response: lol you want a tour of my mind ? well it's gonna be hard to get in there cus I really don't know the way, I think there's some kind of labyrint filled with all sorts of weird and scary stuff...Kaulitz twins making out naked in every corner...drugs all over the place...books and spider webs and DUST BUNNIES weeeeeeee, see, I get a little crazy only talking about it. And we'd have to ask for someone to send in a search party for us, cus I'm not sure I could find my way out if we ever got in oO Bill wears a kilt ? WHERE ??? lol and you seriously wanna know how I thought about that, after everything I just told you about my mind ,p so happy you like this anne, gonna posts ome more w-drug for you tonight ! love
Date: 09/17/08 10:59 pm Title: Varg
mcdonalds-
we love to see you smile,
happy? Cuz we are!
Author's Response: uhm...mcdonalds oO lol thanksies ,p
Date: 09/17/08 07:41 pm Title: Varg
The line about little brothers being there to play big brothers "when the big brothers don't feel so big" was so touching. And the last sentence...just perfect! I know I say this a lot, but I'm loving every moment of this fic!
Author's Response: you liked that part ? aw that is so sweet of you, I loved writing it, I have a thing for vonorable Tomi <3 I don't mind you saying it a lot darling, actually it makes me smile just as much every single time, thank you for this !!!
Date: 09/17/08 07:22 pm Title: Varg
I loved it! :)
The twins are so cute together, It's so sweet how Bill's taking care of Tom.
Author's Response: naw ,) love it that you think that, thankises <3
Date: 09/17/08 03:46 pm Title: Wolf
Love this story already, keep going
Author's Response: thank you so much, I will !
Date: 09/17/08 03:03 pm Title: Varg
I do not know what to say right now...
Once again have you made me speechless...
The review will be long and boring, so don't read it!!!!!
The story is SOOOO GOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!
It is fluff, drama, angst, humour and romance all rolled in to one FANTASTIC story!
I'm awfully curious to know more about the strange man!
You have watched House MD, haven't you? Smiles... :)
Lupus, Dr Cameron, Bipolar...
You know... the Wolf (or "vargen") is my favourite animal of them all! :)
It is the one i feel most akin to...
Damn!!! Not a HP crossover! My hopes were crushed... :(
Love those small sentences you seem to end the paragraphs with... :)
"Tom hears the door close without a sound"
Now, there is something physically impossible... but I understand what you mean anyway... ;)
Nice sentence though...
Talking about sentences... You have a different style of writing in this story... And I must say I like it a lot!
It makes the story seem softer some how...almost wrapped in cotton.
So far, I think this one is one of the best written story's you have ever done!
WOW!!!! A revelation just came to me...
The whole story feels the same as one specific episode of "Buffy the vampire slayer"! "The Body", written and directed by Joss Whedon. Sometimes it's just as "in your face" as that episode is... Although it is not as heart wrenchingly angsty... (thank you for that)
I do not compare you with either Mr Whedon or Mr Bergman, but it feels somewhat Bergmanesque in it's writing...
(Don't let it get to your head... You are not that good... Yet!) ;)
I feel honoured to have had the opportunity to read this story and I am awaiting the continuation with great anticipation!
Forgive me for this long, dry and boring review... I'll try to give you a more interesting and funny one at a later date!
Thank You! :)
It is safe to say: I like it! Very, very much!
Anders
Author's Response: I read it I READ IT AND OH MY GOD !!! I'm gonna ignore the 'don't let it get to your head' thingy, well, not about the famos authors though cus comparing me to those would be bullshit xD but I'm gonna let this review go to my head because it sure as hell went straight to my heart. Seriosuly, not a lot of people understand my fics the way you do ! oh, and there'll be more of the man in the next one, which I'm posting tonight ,) uhm, nope haven't watched House MD, the bipolar thing I looked up on wiki, Dr. Cameron is from a book where a wonam mistakes a man when saying 'my camera' as his name being Mike Cameron, and lupus...uhm, don't know where that came from oO lol, you like the varg huh, me too, although I've always held a preference for tigers. darling, even though this is not a HP crossover, I do hope it'll satisfie, believe me, the myserious man is so much hotter than lupin! I have a thing to tell you I LOVE HOW YOU NOTICE THE SMALL THINGS (and I'm sorry for virtually yelling your ears out) but seriously, I put a lot of work into the detail and I am so, so, SO happy that it pays off and that someone notices, that means a lot to me you know !!! hmmm *is very happy and content* you make me smile so much you know! I am writing this story different, or at least I feel like I am, it's more angstyer than my others, but as you ut it, more wrapped in cotton, I try to make it...deep, you know? I watched Buffy for a while, but mainly because I thought she was hot, I really don't likw how vamps are pictured in it. to end this, I am going to aplogogize for my looooooooooong and slightly frightening reply, hope it didn't totally scare you away ,) it's just so nice to meet someone who understands my writing so well! thank you <3 luce
Date: 09/17/08 02:41 pm Title: Wolf
I noticed that you called your chapter "wolf" in different languages. Do you know how is it called in Czech? Very simply. "vlk" :-D
Author's Response: I have a list of the word in different languages and I think I've seen vlk before, but it's nice of you to tell me ,) maybe I'll name a chapter in czech
Date: 09/17/08 02:39 pm Title: Varg
oh... my poor little Tomi. I´m sad to see him so unhappy and scared.
It´s fascinating how twins act towards each other. Their innocent hugs and kisses, their closeness... they´re more than brothers, nevertheless nothing more than brothers at the same time. Really fascinating. I like it :_)
Author's Response: it makes me sad to, and being the one to put him through this is awful, but the outcome will be worth it (I hope) 'they´re more than brothers, nevertheless nothing more than brothers at the same time' I loved that, it's so true ! thank you so much, this meant a lot to me <3
Date: 09/17/08 02:19 pm Title: Varg
wonder who that little lady was :P
blaaah i've got only 5 minutes to comment, dad is rambling that I should learn now, blah, blah, blah x___x that had been my plan, but then I saw that you updated and you know that nothing is more important than you, Firelucy :D (it sounds gay XD) I am sooo happy that you updated today. This chapter was so good I didn't want it to end. Seeing Bill taking care of Tom melts my heart.
My Norwegian is improving, haha :D i know a new word (varg) thanks to you. Yeaaa I can say I am advanced :P
I am so impatient, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Your story is more and more interesting every week :D
buzi;*
Author's Response: lol, I don't know ,) there will be a lot more of Bill taking care of his little Tomi (that definitively sounded gay) so brace yourself girl ,p lol and varg is in sweedish darling 'ulv' that's wolf in norvegian xD gonna update soon now, just gotta respond to all the reviews and maybe write another chapter more before I do so. much love for ya iza of mine <3 luce
Date: 09/17/08 01:58 pm Title: Varg
oh holy crap
they kissed
yeah I know just a little mini kiss but still, I think it counts!
aw...Tom is scared
Im scared too
and its so sweet
that he'd only said that twice
and I was really scared at least one of those times too ( when Bill had surgery) and Im sure I would have been scared if I'd been Tom when their dad left...I sure was scared when my parents split up
I am really worried about Tom
and I prya he won't hurt anyone...because I have a feeling his condistion will worsen :S
oh and Lucy im SOOOO SOOO happy you decided to post sooner =) this fic is starting to become addictive...
Author's Response: lol, you're sounding like a TH fangirl alright xD 'they kissed' yeah they did ,) I'm so sorry to hear that your parents slipped up, I'm one of the lucky ones that's got them both living in the same house, but seeing as Gordon was the one who taught our boys the way of music ,) I can't say I'm too sad about it ,p em, darling, I am so happy that you're back and reading this because it makes me smile so bad !!! love ya <3 luce
Date: 09/17/08 01:49 pm Title: Varg
I'm in love with how you've written the relationship between the twins. You're characterization of them is amazing, very distinctive. This is showing a lot of talent, I'm really enjoying reading it. :)
Author's Response: oh my God OO *blushes* thank you so much, that was so sweet of you !!!
Date: 09/17/08 01:42 pm Title: Lupus
It is a stopreadingimpossible story!!!!!
I'm quite amazed that you manages to do it every time! :)
I see you have posted the third chapter already, so...
I'm of to read it immideately!
Thank you!
Oh.. By the way...
I like the way you are naming the chapters... :)
Author's Response: lol xD 'stopreadingimpossible' that is so cute ,) thank you ! happy you like my chap namings, see sweeden is all the way up as number third, I love your way of saying it !!!
Date: 09/17/08 01:33 pm Title: Varg
Luce ma love,
Happy to read u all time hun.
it means all the world to me.
that new story of you, so different from the others, but still amazing and breathtaking at the same time
Just love the suspence which i feel reading word by word.
thanks for update so soon, so we cant lose a line and look forward for the next.
so anxious about tomi.
he seems so weird
always in love with ur bill.
you make me more adorable to our eyes.
go on lady.
your new story is on the top again.
thanks for ur blessing ispiration.
always your fan
chris
kisses and hugs
Author's Response: oh cris, you know this means a lot to me, right? I do hope so, because everything you write me is just so full of amazingness ,) thank you so much for this darling, I am so extreemely happy that you like this fic because it is a fic that means a lot to me! much love <3 yours luce
Date: 09/17/08 01:29 pm Title: Varg
I thought about this story this morning, then got sad b/c it wasn't Sunday but then I looked again and here it was. YAY! Poor Tom. :(
Author's Response: hihi, I'm gonna try to update twice a week, at least for the moment. thank you <3