Date: 10/03/08 12:32 pm Title: Liekos
*hugs the twins tightly*
Listen to me boys. Love is never wrong and if you love each other, don't let anyone tell you its wrong or try and deny you that love. Okay? *stern face*
Lol. I really, really love your writing. The imagery of the twins at the end is quite beautiful.
Author's Response: lol, yeah boy's, you just remember that okay ! and know that millions of girls all over the world would totally support you xD thank you so much for this, it really means a lot to me !!! love <3 luce
Date: 10/03/08 12:15 pm Title: Liekos
hey.. much as I'm loving the fic I'd rather the writer took care of herself. I'll never see how things end if you make yourself sick.
Author's Response: oh darling, thank you so much. you know that almost made me tear up, meant a lot <3 I promise to be taking care of myself and it means a lot to me that you care <3
Date: 10/03/08 10:37 am Title: Liekos
I loved how the atmosphere changed during the chapter. It moved from sleepy and lovey-dovey with the boys in the elevator to unsettling with the little girl, hopeful and romantic with Simone and finally something primal and forest-like (werewolfish?) near the end. Love it.
Author's Response: weeeeeeee, so happy right now, I'm so, o, so glad you said that 'primal' because that was exactly what I was going for, I just didn't want to write it litterarly. thank you so much for this, love <3
Date: 10/03/08 10:35 am Title: Liekos
Awesome job!!
Author's Response: thanksies ,)
Date: 10/03/08 10:07 am Title: Liekos
That was just so romantic! Everything from Tom's thoughts of him and Bill by a moonlit lake to Bill's talk with his mom. And the last paragraph...*melts into a puddle of goo*
Author's Response: aw, that felt so good to hear love, thank you so much !!! I'm so happy you're always reviewing this story, maks me smile <3
Date: 10/03/08 09:32 am Title: Liekos
This chapter was so beautiful, but so complex too.
In one way, all the changes Tom's going through are taking him in a different direction from Bill. And yet, in another way, they are growing closer still.
I love how you've managed to write these two factors with complete harmony. It's like, even though they don't know what's happening yet, their relationship is already protecting them, taking steps to ensure they remain closely bonded, no matter what happens.
Beautiful. Can't wait for the next chapter. X
Author's Response: 'their relationship is already protecting them, taking steps to ensure they remain closely bonded, no matter what happens' oh my God, that was so bautifully said !!! thank you so, so much for this, it made my heart flutter girl ,) love ya for it <3
Date: 10/03/08 09:16 am Title: Liekos
O_O
no I didnt notice a single boring part in this chapter
it was spellbounding
I cold take my eyes off of the screen
the man needs to find Tom now, I fear he will hurt someone otherwise, should I tell you a scret? yes I will ^^ I think...or I fear that Tom might hurt Bill if he's not careful T.T
and omg...thats probably the best internal dialoge about twincest Ive ever seen, I lov the Bill has finally relised that he is in love with Tom...and that Simone is so supportive - though I dont know if she would be if she knew who exactly he loves, on the other hand I too get the feeling that maybe she knows more than she gives away
I just wonder, is what Tom feels for Bill only like...animalistic lust? Something he wouldnt have felt if he hadnt been bitten? Or does he love Bill and it took him being bitten and developing this animal instincts for him to realize it? I dotn now if I make sense, my thoughts are all over the place at the moment >.<
loved this chapter so so much, its one of the best so far in this fic
Author's Response: lol, that's good to hear girl, I decided to step things up a bit. aw, baby, you're scared Tom would hurt his twin? that would never happen! but a werewolf hurting a human...that's whole other story! squeals, I'm so, so happy you liked the conversation with simone, took me a while to make that just right. lol, simone is a smart woman, maybe she knows, maybe she doesn't ,) you make sense love, and that part will be answered, just not yet ,p thank you so much em, you know I love you right?
Date: 10/03/08 08:37 am Title: Liekos
I love your fics Lucy, they're always amazing, and i think this one is becoming a second favourite! (the first being...what was it called? The one with all the emotions and Tom losing 'control'. My Little Brother, or something to that extent. LOVE that one.) Beginning to love this one just as much tho. Really. Tom the Wolf, HOTT. I love it when Tom gets so possessive, and any fic where the twins touch each other when they're "only brothers" is totally sexy. Finger touching. *-* Keep up the amazing work, like i know you will. ^.-
Author's Response: oh my, it means so much to me to hear you say that, just...thank you !!! lol, Tom the wolf IS hot, I drew so many pictures of him, I just can't get enough *drool* lol, yay to sexy brotherly touches, if you liked it in this chap, just wait until you read the next one xD I'll update today girl, hope you'll enjoy it ,) love <3
Date: 10/03/08 08:08 am Title: Liekos
This chapter is positively beautiful. The last part is gorgeous, it's just... wow. The metaphors and everything. Just wow. I adore this. =)
Author's Response: aw, becca <3 so happy you liked this. I was very doubtful about that last part, bu I'm so happy it worked out for you! thank you so much <3 yours luce
Date: 10/02/08 10:37 pm Title: Loup
*SQUEEEEEEEM* That was awesome!! For the record, AU has always been my favorite catagory along with werewolves. So put 1+2 together and you get THE MOST AMAZING FIC EVER. E-V-E-R. Haha =D
Author's Response: aw, that is so amazingly cute of you, thank you so much! God, I love werewolves too, they rock big time ,)
Date: 09/29/08 09:54 am Title: Loup
Thanks so much for fitting this in around your homework. I fit in reading this around my studying too! I like that Bill is catching on and Tom's just a little in the dark.
Author's Response: hihi, I always imagined that was how it would go in reality, Tom being 'a little in the dark' ,) thank you so muchfor reviewing this, it means a lot to me !!!
Date: 09/29/08 04:55 am Title: Loup
Luce babe,
happy to read an update again.
the butterfies are still here in my stomach in my mind
Love this story
love all ur stories
love you.
just speechless with tom/self scene.
splendid as always
love the slime line between the twins
so impatient for what will happen next
so in love with my writers inspiration
who can everytime make me hooked and hungry for more and more
hope u feel fine beauty.
thanks for not let us down
much for love
and respect for ur mind
and ur thoughts
kisses
many many
yours
always
chris
Author's Response: chris <3 love ya darling, for doing this for me ! so happy you liked the Tom/self scene, enjoyed writing that ,) I'm feeling okay, love, things are hectic over here! hope you're doing good as well, and that you'll like the next update. love you so much cris <3 yours luce
Date: 09/28/08 04:51 pm Title: Loup
Oh, possessive Tom is such a lovely thought! Just another awesome chapter that really had me engrossed!
Author's Response: weeeee xD possessive Tomi ROCKS ,p thanksies darling <3
Date: 09/28/08 02:51 pm Title: Loup
Silly Billy, Aliens don't cause those side effects.
I have to say, I'm extremely excited to see when Bill and Tom get together!
Author's Response: hihi, who knows ,) maybe they do. lol I'm waiting for that part as well, love, it'll be so much fun to write ,) hugs
Date: 09/28/08 12:04 pm Title: Loup
When I was nearing the end of this chapter, I constantly kept glancing downward to the right corner, hoping I would find a "Next" there... But to my dismay there wasn't! :(
I am smiling like a moron at the moment, and I feel oddly happy, with tears in my eyes... It is because of the story! It really is a very good story, and I do not know how to praise it enough!
It just makes me happy, some how!
It has to be the affection the twins are showing each other...
I am worthless at giving reviews when I feel fluffy inside... As you may have noticed...
"But why?" It made me laugh :)
Were are Gordon?
Not that I'm missing him, but still???
Love the whole Bill is Tom's property thing, since it seems to come from them both... It is not like Bill is Tom's slave, but he still belongs to Tom...
It is cute and just sooo Romantic!
And I am a true sucker for romance... It gets me every time!
Damn... Words are really failing me right now... I want to write so much, but all I seem to find is; WOW!!!!
I hope you put some more of that mysterious young man in the next chapter... I'm dying of curiosity here...
If I were to pick a second favourite animal, it would be the tiger...
I'm betting the last chapter will be called " Ulv"
Jeesch... I suck at this tonight
So I will end it here and hope I can give you a real and proper review some other time!
Thank You is not enough!
Anders
Author's Response: aww, sorry for not having another chapter there for you anders, and oh my God, that makes me even sorrier for not updating when I was supposed to *guilty* but hope you'll like what comes next, even if it's a little late. Oh my, you get the tingles from my story? the happy feeling in your stomach? that just makes my heart melt you know <3 thank you! shit oO I had forgotten about him, Gordon that is, uhm...he's...away on a business trip? no seriously, I'll write him into a chapter later, can't believe I forgot about him Oo oops. lol, I'll agree with you on that, romance really is rather powerful when it comes to keeping your attention to a story, I love romance <3 lol, you're this close to obsessing over the mysterious man ,) you know that right xD but yes, he will appear! hope you'll like the next chap! much, much love <3 yours lucy
Date: 09/28/08 10:56 am Title: Lobo
I find it difficult to stop reading long enough to write a review, when I know there is another chapter ahead... ;)
Reading it somehow feels like wrapping my self in a warm and cosy blanket! The tenderness of the twins makes me feel warm and fussy inside... :)
For the first time I find myself wishing it would never end...
Well of course You will finish it, but I hope it is far away and a very happy ending... ;)
Enough reviewing... off to read the next chapter!
Thank You!
Author's Response: oh my god *heart eyes* you feel like a warm and cosy blanket (...uhm, well you feel like being inside a warm and cosy blanket, so cute) I'm all smiles now <3 there are a lot of chapters to go love, so don't you worry about the end just yet ,) thank you, thank you, thank you, your reviews are some of the best I get, you know !!! love ya <3 luce
Date: 09/28/08 10:28 am Title: Vlk
Hi Lucy!
I haven't had the time to read anything this week, so I've missed your updates..
I am in love with this story! It is the only way to explain how I feel about it!
It is very different to your other works, because it is happening, written, in the present, not in the past, and I must say that you are doing a remarkably good job! :)
It feels real, some how...
Aliens? Is that the movie creature Alien, or is it some general kind of other worldly creature?
Oh... More info on the mystery guy... He is young...
Still don't know who he is though...
My curiosity is peaked...
Off to read the next chapter...
Thank you!
Author's Response: hi ,) God, you have no idea how much your reviews to this story keeps me going, it's like you understand it even better than I do, and it means so, so much to me !!! I'm really happy that the whole writing in the present tense is working out, I've never done it before, but I thought it would fit best with the mood of this story. when speaking of aliens I'm refering to the things that might live out in space (romvesen) you know, green dudes with big heads and black eyes. lol, you really like that guy don't you ,) well, there will be more of him, promise! Thank you so, so much for reviewing this anders, you know how much it means to me, but I can't tell you enough <3 love luce
Date: 09/28/08 10:04 am Title: Loup
hey Luce
Here I am eventually they new chapter!
I'm always so happy when I see this updated and I really appreciate that you write and updated as fast as you can all though you to have school to worry about ;-)
Love the story titles by the way ;-)
"“But why?” Tom pouts at his little brother. He’s become better at it. It’s either that or it’s just working better these days because he’s the ‘poor, injured twin’."
Oh no, the but why :-p I love do to that to ^^ drives my brother up the wall haha
"“…Jesus.” Tom hisses through his teeth. His climax is building fast. Somewhere between the time he began and now, the tingling made its presence known. The butterflies are flapping low in Tom’s stomach, urging him on."
That a jacking off session could be so hot :-p I love the way you described it ;-)And he thought about Bill while he did it haha.
"Located somewhere deep inside the singer’s mouth, that little metal ball is a dangerous weapon. "
Jeah it sure is. Don't the twins know how to use there piercings :-p
Nearly dead there :-p
Tom so likes Bill, the butterflies sad so ^^
"“I was afraid there for a moment that you were gonna pick me up and hide me in your room.” Bill chuckles a little, listening for the sound of Georg’s car. Tom doesn’t answer."
I bet Tom wants to do just that :-p
So that big mean Gustav can't get to close to him. Move possessive Tom all though he gets a bit over the top with it hihi.
Gustav was being so sweet acting like the big brother ^^
"Gold. One second of pure gold, and then it was over. Bill isn’t really sure he’d seen it, but something inside him tells him that he’s right. "
Wow, his eyes turned gold. Something is slowly coming to the surface, seems like it's getting worst or so :p
"“Aliens and werewolves…I‘m betting aliens.”"
Well what a hard choices :-p
I so wonder what's going to happen and I'm looking forward to reading more of this awesome story ^^
I'll try to keep up with reviewing ;-)
Go on as soon as you can and good luck with school
much love
Author's Response: so happy you like the story titles, it was just something I stumbled up on, so I just had to do it xD lol, the 'but why' it works every time ,p tom did think about Bill when he did it, he just didn't realize ,) loooooool 'Tom so likes Bill, the butterflies said so' xD that is so true girl, man I might use that line ,) hihi that was the general idea, that Tom wanted to hide Bill away in his room ,p happy you liked the gold eyes part. thank you so much for this kris, you know how much it means to me! much love <3 luce
Date: 09/28/08 10:01 am Title: Loup
The butterflies didn’t leave, although he did just try to shoot them into oblivion.
LOL, that line should win an award or something!
I can't really put into words how awesome this fic is. I love the subtle changes in Tom, and the way Bill is quietly dealing with them. I mean, the actual changes at the moment are so small, and yet the story is tense and exciting, and it actually makes my skin prickle - that feeling that something is coming ...
And of course, the cherry on the top, is the adorable relationship between the twins.
Just LOVE this! Can't wait for more. XX
Author's Response: hihi, that is so cute of you, saying that about the butterflies line ,) it was just something that popped into my head xD oh my God, your description of how it makes you feel 'that something is coming' it's really like that? wow, thank you !!! this meant a lot to me girl <3 love ya for it
Date: 09/28/08 09:07 am Title: Lobo
hey ^^
"Hadn’t he' on countless occasions' seen how Bill’s skin would glow with that same mysterious light?"
That was just beautiful. They way Tom compared Bill with the moon. Definitely not very brotherly like if you ask me :-p I wonder when they are going to realize just that ^^
"He feels like throwing up butterflies."
Oooh he's in love ^^ Funny how he doesn't seem to get the connection :p Great describing girl.
"“Okay.” Tom’s wondering again. If his nose had been smaller, would he have been kissing Bill now?"
Haha, if he moved that bit closer he would though :-p there noses are both cute :-p haha
"Simone makes a few cuts in the meat before filling them with herbs and Tom can’t seem to pull his eyes from the way the knife slices through the red surface and disappears inside the part of dead animal. "
jeah an other symptom ^^
Tom likes meat :-p
"“Shut up, at least I don’t look like a mad scientist.” Andreas laughs when Bill points his tongue at him. “So, Einstein. Where’s Medusa?” "
haha, I just love your characters :-p
But I must say yellow wouldn't suit Andreas :-p
"“Why couldn’t I hug Andreas goodbye?” Bill asks Tom, skipping up the stairs in front of him."
Tom getting more possessive about Bill, not? :-p
"“Billa, if it had been you…” Tom is gasping slightly as his chest contorts painfully. “If it had been you, if you had died, then I would have died with you.”"
That was just so heartbreaking and sweet, poor Tom hug him !
I'm coming closer ^^ almost there
*hugs*
Author's Response: but then again, sleeping half naked in bed with your twin at the age of seventeen isn't really all brotherly either ,p thank you so much for this kris, you know how much it means to me !!! lol, I know, they've got such cute noses xD yup, another sympthom, you got that right! can't you just imagine andreas, all yellow and bright xd lol. and yes, little Tomi is getting more and more possesive about his billa, cute no? so happy you liked the ending, and do hope you'll like the next chapter as well! much love for you my love <3 luce
