Date: 10/05/08 04:45 pm Title: Amarog
Sexy sexy, i love this fic. Hiiiiccckkkkeyyyysss.....me want more.
Ohh, mating habits eh?
God, i fucking love it when the twins do shit like that without knowing how each other feels, its so much naughtier. Keep doin' it plz. XD.
Author's Response: yes, yes, yes xD I'm gonna write in more hickeys, not in the next one, but I promise there will be more of them, lol! and yes, mating habits, gets our kinky minds moving, no? LOL and yes, 'brotherly love bordering on incestious' is totally hot, glad you like my version ,) love ya for this you know <3 luce
Date: 10/05/08 04:35 pm Title: Loup
Caps, guitars and Bill. Oh my, I LOL-ed at this one. Tom being territorial is sexy and scary at the same time. I think this is true for the whole story.:)
Author's Response: lol, you're right possessive Tom is both very sexy and a little bit scary, but I like him that way ,) thanksies girl <3 love ya for it !
Date: 10/05/08 04:12 pm Title: Lobo
The tension between the twins is just delicious and the way Tom is showing more and more new symptoms of being a werewolf is creaping me out. It's one of the best stories I've ever read. Such a unique atmosphere!
Author's Response: lol, it's creaping you out? ,) aw, that's a good thing I think ,p seriously, one of the best? that means the world to me, you know! thank you <3
Date: 10/05/08 03:47 pm Title: Varg
I have just discovered this story and I must say it's amazing! The interaction between the twins is so intimate, while the story has such a sinister atmosphere...It's scary. It really is, especially because the hints are subtle and everything is so uncertain. Oh, and the time is ticking for Tom. Soon it's full moon...
Author's Response: oh my God oO that was one of the best reviews I've ever read! I mean, you worded everything so perfectly. thank you so much for this, it really means a lot to me ! love <3 luce
Date: 10/05/08 03:40 pm Title: Amarog
.....;__________; poor Kashmir.. *hugs Kashmir* and Bill too..he was soo scared.. :[ but tom would never hurt him...yea?? the whole little cuddling scene was adorable. hehehehe and the guy...shouldn't wait.. D: Bill and Tom are taking off tomorrow! D: and if he doesn't find tom by morning...he is going to have to keep searching and be away from his wife and kids. ;_; thank you for this super fast update!! :DD each chapter it gets better and better!! ah!! i want more~~ XDDD *gives cookies*
Author's Response: aww, I know *pets the cat* and billa *pets Billa* lol, you're probably right about the guy, he shouldn't wait ,) hihi, and he doesn't have kids silly, just the wife xD there will be more very soon, today if my comp works with me ,) love ya
Date: 10/05/08 02:58 pm Title: Amarog
Hello love! Here I am, totally wishing there was another chapter to read b/c this one was wonderful. I can't believe I didn't think of Tom's sex dive! Of course it would change, and Tom would need a mate! I feel so stupid for not thinking of that. I'm sure Bill truly does return Tom's feelings, however, did they only truly manifest themselves now b/c of Tom? Or was this just going to happen now any way. Basically if Tom hadn't been attacked would Bill be feeling this way right now?
I like the comparison w/ the guy (who I wish had a name). He seems so nice and sensitive. When he changes, can he normally control himself. Based on his thoughts it seems like Tom was an out lyer.
I hope he catches Tom in time.
Update soon.
And what's the holiday? How much time do you have?
Love you!
Your Queen
Author's Response: Queen *hugs you* LOL, you didn't think of Tom's sex drive? what do you think I am, some innocent little girl? of course there will be uncontrolable werewolf urges xD you should know my kinky mind by now ,) the question (which I am very surprised to find is the only question in the whole review oO and with you that's like...odd) will be answered sometime in the future, I promise! LOL, and I'm keeping the guy's name to myself on perpose, have you noticed that you don't know what he looks like yet either? he's got a wicked name though, just wait until you hear it, think achient greek, maybe antic rome. and yes, based on the man's thoughts, he's used to being able to control himself, Tom was an exception. updating today love <3 and the holiday's fall holiday, we have that here, it's over on monday though :'( love you too darling <3 yours luce
Date: 10/05/08 02:55 pm Title: Amarog
Another wonderful and romantic chapter has left Firelucy's fingers and what a chapter it was... It flu by to fast though...
I am in a very romantic mode tonight! ( I get that when I read romantic story's and listen to Westlife's latest and greatest...)
And then You go and write such a love saturated chapter... what can I say, I'm surrounded by Love and Romance today... YAY!!!
I feel his loneliness and longing...
Now he is going to miss the twins... He falls asleep under a tree and they go of on tour...
If only Bill and Tom could realise that they love one another... Not that I'm complaining about the action in the chapter, not at all, on the contrary... I love it!
You managed to get the same feeling in the last line in this chap, as you did in the previous... Love, longing and romance!
I do keep saying that word alot this time, don't I??? Romance!!! But such a lovely word it is, isn't it?
The beginning was rather funny... To wake up with a raging hard-on in someone else's bed, lying next to him, isn't exactly a walk in the park... ;)
Now... You realise You have to write that story, don't You... it is not fair to come up with that kind of plot and just leave it hanging there... ;D
But, I would like to get to know him a bit more before You have him whisk me of to his dungeons and do unspeakable things to me... ( Oh I wish )
Amarong? What language is that? Not sure about Liekos either...
And yes, It would be scary to find out that your lover is a wearwolf...
But as they say... Love conquers al!
A excellent chapter, which I enjoyed very much!
Looking forward to the next one:)
Thank You!
Anders
Author's Response: I know, the chap was so short, and I think the next one is just as short, it's just that I've recieved comments saying that maybe it's going a tiny weeny tid bit too slow and so I decided to cut some of the dry talk and filler in scenes that aren't important at all, they don't even build up stuff, so I'm keeping brotherly love moments, plot development and funny things (hopefully) and we'll see how it works out ,) oh my God, westlife's latest and greatest...kill me now ! oh and I got your e-mail by the way, I'm gonna reply as soon as my mail is working again! (it's just off for some hours at a time now and then) lol, and yes, the man might miss the twins, but let's not jump to conclusions too fast shall we ,) Romance, yes, truly a wonderful word <3 hihi, and talk about a walk in the park when that someone beside you in bed when you're hard is your brother (whom you have very naughty urges towards) xD oh my gooooood, is he going to play westlife while 'whisking you off' to his dungeons and do unspeakable things to you? (I'm gonna tease you both that forever you know!) just wait until you get to know his name, and what he looks like, you'll die! liekos is greek, amarog is greenland inuit I think. I have a saying of my own 'love conquers all, even Tom' ,p hope you'll like the next one, I'm gonna post it real soon! love ya <3 yours luce
Date: 10/05/08 02:54 pm Title: Amarog
'If so, he hopes that the change concerning the boy’s sex life hasn’t occurred yet. Mating habits can be pretty scary if you stumble up on them without being aware of their existence...'
Oh dear! Um, that doesn't sound too good! Then again, maybe it'll be hot ... lol.
Poor Bill. It must be awful for him to see his Tomi losing control. This story does weird things to me! I'm scared for them - it's bad enough worrying if Bill will always be safe, but even worse to imagine how Tom will feel if he hurts him.
But it's exciting too. The thought of werewolf Tom is just hot as hell, and now things are really hotting up between him and Bill? Just YUM! Lol.
Can't wait for more :) XX
Author's Response: LOL, you think exactly in my ways love, mating habits may be scary, but oh so sexy xD aw *hugs you* I didn't mean to make you scared for them hun, but it feels good to hear you say that, thank you! and yes ,) yum big time to werewolf Tomi ,p thanksies for this, love ya <3
Date: 10/05/08 02:46 pm Title: Liekos
Tom's imagination at the beginning was practically better than a sex scene! Seriously lucy, you have kinky romace down to an art form. And that's really crude wording. It was beautiful, yet so, erotic!
I'm not too happy about Tom being able to go back on tour though. The guy'll probably just miss them and that could be super bad!
Thanks for bringing him back btw.
I'm also really happy to know Bill feels the same way. Now if only the could communicate it too each other. maybe when they wake up together the next day it'll become a bit clearer?
Eh, who am I kidding. They're both a little dense about this.
Author's Response: 'kinky romace down to an art form' that my friend, was something of the nicest I have ever heard, thank you so much <3 it would be very bad if the guy manages to miss them! lol, guys communicating, are you kidding me? xD lol
Date: 10/05/08 02:30 pm Title: Loup
Vampires w/ braces?! Where the heck do you come up w/ this? Luce you have the greatest sense of humor ever!
I loved this chapter. I'm glad Bill's paying attention. I was worried he'd overlook the possessivness but I guess not. He's doing a really good job paying attention. Of coures he would guess wrong. Figures. You just did that to make me scream huh?
We haven't heard from the attacker in a while. Is that a good thing? Or just a minor detail and he'll get there eventually.
The G's didn't notice anything. I guess they weren't around enough to. Is tom getting worse? The effects seem to be gettin stronger.
Author's Response: lol, it's my whacked mind, I swear most times I have no idea where this stuff comes from xD I really think that Bill should be noticing everything (or at least the things he doesn't choose to denie ,p) after his twin being in the hospital, he'd be mother henning him 24/7 ,) and yes, purely to piss you off love xD the attacker will return to the chapters, don't you worry! Tom is getting worse, but you're roght, the G's didn't notice anything, although I think Gustav reackted to the whole couch thing. see ya
Date: 10/05/08 02:16 pm Title: Lobo
Hey Luce, here I am. Miss me? I hope you're not mad at me or anything. I'm a little worried b/c of the last email and all that, hope I didn't go too far. I'm sorry, I'm rambling, but I figured you'd read this so I though I'd say it here.
Did you see my review for Arabian Nights btw? I was having total deja vu when I read your story.
OK, this one. I'm totally seeing more wherewolf traits coming out in Tom. You're doing a beautiful job w/ the meat, and the moon, and the possessiveness, and everything. Also the imagery you're putting in w/ the vanity and everything is beautiful. I really love it. I still have questions but I'll wait until I'm done reading to voice them.
I love having three more chapters to go. It might annoy you but I'm happy. ;)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking the different traits of the werewolf that I'm using for our little Tomi, it's so much fun writing him being all confused about 'why the hell did I do that?' hope you like what comes next as well, gonna go respond to your others now ,)
Date: 10/05/08 07:17 am Title: Liekos
Oh luce ma babe,
there is not chance update of ur stories to not keep me on screen with wide eyes.
i find that when the story goes on
more and more make me yours and just suprised and charmed of ur works
and of u .
Like the imagination of tom about his brother.
i already told u that u have the unique way to describe the relationship of the twins.
only u make that love look innocent real and hotty too.
glad that u rest a bit.
watch my luce
because i am of u so
i cant care about ya.
bless u girl
thanks again
lots of love and care
your fan
as always
chris
Author's Response: oh chris, I do hope you know how happy you make me! I am so glad you like the way I describe the twins relationship, love is always hard to write for those who have not felt it's utmost depth, but I do my best anyway. I promise to take care of myself still, and I hope you are too. Love you so much chris <3 yours ever, luce
Date: 10/04/08 09:54 pm Title: Liekos
i dig this one sooo much :D
Author's Response: hihi, thanksies ,)
Date: 10/04/08 07:18 pm Title: Liekos
Great :)
Author's Response: thanks ,)
Date: 10/04/08 05:06 am Title: Liekos
Amazing:) But I think that it wants some action :P
Author's Response: action coming up ,) thanks
Date: 10/04/08 02:46 am Title: Liekos
oo0oh! thank goodness that guy hasn't given up finding Tom. D: he must explain to Tom!! and...aww.. Bill knows he is in love with Tom!!! *cue awws* :33 i wonder if Tom knows he is in love with Bill. D: i wodner if he has notice that his changes in like behavior or sleep patterns are weird. 0o;; or maybe he just kind of ignores them :/ well i can't wait for an update and it looks like it is coming super fast!! :DDD THANK YOU! :3 *gives cookies*
Author's Response: oh believe me, he won't give up! both twins have noticed the behavior and sleep thing, but they think it's because of the medication, think I mentioned that a couple of places. lol, I will update today love, hope you'll like it! hugs <3 luce
Date: 10/03/08 11:18 pm Title: Liekos
AMAZING
Author's Response: thank you !
Date: 10/03/08 06:26 pm Title: Liekos
Aaaaaw ^_^
Author's Response: hihi ,)
Date: 10/03/08 04:48 pm Title: Liekos
Oh, I think that was the best chapter so far hun :)
Author's Response: really? oh thank you so much <3
Date: 10/03/08 03:53 pm Title: Liekos
Lucy, this was beautiful, just so very beautiful...
And yet so sad... Maybe that's why it's so beautiful...
I've just realised something... This is not a story about wearwolfs... It is about finding your true love... And him being a wearwolf...
I've been wrapped up in to much cotton and blankets to realise this, I suppose... ;)
You call me almost obsessive about the strange man... It is because You write him so intriguing and mysterious... Mansion... Hmmmm Smiles...
Yes, I am obsessing about him... :)
He should get a story of his own some day... LOL
Tom's fantasy about Bill and the forest... GLXBLT Err...Ahh, HOT, HOT, HOT!!!!!
And I share his feelings for the forest... "where he could just...be."
And I'm sadly not a wearwolf... I love the forest anyway...
I love those small sentences You put in here and there...
“Are you girlfriend and boyfriend?”
Now that really made me laugh out loud...
Bill confessing to his mother about his feelings was... Heartwarming and reassuring...
Every word from "Tom's feet... to ...one soul" Perfection! Absolute Perfection! :)
In any other story, that would have been the perfect ending, but in this one, it is only (!) a chapter-closer...
You are setting the standard higher and higher for every word you write!
And don't be sorry for the late update! When the chapters are THIS good, they are worth waiting for! And I'm agreeing with Mikaiyawa... Take care of yourself first, the story can wait!
Awaiting Sunday with a great smile on my face...
Love
Anders
I want to write so much more...
Author's Response: lol 'It is about finding your true love... And him being a wearwolf' so right, love, sounds scary though xD and if I wrote a story about this man, would he be kidnapping a certain sweedish boy and taking him to his mansion in dear old england ? ,p just kiddin xD aw, I love the forest too. actually, the part about them being naked in the forest, that struck me while I was writing it, with clothes on they just didn't seem to fit. I would so love to see Tom and ill naed in the forest! it feels so good to know that I have people caring about me, and not only about my story ,) I am taking care of myself, don't worry, it's just a little harder than usual lately. sunday is here, and I will update soon ,) have a feeling you might like this next chapter ,) love ya <3 yours luce