*snerk* complete with one of the G's holding him back reminding him that he loves his brother and getting 'I'll love him more after I STRANGLE him' snarled back at them... that's going in the cookies for later fics file...

and given I've liked everything so far I can't see it changing. Looking forward to teh update :)

Author's Response: LOL, oh darling, that would be such a scene xD you give me very nice ideas you know ! lol, gonna go update now ,)

sometimes we forget there's folks out there though... though my twin calls if he even thinks I'm stressing out and reminds me (rolls eyes)

Author's Response: aw, that is so sweet. I think it's important to have people who cares enough to take care of one self, it just feels so nice <3

Hey hon ^^

Back again ^^ This review is probably not so long as before. I think I never gave so long review with anyone else then with you ^^ I'm so happy they made you smile though ^^

I got a question about there relationship don't know If anyone else mentioned it to. But I'm wondering, before Tom got Bitten I'm think they already were extremely close but now I wonder if they would fall for each other because off the fact that Tom got bitten. Did that made sense ^^

Anyway I loved they beginning. The mental image of the boys pressed together, have naked^^ just loved. Poor Tom with the problem though haha
"His groin is on fire, the swollen flesh of his cock straining against his boxers. The head is leaking already, creating a sticky spot in the silk fabric."
Poor Tom, loved how you described it by the way^^
"Of course it wouldn’t have been cool to be aroused together with your twin when you’re sharing a bed."
haha, sure it would be cool Tom ^^ wouldn't that be nice =D
"God, he’s a pig"
Omg haha, I thought that was funny. really dry thought^^

"It all feels so…intense. The warmth of his cock against his palm, the feel of his calloused fingers around his aching shaft. And skin...naked skin against his."
Seems like Tom got some sexual urges^^ Maybe Bill can help (A) [you asked my I think some time ago what it meant not? well it meant Angel, ignore it if you didn't ^^]

"“No…” Tom wants to say something more, wants to act normal. But it’s too hard. Too hard to speak because he’s too hard to say anything."
Well he is hard haha. And Bill was so oblivious to the problem Tom had.Doesn't he seem innocent :-p
He should know ^^
"With the speed of lightning it seems, the cat’s paw shoots out, aiming at a dreadlock that’s hanging in front of her."
O_o and the cat attacked. That was surprising. Not a nice kitten. I'm glad Tom didn't do anything really bad he just had really good reflexes :-p
"A few tears make their way out of his eyes as the realization hit him: he’s scared. After seeing the way Tom had flung the cat through the air, the blind anger that had taken over his brother, Bill cries very quietly. "
Oooh honey don't be scared. Tom didn't harm the cat. All though he lost his temper. (o my talking to the story again=D)
"At the time, Bill hadn’t really minded, the guy was cute. But Tom had punched him anyway, and later Bill had been grateful."
Don't know if I'm reading to much int it but it seem like it was always a bit more then brotherly love :-p Tom seems jealous ^^
"Tom would never, ever hurt him. He had only hurt Kashmir because the cat had been ready to attack him."
exactly, he anly defended himself. I hope that his temper doesn't become worst or something.
"But Tom can, of course he can. He can do whatever he wants if he keeps nuzzling Bill’s neck like that, and he does."
Well it's not a hickey :-p to bad but I really thought it was hot how Tom acted. This really can't be explained as brotherly anymore not that that other stuff could :-p But it seem like an other line crossed.
"“Just stay still, Billa, just stay still.” Tom’s hands are on his hips, holding him down. Bill whimpers in an attempt to cover up a moan when Tom’s tongue just barely laps at his skin. "
Wonder what he's going to do :-p But that was really hot :-p Seems like mating habits are coming (or something) haha =D
"He has to think, has to make sure he knows what to say"
I'm wondering what he's going to say to :-p Hope he gets to say them though.
"Only sit back against the log of the tree and tilt his head up to watch the sky. Somewhere across the ocean, his love is watching the same stars."
Oooh, I feel for the stranger, he misses his love.

There you go second review ^^
I can't wait for the next chapter.
I so love this story. I'm so happy when I see an updated of this ^^
See you soon! (this review is so much longer then I thought, hope you don't mind ^^)

much love

Author's Response: oh my holy cow that's long, LOVE IT !!! you're asking if they're falling for each other because of the bite, right? if so, then all I can tell you is that that question will be answered in one of the upcoming chapters, I promise ! hihi, happy you liked the first scene where Tom is aroused in his brother's bed, it's just so much fun to write stuff like that xD ah, so (A) means angel, well that suits Tom and Bill perfectly don't you think ,p lol, I'd say throwing the cat across the room and slinging her into the wall is pretty bad xD and you're right about Tom being jealous in the past, that was a point I was trying to make ,) haha, you are all fuzzing so much about the hickeys, makes me want to write in another one, maybe I will ,* and yeah, mating habits definitively on the march! makes me smile that you liked the detail about the stranger's wife and his love for her, I thought I'd have to make him something more. I really hope you'll enjoy the next chapter as well, it means a lot to me that you review this, thank you kris ! much love <3

So, so, SO good! I stumbled upon this fic and started reading it and read the first eight chapters in one sitting then got to the bottom of the page and saw no 'Next' button and wanted to cry. They're SO close to meeting I can't wait. This fic is wonderful and I'm hooked, please up-date soon!

Author's Response: oh, I'm so happy you found your way to this fic, and that you review means a lot to me, because this story is one of my favorite babies ,) thank you so much, hope you will like what's to come !

I hate seeing authors stress and work themselves into collapse... I'd rather wait a week or a month for an update than hear one of the folks I follow would up in the hospital...

Author's Response: aw, but I'm better now darling, I don't stress too much and when school starts again, I promise not to work until I drop ,) thank you for caring love, it makes me smile <3

*fluffy*

I've been having the best weekend ever and this update just made it even more so. I haven't stopped smiling all week and now I'm even more fluffy!

The added twin time makes me smile like an idiot... And I'm really interested about The Man. He's very intriguing.

Have fun on your holiday or whatever. I'll be anxiously awaiting more. :)

Author's Response: hihi, it makes me smile to hear you say that ,) lol, The Man will be mentioned more, don't you worry ,p oh and I'm spending my holiday at home writing xD but it's almost over now :'( anyways, thank you for this !

Thank you and thanks to your beta :)

Author's Response: hihi, and thanks to you too !

Just wanna show my appreciation for your work! Oh, and pineapple ;)

Author's Response: aw thanksies darling, you know it means a lot to me <3

This story is starting to get very intense! It seems like everything is building and building and I really can't wait to see what it builds to!

Author's Response: I do hope the thing it builds up to won't dissapoint ,) thanksies, hope you'll like the next

There's so much love in this story! It's saturated with it. Amazing.

Author's Response: hihi <3 and I'm guessing that's a good thing, right ,) love for you darling <3