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Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 2 - McDonald's

She likes Tom; but who can blame her right?

Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Idea

it shocked me to learn that Bill was her best friend, so far so good!

Reviewer: xxxtokiohotelxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/08 03:16 pm Title: Alternate Ending .

i looooooooooved it!!and i loooooooove u for writing an alternate ending!!!it was great!!!!!thank u soo sooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!
=D

Author's Response: no problemm :] thank you SO MUCH for reading . it means alot to mee .

Reviewer: o0BillKaulitz0o Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/08 02:39 pm Title: Alternate Ending .

Poor Landon.
Scar for life.
-LoL- Yes. Very Happy!
Good Story!
...But WTF? Bill bi?
o_O

Author's Response: aha . i had to make bill's life interestingg :P

Reviewer: linjoh27 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/30/08 05:15 am Title: Alternate Ending .

yes.. i'm very happy:D that's the way a story is going to end! ^^,

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/08 11:42 pm Title: Alternate Ending .

YES! danke!

Reviewer: xxxtokiohotelxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/08 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Finale

i think i agree with the previous reviewers....yes..ignoring the 10 years later part is the best think to do...
why did it have to end like that????
it was sooooo sad.....*tears*
anyway,hope you'll write a new story soon.and when u do,i want 2 thinks..
1.be a love story with tom and OFC
2.a HAPPY ending
=D
just kidding,i know that if and when you deside to write another story it will be as awesome as this one.
=D

Author's Response: ahaha . i just wrote an alternate ending . it just has to be accepted . and if you cant wait for it , email me . and i'll send it to youu .

Reviewer: linjoh27 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/29/08 04:57 am Title: Chapter 10 - Finale

yes, i do hate you for not giving the story a happy ending!!!!!!!;D

Reviewer: JessicaLyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/08 12:49 am Title: Chapter 10 - Finale

lol good chapter. I think I'll just ignore the 10 years later part in my mind and just enjoy the part before it and have that as an ending in my head ;D Hope you write something else soon! I'd love to read it :D

Reviewer: xxxtokiohotelxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Busted

o.0
more please!!!!!!!!!!!1
=D =D

Reviewer: megk89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/08 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 8 - School

I really like this story. I totally think you should write more.

Reviewer: linjoh27 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/19/08 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 8 - School

write more!!!:D

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/08 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 8 - School

MORE!

Reviewer: xxxtokiohotelxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/08 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 8 - School

awesome!!!!
plz update soon!!!
:D

Reviewer: Twins of Riot Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/08 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 8 - School

OEEHHH MOre please!!!

Reviewer: xxxtokiohotelxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Surprisingly Disappointing

that wasn't the kind of surprise i had in mind!
but i liiiiiiiiiiked it!!!!!
please update soon!!!
=D

Author's Response: i will ! :D

Reviewer: Twins of Riot Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/08 03:28 am Title: Chapter 7 - Surprisingly Disappointing

:-o!!1 Mia!!! what happend?!?! more please

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Surprisingly Disappointing

MORE! bitte!

Reviewer: tomsgroupie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Surprisingly Disappointing

why does she keep flipping out on him? i don't get it.

Author's Response: because she's confuzzled :Drnlol .rnshe's confused about everything that's going on .rnlike, two days ago, Tom only thought of her as a friend .rnand now he likes her more than that and Mia is still like "What??"rnshe's just confused .rnrni hope that cleared things up.

Reviewer: tomsgroupie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Birthday

sweet! can't wait to see what tom's surprise is!

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