Date: 09/29/08 01:17 am Title: Cassie
more more more! :]
Date: 09/29/08 01:13 am Title: All Around Me
awwwww i love it!
x
Date: 09/26/08 10:37 am Title: Cassie
*cuddles you* there was that enough loving? jk, now seriously i really like your story at first i thought it was going to be a bit mary-sue but its not i really like it, even though its sad and everything i think it has a lot of very god potential
Date: 09/26/08 10:24 am Title: I'm So Sick
holy cow, well first of all i think its good but this is so coincidence, as she was saying the words to herself "I'm so sick, infected with where I live, let me live without this, empty bliss, selfishness, i'm so sick." those ones i had the song playing and right as she said it the song was at that part. im not even joking im serious. but anyways great story i like it so far
Date: 09/08/08 08:05 am Title: Cassie
My! She was efficient: kill almost ALL of her children! That's sinister! But I bet our sweet twins will make a difference, won't they? I need to read more of this!
Date: 09/07/08 06:54 pm Title: Cassie
awee..
thats so sad :(
this story is really great .
continue, please .
Date: 09/06/08 08:15 pm Title: Breathe Today
Mean mom. What's up w/ her? Is there a story? Drinking perhaps?
At least the twins are together all the time. I like that. I also like Bill's thinking. "She's mine" it's sora cute.
Author's Response: Yes, there is a reason behind why she is abusive.rnThanks for the review. I feel loved.
Date: 09/06/08 08:10 pm Title: All Around Me
Good job w/ this chapter too!
So mom's abusive. Is she still there? Where's dad? How did Willie die? Why was he so skinny? Did they get fed?
Date: 09/06/08 06:56 pm Title: Breathe Today
this is sad D=
but you've peaked my interest!
more please?
Date: 09/06/08 05:11 pm Title: Breathe Today
eek I want more. This is gunna be such an amazing story ahhhhh. Please upload another chapter today. Please, please, please *gets on knees to beg* :)
Date: 09/06/08 05:00 pm Title: Breathe Today
yay !
continuee :)
Date: 09/06/08 04:00 pm Title: All Around Me
:D well written, :D maybe you could make them a bit longer? but otherwise very good :D
Author's Response: Omg, I just read your stories. Lol, fangirl moment over!rnrnThanks for the review *gives cookie*
Date: 09/06/08 02:54 pm Title: All Around Me
wow .
lacey's mom's a bitch :P
i want to know what happened to william :(
really really good story .
update soon !
Date: 09/06/08 10:28 am Title: I'm So Sick
this is really good so far.
i want to read more .
update soon ?
and its not crap .
i love it . :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm actually writing it up in Microsoft Word now :)
Date: 09/05/08 11:43 pm Title: I'm So Sick
Wait, this is your first story? Or one of your first?
Jesus! This is really really good! And I can promise you I've read A LOT (seriously, I have no life, I'm like number four or something on the most prolific reviews list, and that's not exactly something to brag about).
Ok, getting to my point. This is really really good for a first attempt. This is better written than some stories I've read by authors that post often.
You don't even realize, this is really good writing (not thinking grammer here b/c I'm oblivious). It flowed well, it was cute, it was funny, it gave the reader a decent idea of personalites/relationships w/o coming out right and saying it (I really hate that, I bashed someone earlier today for it, nicely of course). You gave away enough information to make me happy but not enough to not leave me totally smothered in my pile of questions.
I really want to know more about her. Her past, her life, her family, her friends... all that jazz that you'll probably get to eventually.
As for the twin, I'm super happy. They have a cute relationship (I'm totally partial to twincest but every now and again I find a story where I'm totally happy w/ them just being friends and I think this might be one of them - making my het list 2, maybe 3).
I would like to see how the twins interact together and w/ other people in school.
I'd also like to know a bit more about their life.
Anywho, great job!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. Yeah, I know I skipped over a lot of info on the girl, but I wanted to try and add that in over a period of time... thanks for the advice, now I'm super excited to continue.rnDanke!
Date: 09/05/08 10:31 pm Title: I'm So Sick
:) sounds really good. update please :D
Date: 09/05/08 10:17 pm Title: I'm So Sick
This isn't crap. I like it so far.
Write the next few chapter and you'll see; people will start to review and before you know it, your story will be a hit!
Update soon.
:D