Date: 11/15/08 11:53 pm Title: the chapter that shall always be known as *ten*
You end it there NOOOO!!!!.
So happy you updated it made my day.
Author's Response: ooh yay! i'm glad ii made you day! you jsut made mine with your review, seriously reviews keep my spirits high enough to write. danke sie alles!
Date: 11/15/08 05:30 pm Title: the chapter that shall always be known as *ten*
Awww!! Cute! Didn't really cross my mind until now that they weren't married lol
Author's Response:
I know rigth?! they seemed to have settled into the role of a married couple, so i thought it was time he asked. Although i don't really think Tom is the kind to settle down in real life, he is in my story, or at least he has become so.
thankyou so much for the review! *kiss kiss liek the french do* paarthea
Date: 11/15/08 04:24 pm Title: the chapter that shall always be known as *ten*
::SCREAMS::
OMG!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT!
AMAZING!
SHE SAYS YES....RIGHT?!
Author's Response:
*looks away and fiddles with the cuffs of her hoddie* I dunno.....maybe??? YEs of coures Dani does...but we don't know about Rin yet, cannot decide!!!!
thankl you for the review suga'!
Date: 11/15/08 10:11 am Title: the chapter that shall always be known as *ten*
what a sweet chapter^^
And proposing like that was also very beautiful^^
I really liked the name part xD
Author's Response: OOOh thank you so much! i am very happy that you liked this chapter, i felt you ALL deserved it XD *kiss kiss* like the french do!
Date: 11/15/08 03:57 am Title: the chapter that shall always be known as *ten*
aaaw!!! Tomi is so sweet!!!!!!!!!!! i love that he really made an effort to make the night speacial for her - not only by probosing, but also giving her a break from baby-stuff. Bill seems to have found his girl as well.
Author's Response: yes isn't he? and yes i think Rin is the one for Bill, *my* bill likes to have his ego stroked, and she's perfect for that, the damsle in distress who is strong enough on her own, but still needs her hero. danke so much fur the reivew!
Date: 11/15/08 12:59 am Title: the chapter that shall always be known as *ten*
Ah!!! oh my god!!! That was wonderful!! Sooo worth the wait!
Write fast!
Author's Response: ooh good! i'm glad! yay! Danke zier fur dien review, *kiss kiss* like the french do!
Date: 11/11/08 05:34 am Title: *9*
Brilliant!
its not choppy at all, its cute, serious, funny and very very well written
cant wait for the rest
Date: 11/10/08 05:10 pm Title: Good advice?
"Anika turned out to know a lot about life for someone so young, if thirty-two was still considered young....." pardon me!
im 32 next week!!!!!!!!!!!
yes its still young thankyou!!!!!!
cheeky young wippersnapper
hehe
Author's Response:
I consider 32 as young, but Bill, he has weird ieas about age and such, lol! but once you reach fifty, i'd say calling someone 'old' would be more aplicable. XD! thanks so much for the review! havn't heard from you in a while.
*kiss kiss* like the french do.
Date: 11/10/08 04:58 pm Title: Watching your loved ones crumble
Having lost a baby daughter at 3 months old myself these last few chapters have broken my heart, but i had to read it.
this is so well written and perfectly captured, i hope to god you have never had to deal with this kind of loss yourself and all of it is just beautifully written fiction to you
if not...im sorry
Author's Response:
I personally have not gone throught the heartbreak involved with the loss of a child, and i thank god for that (but i don't have children yet either) yet i do understand the loss of a loved one. my mother has lost a child at birth, and while i did not know the little one, i felt the pain, and seeing my mother go through that was, and still is, very painful.
I'm am heartbroken to hear that you have experianced this pain, no one should ever have to.
Thank you so much for the review, i'm at least glad that you found the writing to be good, in the literal sense this is just a piece of fiction, but it seems that its the heartbreaking stories the resonate the best with us (readers/writers), because no matter how small our own pain (or how large) we can understand some part of it; no one has lived this life without some painful experiances.
i hope you find the rest of the story enjoyable, i am just now getting back to typing out (chapter ten) as my computer has not been working for ther past two weeks. I should have an update in a few days (before the weekend)
*kiss kiss* like the french do
Date: 11/01/08 08:40 pm Title: *9*
:) i missed you!! lol i was wonderign where teh writing had gone :) can't wait for the next chapters
Author's Response:
lol! Aw thanke you hun!
yeah the writing moving slowly, but my computers pretty much kaputt *working off the last few hours of battery here* so i don't really have enough time to actualy put an update out *or finish writing it for that manner, i'll send what i have to GSAA and see if she can finish it off? Hopefully my computer will be back in commission soon!
thank you for the review hun!
*kiss kiss* like the french do
Date: 10/26/08 11:49 pm Title: *9*
I love it!!!
I can't wait to see how tom pampers dani (:
Date: 10/20/08 11:44 pm Title: *9*
i like it, it doesn't seem choppy too me at all. when i read there was going to be bill and dani fluff i was bracing myself for the worst, but it wasn't that annoying (i'm so against bill and dani right now) please update soon XD because i love this fanfiction
Author's Response: lol!!! at first this was supposed to be a bill/tomofc, but i liked tom and Dani too much, then Bill NEEDED a girl, and rin is perfect! lol yes the Bill dani will be VERY SLIGHT, and onesided.
Date: 10/19/08 05:15 pm Title: *9*
i loooooved it!!!!!!
plz-plz-plz update soon!!!
=D
Date: 10/19/08 04:28 pm Title: *9*
maybe the transition between the first bit and the phone call, but it's great anyways. :D thanks for the update
Date: 10/19/08 12:44 pm Title: News: prologue
OMG not expecting that!
Date: 10/19/08 05:54 am Title: *9*
no its very good and i can smell dram bill and dani ij the same area ot oh lol
loved it
update soon
ly
xxxxxxx
Author's Response:
thanks hun! yes drama drama....just wait until the next chapter when tom's plans are revealed....then the DRAMA will ensue!
ily too!
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Date: 10/19/08 01:06 am Title: getting to know you a little bit better
hot!
Author's Response: really? *melts* whoo! thanks for the review suga'!
Date: 10/18/08 09:11 pm Title: *9*
aww, that's so sweet of tom, can't wait to see where he's taking her^^
hmm butterflies eh?
cute chapter:)