Date: 11/13/08 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Eric's Story
what the fuck...
this is horrible!
I mean, not your writing or anything, but the story..oh my god!
Author's Response: Indeed. *eg*
Date: 09/27/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Eric's Story
Awwwww poor little boy =[
Author's Response: I know! ;_;
Date: 09/19/08 02:07 am Title: Chapter 5 - Eric's Story
awwwwwww T_T thats sad now i hope Bill and Tom will be ok and the G's to pls write more :)
Author's Response: I know! I got very emotional when I wrote 'Eric's Story'. As for the band, you'll just have to wait and see. Most of the next chapter is done, just trying to work on a scene with two people. Its proving a bit...difficult. Anyway, stay tuned!
Date: 09/17/08 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Eric's Story
Wow. One of my favorite movies and my favorite band combined. I never thought that would be possible. Ha! You proved me wrong. You are a genious! I must admit, that last chapter was so sad. I'm definately looking forward to reading more. :)
Author's Response: Glad your liking it so far! =) I hope to have an update by this weekend. Sorry I don't have much time atm to write during the week with my new job. About Eric's story, I have to admit, that chapter made me teary eyed when I wrote it. More will come!
Date: 09/15/08 09:16 am Title: Prelude Part 1 The Phone Call
Well, for me (or maybe it's just my computer), the end of the chapter always repeats itself...like the last paragraphs would be there again after I just read them...
Author's Response: *Glares at website* Ok, should me fixed now...
Date: 09/14/08 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Eric's Story
i *love* that someone is doing a tokio hotel zombie fic XD and so far it's really good! just don't kill off georg and gustav, cause then the twins will be all alone, running for their lives and that just makes me too sad...
Author's Response: Glad your enjoying the story. Meanwhile, its clearly stated that there will be at least one character death...*hugs*
Date: 09/14/08 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Eric's Story
omg ..
poor little kid ! :(
Author's Response: I know! I feel so bad every time I read that.
Date: 09/13/08 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Eric's Story
I just read chapter 4 and 5. The 4th was great, and for some reason, this sentence cracked me up :/
"They all peeped out the window blinds and saw the infected running out of the ally way. It stopped in the middle of the street and turned from one direction to the next. After a moment it cried out and ran the opposite way."
o_o
...
I found that strangely funny.
...Anyway... A few nights ago I had a dream like the movie 28 days later. I was being chased by the infected. It was SO freaky! O_O !!! I hate this movie now... I stabbed someone in the back and then in the neck with a knife! It was such a bad nightmare...
About chapter 5... I guess it wass all the POV of a little boy?
I'm sad you won't be able to update soon :( But I'll wait. Good luck in work! ^_____-
xxx
Author's Response: Hmm maybe 'cried out' wasn't the right words XD That dream you had sounds scary *hugs* Sorry. Those movies are scary, to me at least. I can see this story playing out in my head, like a movie, but putting it into words is different than putting it into a movie, much more difficult, ya know? XD And yes, Chapter 5 was the PoV of Eric, the little boy. And thank you for the 'good luck'! =) I should have one more chapter up by Monday...
Date: 09/13/08 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Eric's Story
*huffs* I should be very mad at you. I find an email saying you upadted in my inbox and that has absolutely nothing to do with Tokio Hotel. Or Bill. Or Tom.
And yet, it wasn't such a waste of time. Not everyone has seen 28 Days/Weeks Later. So this was not only acting as a Filler, but an Informant.
Damn me. Good chapter, you can't help but feel sorry for the poor kid, erm, Eric. My only question: "What happened to Sprinkles?!"
Wait... Will Bill find her? XD That'd be funny. I can see it now...
Tom: Bill! Where'd you get that cat?!
Bill: ... I found it?
Hah. Well, much lurve to you and the Eric-child. And the kitty. Yess.... Love the kitty.
Author's Response: Yes I know it wasn't a Bill and Tom/TH chapter, but it is related and I'm glad you realized that. And who knows what will happen to Sprinkles! Meanwhile, I should have the next chapter up tomorrow or Monday.
Date: 09/13/08 07:29 am Title: Chapter 4 - East 59th Street Bridge
oohh !
please keep going !
this story is greatt :)
omg now i want frosted flakes for a reason :P
Author's Response: Thank you! And I will keep going because when I get good reviews it motivates me to keep going! =) *hands you a bowl of frosted flakes*
Date: 09/12/08 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 4 - East 59th Street Bridge
Don't worry!! I'll wait as much as necessary!! I really love this fic..it always keeps me on the EDGE!! btw, I'm glad to see a guy around here :D It's very freaking Cool!! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, hope you liked the latest chapter. I actually have another one ready to post but I think I'll wait till Sunday or Monday. And glad you like seeing a guy around here, I think I'm one of two =O Anyway, Bill and Tom are hotness and I love Tokio Hotel's music!
Date: 09/12/08 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 4 - East 59th Street Bridge
Much better chapter. You're doinga great job with this story. I just can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^^
Date: 09/12/08 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 4 - East 59th Street Bridge
Ahh they got out of that.. =| thank god. Haha Georg cook? =P
Are we gonna being seeing anymore Bill and Tom moments those are so cute ^.^
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Yes, there will be a Bill/Tom moment coming up soon.
Date: 09/10/08 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Outside
This is getting better! I love this thing! Update soon!!
Author's Response: ^^ Thanks, you all are making me feel really good about writing this fic!
Date: 09/10/08 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Outside
I loooove this fic
Author's Response: Someone loves my fic? YAY! ^^
Date: 09/10/08 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Outside
Gosh, things are really starting to get bad now. I enjoyed this chapter. I think you've actually managed to create tension, and that's not easy to do when writing.
I don't feel sorry for Gustav really, lol. He shouldn't have been so snappy with poor Bill!
Looking foward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Trying to make the reader feel what the writer is is trying to portray is always a challenge.rnYah Gustav is being a meanie!rnThank you for your review!rnrn
Date: 09/10/08 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Outside
Thank you for the action, lol.
I liked the chapter, though I think Tom is being too rough for Gustav ^__-
And gosh, this is like a life and death situation and Tom's thinking about porn -_-
Author's Response: Your welcome! XD And about Tom...he's like 16 and a boy=raging hormones XD
Date: 09/10/08 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Outside
Couple of mistakes, nothing too major. In botht he first chapter and the fourth or fifth, you posted the same text twice. Kind of annoying. You should probably try to fix that.
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. Fixed.
Date: 09/10/08 06:44 pm Title: Prelude Part 1 The Phone Call
Each chapter is posted twice, take a look at chapter one and two, you have the text posted twice.
Author's Response: Ok fixed.
Date: 09/10/08 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Outside
Uh oh...This isnt good. They better get somewhere safe! and fast!
haha I love Bills comment about the "hide here" =P
Author's Response: I thought it was amusing too! ^^