Date: 02/22/09 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well, personally I thought that Tom and Bill wouldn't get along. You know xD How Bill's a sissy and all. But I wonder what Bills up to...*nudge nudge wink wink*
Whats his so called' Masterplan'????
Date: 09/09/08 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Tom doesn't waste time, does he?
xDDD
Author's Response: Nope! xD!
Date: 09/07/08 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
keep it going its ok ill waste time with it
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 09/03/08 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the plot. And I think you should continue ;)
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 09/03/08 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh no poor bb
Author's Response: I know, but things will get better! :D
Date: 09/02/08 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm. This sounds really interesting. I did, however, get a bit thrown off for a second =] When switching over from Tom's situation to Bill's, there should be some division. Like, a bold line separating them, or a symbol of some sort.
'He would get kicked out. When Tom Trumper made up his mind on something, damn it he would keep at it until it was done.'
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The Camp Kollin’s brochure fell from the perfectly manicured hand of Bill Kaulitz to the floor of the family’s home....etc.
Kinda like that =] So far, though, it's great! I can't wait to see where it goes!! Update soon, please!
Author's Response:
So sorry about that. I did mean to make it somewhat more obvious, but it slipped my mind when I went to post it.
Thank you!
Date: 09/02/08 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
continue!=D
Author's Response: Your wish is my command!