Date: 09/02/08 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that's so cute Tink...
I adore that song, and this story really did it justice.
It was sweet, and angsty and I adored the ending; it was simple but effective and not overly fluffy, just right.
For some reason, I really liked the analogy with the ants... Not sure why, lol. And the part with Bill sitting on the bench, lovely descriptions! (As always!)
Tom was really sweet, too. And I'm glad that Bill could change...
Friends are really very important! :) *hugs*
Date: 09/02/08 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Eeeeee! You're writing here again! XD
You better stay *squinty eyes*
Oh, ANDI!!! (L)(L)(L)
I've never read something like this, where Bill's angsty over his best friend, not with his 'boyfriend' even when he still has one
I liked it, even though, I should have been wrote in to fuck Andi sensless, even just for one line
I saw the title and though, oh fuck. Atem. I'm gonna be crying. But I didn't, and I'm so thankful.
I simply adore how I can recognise you in your writing, like, it comes across as coming from you, not just being like the others.
I feel all guhhh after reading this, it was so depressing, but not, in a sense, if you get me. Fuck I hope you do.
This took me forever to read, either the phone rang, or someone on msn talked, and I was just like, nor!
Tinkkk, you better post more stuff on here again, please.
I'm gonna be nice and not spellcheck or go through it, so you can have a giggle at my mistakes.