Date: 10/04/08 01:01 pm Title: I love you
Great chapter, i think you should just go straight to Tom and Nao.
and i wanna no whats wrong with Nao.
Date: 10/04/08 12:45 pm Title: The Mistake
i love the plot so far and i love Nao's character. Thanks for putting the song in. I listened to it and i really love it. Cant wait to read more! =D
Date: 10/04/08 12:36 pm Title: I love you
Tom and Nao, I want to go straight to that please. Really good story, I can't wait for the rest. It makes meh happeh everytime I see that you post a new chapter. *grins and hugs*
Date: 10/03/08 03:58 pm Title: Suicidal Past
More? This is so one of the best stories, writen!EVER!
Author's Response: OMG thank you, thats really nice
Date: 10/03/08 03:51 pm Title: Suicidal Past
noooooo please no more grinch! We lurve you and your writing!!!! Oh and see what your kids would look like thing, adorable!
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 10/03/08 02:48 pm Title: Suicidal Past
Hahaha, don't want the Grinch to come back would we? LOL, this is great. I really love it. You're amazing. :-D!!
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 10/03/08 02:46 pm Title: Suicidal Past
i looooooooooooooooved it!!!!
please update soon!!!!
=D
Date: 09/29/08 02:38 pm Title: Apology #2
awwwwwww i loved the part when bill was yelling i tom..i loved it because it was so...sweet,that bill wrote don't jump for tom etc...anyway,i can't wait to read the next chapter,please update soon!!!
Date: 09/29/08 02:28 am Title: Apology #2
omg no please don't go on strike! I love this story too much to let you do that, soooi how many times can I review this and they'll all count???? LOL
Great chapter I fell out of my chair when tom fell and hit my head pretty hard lmao so worth it though : )
Author's Response: YES i will go on a writers strike...lol, nah. One review is fine. I'm hapy you like this story.rnOMG i hope you okay....i'm gonna feel bad if my story cause you to have a puncture wound in your head.
Date: 09/28/08 09:13 pm Title: Apology #2
LOL, great chapter! I can't wait for the rest. It's really good. :-D
Date: 09/28/08 08:52 pm Title: Apology #2
ahhh! great chapter xD im glad he didnt die :3
Date: 09/28/08 04:54 pm Title: Apology #2
AH! You scared me there for a minute!
MORE BITTE!
Date: 09/28/08 04:30 pm Title: Apology #2
!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm soooooo HAPPY right now!!!!!!^^D
You let Nao AND Tom live!!!!!! I think I'm about to cry of happines^^')
Please update soon, and let me know how it goes on with the love bids;)
And who is that Detective Lacross guy?? Is he good or bad???
Update soon and let me know, okay hun^-^)
Date: 09/28/08 03:27 pm Title: Apology #2
Oh phew... they both didnt die..
Date: 09/28/08 01:26 pm Title: Apology #2
BILL BILL BILL I NEW I LOVED HIM FOR A GOOD REASON
YAHHHHHHHH
BILL SAVED TOMI
PLZ WRITE MORE
Date: 09/28/08 12:32 pm Title: Apology #2
Whos Detective Lacross? do you play field hockey, because im on the team, but that's a funny name for a person though! Anyway, still liking the story, keep writing please!
Author's Response: Nope i don't play. that name just popped into my head.
Date: 09/28/08 12:12 pm Title: Apology #2
lol aw im glad tom didnt jump. hha
Date: 09/28/08 11:54 am Title: Broken Promise
i cried while reading this, even for the Spring Nicht video i cried, i hape it ends well though; if it doesn't its still a good story!
Date: 09/28/08 11:52 am Title: Apology #2
we almost weren't friends right there in the middle of that either hehe. Good chapter. I'm glad to see that everyone made it okay. But now you're throwing in a detective... I'm worried. lol