Date: 12/27/07 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!NOOOOOOOOO! BILL CANT BE DEAD!!!!!!I'M GONNA CRY!I'M GONNA CRY!IM GONNA CRY!I GONNA CRY!I'M...CRYING!!!!!OMG!THIS IS THE SADEST STORY EVER! PLEASE WRITE MORE! DON'T MAKE BILL DIE MAKE THE STORY LIKE THE MOVIE "THE INVISIBLE" PLEASE DON'T MAKE BILL BE DEAD HE HAS TO BE ALIVE SOMWHERE! OR MAKE TOM BE IN A COMA WHERE HE IS HAVING A REALLY BAD DREAM! PLEASE DON'T MAKE BILL BE DEAD!AND DON'T MAKE TOM SEE DEAD PEOPLE CAUSE THAT WOULD BE SAD AND THAT WOULD MEAN BILL IS DEAD AND HE CANT BE DEAD!!!!PLEASE READ THIS!!!!!
P.S.YOU SPELL 'SANITARY' LIKE 'CEMETARY' AND YOU SPELLED BILL WRONG SOME WHERE U SPELLED IT 'BILLA'.
Author's Response: Woah xD lol. I'm sorry, but this is a one-shot and Bill is dead ;)Well, maybe I spelled that word wrong, but I wrote Billa on purpose... it's kinda a nickname. rnrnThanks for the review ^^
Date: 12/26/07 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, it was beautiful!
It made me cry!
You always write so realistically and great!
I Loved it!
Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks a lot! I'm really glad you like it.
Date: 12/10/07 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so amazingly beautiful! made me cry as hell! A really good story, different from all the others.
Some few spelling errors, but in the whole picture, really good!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! It means alot that you think it's different ^^ Yeah, I'm working on my spelling -.- It's getting better... I hope.
Date: 12/01/07 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
this chapter....only one thing to say: WOW, beautiful chapter, i loved it
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :D
Date: 11/07/07 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
You made me cry. For real. I love this song, so much, and it always make's me cry when I watch Bill sing this to Tom.
I can actually see this happening, Tom pretending Bill is still alive to protect himself. They just seem to love each other so much, it's so cute!
So yeah, great story and I love that you had this song in it. = )
(English is not my first language, but I hope you can understand me anyway)
Author's Response: I love reviews like this *hug* I'm so sorry it made you cry, but thanks for the compliments! I really appreciate it. I love the song too, I love it when Bill sings it to Tom. Shame that Tom seems more busy with his guitar -.-rnrnPft, what're you talking about? Your english is great!
Date: 11/05/07 02:41 am Title: Chapter 1
omg that is soooo sad..i gasped when i saw the choice of song you chose 'in die nacht'..so appropiate..it was so sad!
Author's Response: *grins* Thanks alot!! Yeah, I thought that song would be appropriate too ^^
Date: 11/04/07 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my god its a good story but it made me cry
id be so scared if bill died
Author's Response: Aw *hugs* Thanks a lot!rnYeah, I'd be very scared too, and sad!! :(
Date: 11/04/07 11:46 am Title: Chapter 1
it's cooolll...i like it....
Author's Response: Danke! ^-^
Date: 11/04/07 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh god, i´m crying, and i can´t see the letters so i can´t write a proper review, but i liked it, really liked it! :)
Author's Response: I'm so sorry I made you cry! *hug* But it was supposed to be sad, so thanks!!
Date: 11/04/07 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1
hehe anytime kid :D
Author's Response: ^_^
Date: 11/04/07 10:40 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG that's so sad :(
poor Bill, poor tom :(
Author's Response: Sad was what I was going for, so thanks ! :)