Date: 11/25/08 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Yeah for me being the 100th reviewer!
Man, this story gets more intense every chapter. Demon and Cocoon? And the little slashiness between them? Crazy stuff.
Author's Response: lol :) Thanks!
Date: 11/25/08 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Eight
omg please update as soon as possible this is so awesome
Author's Response: Thanks, I will try to update this weekend.
Date: 11/23/08 04:44 pm Title: Chapter Seven
well u are doing a good job haha,
seeequeeel seeequeeel seeequeeel! XD
okay... let me think about it... here my hypotesis: Tom in fact is really tom the gutarrist and has some trouble when he dreams and thinks about all that of being crazy? or... Bill is some kind of spirits thant lives in Tom... or... fuck IDFK hahaha i'll wait like a good gril to see what you write next! but please write soon cuz my finals exams are starting D:
Date: 11/22/08 02:48 pm Title: Chapter Seven
so wait was the dream reality and reality's a hallucination? or is the dream actually a dream and reality's still reality. You have very much confused me. i like it!
Author's Response: Well, you have one of those concepts spot on, but I am not saying which one. I am glad you like it. Thanks!
Date: 11/22/08 10:23 am Title: Chapter Seven
I'm slightly confused...
Does this mean it's ending soon? D:
Please don't make it end! T_T
I loves it too much!
xxx
Author's Response: Don't worry there are still about 8 to 10 chapters more before this one will end. So it won't be too soon. Thanks! I am glad you like it. :)
Date: 11/21/08 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Seven
*sighs* you have no idea how much i love your story right now... it seems like the only one being updated here with a non-reoccuring plot and keeps me captivated. :3 Updates soon? *hopes*
Author's Response: Awe! Thanks. I will try to update next week on my fall break. I am glade you like it. I hope you come back for more, thanks again!
Date: 11/21/08 11:11 am Title: Chapter Seven
the one with the sequel...im still following, mostly, but get cunfuddled
Author's Response: don't worry you are not the only confuddled one:) Thanks.
Date: 11/20/08 09:30 am Title: Chapter Seven
Okay, first review from me. I just read all the chappies and I can utterly say that I'm so very much confused.
But it's a really great story you have started! I actually know a boy who is like Andreas. He's in a mental institution or something. I visit him from time to time and when Dean(The angry personallity) comes out, I get scared cuz he throw things and such, and then when I say something about his family, Kasper(My friend in the mental thingy) Will be back to me! It's actually kind of freaky how they do that.
You describe everything so well. That's amazing how you do that.
Please continue? I would like to know what Bill is meaning...
Date: 11/20/08 09:14 am Title: Chapter Seven
Wow. This is fascinating and painful in the sweetest way possible.
Since Bill is technically and extension of Tom's psyche, then Tom knows that its not real, but maybe he doesn't want to admit it to himself? I think that might be what's going on.
How did Bill die? I am either being an air head and forgetting or you haven't told us yet.
I also like how you use the term "handlers" for the gaurds/nurses- whatever they're called in the business world! ^_^ Whether you've done this on purpose or not it gives the whole setting a zoo-like feel. As if the patients are considered as little more than animals. I like it!! ^_^
Author's Response: Your right about one of the Bills. I surprised people aren't considering that there may be two Bills (which one is the real one?). Oh well, I will make it all make sense the further we dive into the story. For now I am going to let you guys continue to guess what is going on. Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/19/08 07:38 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
And yeah, I'm confused. Is Tom being sick the actual hallucination and that's why Georg was in his "dream" which is the actual reality?
Date: 11/19/08 07:31 pm Title: Chapter Seven
go with the one with a sequel!
i will love you forever...
Date: 11/19/08 05:27 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Continue with the ending that leads to a sequel. I am slightly confused about Bill.
Date: 11/19/08 05:17 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I want the sequel!!
I wanna know if it's real or not...
Please update soon!
Date: 11/19/08 05:14 pm Title: Chapter Seven
oh god im so upset there is no nxt button! agh! i need more, but take your time i'm willing to wait this is perfect.
Date: 11/19/08 04:30 pm Title: Chapter Seven
i loved it!!!!!
i want a seguel!!!! plz????
plz update soon!!!
=D
Date: 11/19/08 04:13 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Damn you.
Author's Response: Is that a good 'Damn you' or a bad one? Lol, thanks anyway.
Date: 11/19/08 04:05 pm Title: Chapter Seven
OMG! i suggest A...no B...no back to A...no...ACK! i cant choose! hurry and update!!!!
Author's Response: lol, thanks.
Date: 11/19/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Ah that's a toughy. I'd like BOTH!
Author's Response: lol, death and a sequel? That would be hard one to do, considering who I would be killing off (not Tom) would have to be in the sequel for it to work. Thanks.
Date: 11/19/08 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Seven
i fucking love this update
Author's Response: thanks.
Date: 11/18/08 04:15 pm Title: Chapter Six
well people get really busy sometimes, but don't worry! I love the way Tom is getting interested in Andreas, since he had never seen another one like him, maybe they together can help each other to control their personalities no? that would be nice you know?! anyway I like it a lot and I hope soon or later I'll be able to remeber all the names and atitudes of all their personalities, and btw how many personalities Andreas has apart from Michy?
Author's Response: Thanks. I have not decided how many he will have yet. I am making Andereas personalities a surprise even for myself. I have decided to write them on the spot.