Date: 09/01/08 04:24 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh my God...
this is amazing.
Please continue! *worships whatever plot bunne gave you this idea* This will be so great! I'm excited to see where you take it!
All i can recommend is working a bit more on descriptions. (characters, emotions, scenes, ect.) That way us lucky readers can crawl under the story's skin!
You're writing in third person, which makes that exceptionally easy and sun to do! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks, I will make sure to add more of those things in the next chapter.
Date: 09/01/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter One
Continue. No question.
Everyone should read this. This is amazing.
Please update soon!
xx
Author's Response: awwwe...Thanks.
Date: 09/01/08 03:53 pm Title: Chapter One
i love that movie!!..lol..and i like ur story=D continue the way it is=)))
Author's Response: It is a really good movie. Thanks.
Date: 09/01/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter One
This is really, really good so far. You absolutely should continue.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/01/08 02:52 pm Title: Prologue
*squeaks*
This looks like it'll be good! Keep it up! I can't wait for the first chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Date: 09/01/08 02:12 pm Title: Prologue
This looks....interesting
ill defenetly be following along
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& remember
Author's Response: Thanks!