Date: 10/22/08 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Five
welll i love it but trust me i got no theory here! it's soo hmm how could i say it... open? well that's not the word, but trust i feel you can play with the story so much, i like the mistery and the way poor tomi changes of presonalities, it's a really good story, keep it up please!
Author's Response: I think open is the right word, you mean that it can any amounts of twists and turns at this point in the story. Danke for the review, I love hearing people's opinion on the story.
Date: 10/20/08 04:58 pm Title: Chapter Five
i loooooooved it!!!!!
plz udpate soon!!!!
=D
Date: 10/20/08 03:00 pm Title: Chapter Five
wow ^_^
more!
I love this, I really want to see where it's going :]
Author's Response: Danke.
Date: 10/20/08 10:15 am Title: Chapter Five
oooooo i like it! cant wait for you to post again soon!
Author's Response: cool, thank you.
Date: 10/19/08 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Five
I am so thoroughly confused. I have NO CLUE. Victory and Vicky are the same right? And what is Cacoon trying to do again? WTF did bill want to say.Georg? I don't even WANT to think about Georg. But what about Gustav? I want to know what he's like, and what he was created for... You have my mind twisted in some big knot, and only you have the power to get it out, so HELP!!!
Author's Response: lol, okay. I will try to un-tie your knot. Vicky and Victory are within the same personality, but are different from each other. A mutiple can have personalites that come in groups of people, not just one. Vicky and Vicktory together make Victoria, when they are apart they are twins, the drug-addict(vicktory)and the sex-addict(vicky). Do you get what I mean so far?
I am not going to tell you what Bill wanted to say, you the readers won't find out until towards the end of this story.
In some (almost all)mutiples they will have personalites who hate them, for different reasons or none at all. Georg hates Tom because when he comes out people don't see him, Georg, they see Tom. He wants to look on the outside like he sees himself in the reflections, he wants his own body. He feels trapped inside Tom's.
Gustav, will be in the next chapter along with Andreas and you will get to see/understand why Gustav is there.
Date: 10/19/08 09:17 pm Title: Prologue
ja ^^ I finished Hidden Scars >.> I think... lol and to make that special umlaut for "u", you would have to go into control settings and set the keys so that you can change the language of the keyboard. I would explain it to you ._. but it's hard without screen shots lol. And so... well, when you use the "ü" it makes a completely different sound than just "u" so then it's just Kaulitz... it would be kinda awkward to say O.o Kaülitz... lol I tried saying it and it just doesn't really >.> fit because then the "ü" actually makes a sort of "oo/ew" sound ._. kinda... But that's not your fault =P so ja ^^ I really love this story. It's very different ;)
Author's Response: Ah, thanks. Good to know that.
Date: 10/19/08 06:46 pm Title: Chapter Five
oh my!!!1 other than the beginning i fucking loved this whole chapter!!!! i wanna know what bill was going to say god damn you!!
Author's Response: Lol, love you too.
Date: 10/19/08 06:20 pm Title: Chapter Five
D: I'm so disappointed how there's no next button ;__; I went to click it, but it wasn't theeeeeerrrrrreee... I really like how this story is going though O.O I'm very intrigued... and so ._. I wonder what the session with Mrs. Kaulitz is gonna go... and I have a question O: why do you use the "ü" in Kaulitz? It was just a thought ._.
Author's Response: I use that type of "u" because I think I was at a site or something that was about the twins and I saw that, that was how their last name was spelt. So I spelt it like that from then on. Should I not spell it like that? Also, I don't know the shortcut to make that "u" on the keybroad, could you tell me how? Thanks for the reviews. I am glad you like it. Hidden Scars is also finished.
Date: 10/19/08 05:51 pm Title: Prologue
O_O wow... this is original, fishie likie :) *goes to read more*
Date: 10/19/08 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Five
I love to do that, but I'm always wrong :P
This is great, and why is Mrs. Kaulitz so upset that she's there, you'd think she would be interested in her sons progress. Hmmm......
Update soon please!
Date: 10/19/08 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Five
nice work! ^_^ i have no idea how this will end, but i realyl want to know!!
Mrs Kaulitz? ooooohh....... the plot thickens!
i really adore this story because its original! i mean ,there's no air of predictability to it! ^_^ amazing!
Author's Response: Awe, thank you. I love when people think my stories are original.
Date: 10/19/08 01:02 pm Title: Chapter Four
I really love this story and the logic of what the personalities are saying.
*Shoves story into favourites* x
Date: 10/15/08 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Four
hmm, this story is interesting...i like it. im excided for the chapters to come.
Date: 10/07/08 07:59 am Title: Chapter Four
I love this story so much. It's so interesting and I'm sure it's complex to write. Or it would be for me anyway, lol.
Author's Response: thanks. It is a little hard to write, but I have an outline for almost all the chapters, so I don't go off track.
Date: 10/06/08 02:00 am Title: Chapter Four
i find this story really interesting!!! plz keep going!
Author's Response: Danke.
Date: 10/05/08 10:26 pm Title: Chapter Four
hahaha tom is like bill at the end!!! hahaha i truly like this one is so freaking amazing n misterious!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/05/08 07:28 pm Title: Chapter Four
I love your stories. I personally interested in psychology and I really want to know how things will unfold. It's a great story!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I am thinking about going into psychology for my second degree and masters.
Date: 10/05/08 06:59 pm Title: Chapter Four
Sweet, I'm looking forward to seeing inside Tom's mind. I can't wait to meet the rest of the personalities.
Good chapter, update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, I am looking forward to writing those chapters.
Date: 10/05/08 05:54 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oooh...interesting
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/05/08 04:57 pm Title: Chapter Four
I almoust can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
Please update soon, okay hunny??^-^)
Author's Response: Thanks. I will try.